Open Mic: No Cure For Misanthropy

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   yo

my time is spent hell bent on embellishing the snail’s scent
curtailing the entrails of burning gelatin trails that went
slowly scraping the pavement to mate with the park bench
the hard stench of booze parked in the empty compartments
hearts content on my side of the line trekking the border
pacing torpor thoughts in basement levels of pecking orders
flecking mortar from the floor boards of my textile dreams
my style seems a more orientated accord to exile screams
i’m Gentile, bent smile piled on this latch I stapled shut
to hush the naked four quarter moon phases of fucking – up
luck is just a struck match magically lit inside a wind storm
my cigarette still sits with an unburnt tip on a grin formed
get-it? Flicked habits from my fingers but habits tend to stick
as I kick cans down the path to unmask the habituates
so if you’re the pathetic kid that feels sorry for me breathing
put a dollar on my bar tab and well just regard it Even-Steven
proceed to bleeding, exceed what succeeded heathens
i’m leaving this world believing the game was never worth beating
cheat Code Keyed In, easy mode, speak you overachiever
you seek answers to this road I chose while I coax my own believers
neither weaker than the other, just debate the preferences
amalgamate the facts then state your belated references
confessions end. I’ll never mend these exponential damages
you’d hemorrhage non-sense trying to bandage my pretentiousness
relentless in my conquest to cut ties or bare the knots
or just bury my face in thought like disappearing aeronauts
lost. if meaning lost is being in the middle of no-where,
with no cares.
there is no cure for misanthropy except for coke sizzling my nose hairs

so there

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rhetorical Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 14 February 2014 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 809 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote rhetorical Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: No Cure For Misanthropy Posted: 17 January 2023 at 4:03am
	yo my time is spent hell bent on embellishing the snail’s scent curtailing the entrails of burning gelatin trails that went slowly scraping the pavement to mate with the park bench the hard stench of booze parked in the empty compartments hearts content on my side of the line trekking the border pacing torpor thoughts in basement levels of pecking orders flecking mortar from the floor boards of my textile dreams my style seems a more orientated accord to exile screams i’m Gentile, bent smile piled on this latch I stapled shut to hush the naked four quarter moon phases of fucking – up luck is just a struck match magically lit inside a wind storm my cigarette still sits with an unburnt tip on a grin formed get-it? Flicked habits from my fingers but habits tend to stick as I kick cans down the path to unmask the habituates so if you’re the pathetic kid that feels sorry for me breathing put a dollar on my bar tab and well just regard it Even-Steven proceed to bleeding, exceed what succeeded heathens i’m leaving this world believing the game was never worth beating cheat Code Keyed In, easy mode, speak you overachiever you seek answers to this road I chose while I coax my own believers neither weaker than the other, just debate the preferences amalgamate the facts then state your belated references confessions end. I’ll never mend these exponential damages you’d hemorrhage non-sense trying to bandage my pretentiousness relentless in my conquest to cut ties or bare the knots or just bury my face in thought like disappearing aeronauts lost. if meaning lost is being in the middle of no-where, with no cares. there is no cure for misanthropy except for coke sizzling my nose hairs so there


Crimson Juice Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3263 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Crimson Juice Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 19 March 2023 at 11:17am
	Really liked the title sucked me in like a moth to a flame, the rhyme scheme Was a highlight in it self, and you're command of wording was also enjoyable, And don't even get me started with the details this drop projected whilst i was Reading, which in a real cool way could be overlooked as the pace seemed to Push you along so you don't break flow by pondering, very enjoyable dude, i'm Now going to give it another read (or 2)...peace.
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