Open Mic: Mic Machine... (feedback plz)

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    Posted: 24 March 2010 at 7:32am


Bars like fort knox, cuz they shine and priceless
Gettin brain from ya dime and the behind's the nicest
Rewind time after time cause the rhymes i'm tite wit
Ya'll crappy so keep a tally of the lines I might flip
The grind I likes it, nickel 9 on my hip
An u can catch a bullet pushin pine on my strip
I deliver up n down I95 in nice whips
Hoes on my dick jumpin off an on like light switch
Bust a couple a nuts by the time the night ends
Try to clash, come up last, bitch cuz I'm a titan
Matter fact Zeus, skilz shine bright like lightnin
Got pussies like "Who $nooz?! I aint tryin to fight him"
Niggaz flows is dull while my rhymes enlighten
Cuz I practice my craft and take time when writin
I'm a giant, gotchu suckas cryin n hidin
Tremble down at my feet or ya spine I might bend
In unorthodox positions, Smoke the lime my mind spins
Ya whole team is 'cunts', yall aint guys ya 'high-men'*
Eat mcs for dinner, every night I dine in
Hoes like 'outdoor movies' every night I 'drive-in'
I'll be gettin it in till the time my life ends
Stick to the g-code, an lay it on the line for my men

easy.......
*-hymen



Edited by $n00z - 24 March 2010 at 8:17am
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Nice punches
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thanks mane..... up!
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ya nice punches and nice flow... overall, dope stuff. 
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Very good. The lines and rhymes were tight, even if the content was a little more gangsta than I like.
Insert something rappy here
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thanx for the feed yall!
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ahhh was a desent read... its a very nice verse over all but i have seen better punches. keep dropping.. was a good read.
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