Open Mic: [OM King] Moderate Optometrist

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    Posted: 08 June 2016 at 6:46am
My flows are ruder, quick to spring back like a loaded ruger
Slow the rumors, cuz there's never been a pac that arose from Cuba
Them penguins are lame that's the end result
Yall couldn't see the picture if I blemished art
Stalin'll dead em all, make em give they friends a call
But I'll purge wit words when I bend the law
I'll lend my bars to them mods and then we brawl
But they couldn't see my panel like my fenders off
I'm godly now, got no enemies, I proudly prowl
Into every home and closet until I see that scottys out
I rip it quick so pay attention I flip it sick no lame aggression
Wit this shit foes gain a lesson, in this spit, propanes the essence
it's no problem in me solving a nigmas
Cuz I rape u neek and spray my art on your in laws
The law, a fanatic maneuver, dismantled the movement
But he still acts like American pussy has been banned from the Cuba.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Kiki Spirez Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 June 2016 at 11:27pm
Liked this Stal. Killing them with smooth flow and delivery. Whilst it wasn't too direct, I did like the opener and Pac/Cuba play. Made me laugh, one of hip hop's more hilarious myths, and well used.
 
Keep up.
 
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Stalin my dude that opener was funny as hell.  The flow was really compact but pretty much butter smooth.  i really liked how smooth that panel line was.  That scotty line was pretty comical as well.  that nigma in laws was hard to find the flow but the most vicious line of them all.  well it tie for your closing line actually.  I loved those parts.  Dope to see you dropping stalin...good smooth piece rite here

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote levy420 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 June 2016 at 4:05pm
This was dope stal loved the opening Cuba line shit was funny as fuck but this was my favorite bar

I rip it quick so pay attention I flip it sick no lame aggression
Wit this shit foes gain a lesson, in this spit, propanes the essence

Solid diss drop here good shit stay up
I'll explode at the drop of a dime like proximity mines
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Thanks for the feed guys. Just a quick thing I wrote when I seen the topic posted
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