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Stalin
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Topic: [OM King] Moderate OptometristPosted: 08 June 2016 at 6:46am |
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My flows are ruder, quick to spring back like a loaded ruger
Slow the rumors, cuz there's never been a pac that arose from Cuba Them penguins are lame that's the end result Yall couldn't see the picture if I blemished art Stalin'll dead em all, make em give they friends a call But I'll purge wit words when I bend the law I'll lend my bars to them mods and then we brawl But they couldn't see my panel like my fenders off I'm godly now, got no enemies, I proudly prowl Into every home and closet until I see that scottys out I rip it quick so pay attention I flip it sick no lame aggression Wit this shit foes gain a lesson, in this spit, propanes the essence it's no problem in me solving a nigmas Cuz I rape u neek and spray my art on your in laws The law, a fanatic maneuver, dismantled the movement But he still acts like American pussy has been banned from the Cuba. |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 08 June 2016 at 11:27pm |
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Liked this Stal. Killing them with smooth flow and delivery. Whilst it wasn't too direct, I did like the opener and Pac/Cuba play. Made me laugh, one of hip hop's more hilarious myths, and well used.
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 12:03am |
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Stalin my dude that opener was funny as hell. The flow was really compact but pretty much butter smooth. i really liked how smooth that panel line was. That scotty line was pretty comical as well. that nigma in laws was hard to find the flow but the most vicious line of them all. well it tie for your closing line actually. I loved those parts. Dope to see you dropping stalin...good smooth piece rite here
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 4:05pm |
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This was dope stal loved the opening Cuba line shit was funny as fuck but this was my favorite bar
I rip it quick so pay attention I flip it sick no lame aggression Wit this shit foes gain a lesson, in this spit, propanes the essence Solid diss drop here good shit stay up |
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Stalin
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Posted: 18 June 2016 at 9:19pm |
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Thanks for the feed guys. Just a quick thing I wrote when I seen the topic posted
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