Open Mic: Off The Chain Witted (feat. Sick-Witted)

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some quick shit, fuck with it 

[Sick-Witted]

You might see Sick, In a fly G6
Just "Cruising through the City" for a nice clean bitch
With a booty, really pretty, & some high-speed lips
That'll blow the kid away with her MindFreak tricks
And stroke the Cobra in her face, like "I need jizz"
Cause them hoes just love the taste of my ice cream stick
And they only get the snake when my wifey flips
And skates in the van, likes it's breaking my plans
Cause Babe understand, I'ma player but damn
You knew the game in advance, it aint change, I'm A Man
And occasionally I may just cheat, so take it or scram
Cause the chain of command will never stray from my hands
And I'ma do what I want until the day that I can't
So if you can't adjust, to this dude then get up
Cause them new chicks is cool with my rudeness because
This true pimps the smoothest to do it and plus
I'm the cutest and too rich 2 give a fuck...

[Chain]

The godly architecture of my Marc Buchanan leather...
Was retarded and I partied all Bacardi’d up and extra
That is what you do till karma intercepts ya
Like ‘it can’t get worse, even Armageddon’s better’
I’m far from a point Dexter, art of war professor
With my Chuck Taylors whiter than Carlton and his sweaters
I’m sharper than you dressers in Carhartt polyester
Smooth enough to not get targeted by PETA
No fucking chasers, y’all start with Dr. Pepper
Mad at our chicks ‘cause these Carmens ain’t Electra
Charlatans I lectured 'cause they fathers are molesters
And don’t leave her here if your daughter is your Mecca
If u wasn’t so shook my partners wouldn’t sweat ya
A mob of uncle Festers, Arnolds and Sylvesters
Charging at aggressors that aren’t ENTER pressers
Got the medics stressing walking in with stretchers
If you weirdos are Martians, I'm a Spartan with a Heckler

....

Edited by CHAIN - 09 February 2010 at 7:14pm

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CHAIN Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote CHAIN Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Off The Chain Witted (feat. Sick-Witted) Posted: 07 February 2010 at 8:14pm
	some quick shit, fuck with it [Sick-Witted] You might see Sick, In a fly G6 Just "Cruising through the City" for a nice clean bitch With a booty, really pretty, & some high-speed lips That'll blow the kid away with her MindFreak tricks And stroke the Cobra in her face, like "I need jizz" Cause them hoes just love the taste of my ice cream stick And they only get the snake when my wifey flips And skates in the van, likes it's breaking my plans Cause Babe understand, I'ma player but damn You knew the game in advance, it aint change, I'm A Man And occasionally I may just cheat, so take it or scram Cause the chain of command will never stray from my hands And I'ma do what I want until the day that I can't So if you can't adjust, to this dude then get up Cause them new chicks is cool with my rudeness because This true pimps the smoothest to do it and plus I'm the cutest and too rich 2 give a fuck... [Chain] The godly architecture of my Marc Buchanan leather... Was retarded and I partied all Bacardi’d up and extra That is what you do till karma intercepts ya Like ‘it can’t get worse, even Armageddon’s better’ I’m far from a point Dexter, art of war professor With my Chuck Taylors whiter than Carlton and his sweaters I’m sharper than you dressers in Carhartt polyester Smooth enough to not get targeted by PETA No fucking chasers, y’all start with Dr. Pepper Mad at our chicks ‘cause these Carmens ain’t Electra Charlatans I lectured 'cause they fathers are molesters And don’t leave her here if your daughter is your Mecca If u wasn’t so shook my partners wouldn’t sweat ya A mob of uncle Festers, Arnolds and Sylvesters Charging at aggressors that aren’t ENTER pressers Got the medics stressing walking in with stretchers If you weirdos are Martians, I'm a Spartan with a Heckler .... Edited by CHAIN - 09 February 2010 at 7:14pm
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NepentheZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote NepentheZ Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 07 February 2010 at 9:04pm
	Sick - verse was coolio man, really. Flowed really well, content was decent, I genuinely laughed at a few points, thought you pulled it off well. The change up in rhyme scheme was a little rash, though, like, just outta no where, but even still, nice read. CHAIN - thought the verse started off pretty weak, really. I couldn't catch the rhymes properly, and even after reading twice, I just didn't "get it". All changed up from the PETA line and onwards, where its like the verse completely transformed. Started flowing off the toungue, with quality concepts and good content. Electra and Mecca bars were hot too. Good collabo lads. Enjoyed the read.
	I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...

Sick-Witted Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran Joined: 07 September 2008 Location: The USA Status: Offline Points: 601 Text Rank: #11 Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sick-Witted Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 07 February 2010 at 9:49pm
	this is like a double collab...a text one with Chain...and an audio w/ Raps...so that rash change in the rhyme scheme doesn't really stand out much, it fits just fine cause of the way I was riding the beat...but thanx for the feed man...
	Sick-Witted->means I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it

SwordedStylez Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4922 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote SwordedStylez Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 07 February 2010 at 10:54pm
	Sick - I was pretty impressed with this man, nicely delivered flow was on, nothin too lyrical but it didn't need it, good job. Chain - i aint know what Nep was sayin about openin weak, those first couple of lines was straight up fire man, love the internals. Not your best, but solid throughout. NIce read, stay up.
	Music Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)