Open Mic: [OM King] Crystal Ball [CHAIN]

Ok, I see what you did here. You kept the same shit throughout both versus. That was nice. I also liked the subtle rhyming that came off effortlessly to keep the flow going. I also liked your internals and the scheme setup here. Enough with the technical shit. You already know how to write above most.

   ...Peace...
Patriarchs world wide fear the Asian conquest…
Of our pagan market, the new Reaganomics.
‘Made in Taiwan’ yes, we’ll obey their laws when…
The lakes of the land turn into Satan’s vomit.

^^^I like the feel of this joint. From the jump the energy is electric. And the imagery is captivating, as it easily grabs hold of the reader's attention.

The whole fear of the 'Asian Conquest' is also a very believable perspective, as I imagine there are many here in the West that view it as some sort of cultural threat to our societal ideologies.

Also, I'm diggin the flow. It kinda has a Raekwon/Ghostface Killa type of vibe to it, but with a sharp political edged commentary.




Non Evian shit, it will lead to slaughter
Y’all seen Flint’s water turn into raisined omelets.
Waste & smog, they’ll speed the aging process
Major pharma firms are gonna stay dishonest.
Strains of chronic that could cure the plague bubonic
Will get patented, replaced by fatal tonics.

^^^Ha...I have a similar line as your chronic one that I wrote some months back! Needless to say I'm feeling the content. As obvious as the signs you described are, you would think more people would be on a similar train of thought but, in reality when you talk to people daily you realize that just ain't the case.


Racist officers will have us paying homage
To the snakes in charge that poison baby rompers.
Making sure Iran will not remain Islamic
Forcing peeps in Europe to all praise Mohammed.
Aleikum Salam ‘cause Christ breaks his promise
Skies will turn black like they are made of onyx.

^^^What is right becomes wrong and viseversa. A total state of disorder and confusion. Dope references spoken with a prophetic like confidence.

*rubs ball*
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^^^Nice touch. If for nothing else than for how it's simple imagery adds flesh to your overall theme.

Masons & voodoo priests singing Haitian sonnets
To gain more votes, it is straight demonic.
Naval conflicts ‘tween the States and contras
CIA trained men that the NATO sponsored.
80 years of combat because Hades wants it
World wars will come around like the Hailey comet.

^^^A onslaught of visuals: magic, conspiracy, etcetera. Just dope!
This is the sort of angle I would try to come from as well. It's like a mix of everything without any one particular theory being overstated or excluded.

Strange hominids straight from an ancient quadrant…
In space win the race to make first contact.
Lacing us with lasers that put to shame atomic…
Bombs with the tech for us to make bionic…
Creatures with features we’ve displayed in comics
Genetically engineered to be Isaiah Thomas.
Aliens designing our planes avionics
Re-veal to us that Meek was Drake’s accomplice.
To get a job you must speak today’s Ebonics.
Sin-cerely yours, The Lord ‘CHAIN-stradamus’

^^^Feels like a Nas like stream of consciousness here. Just seemingly random spurts of imagery and ideas that on the surface appear to be separate, but are actually working independently to form a much larger picture.


...Ethiopia....

^^^ The Motherland - The Whole World

This piece was pretty fly. I feel like it had a little bit of everything. Allowing each and every reader the chance to identify with at least one concept or theory. Plus, the lyrical aspect was on point and the flow was quick and consistent. Dope shit, bro.

I really enjoyed it!

This piece was unbelievable. Even though I had picked you to win the last OM king, I thought this was even more well written and enjoyable than your drop from last month. I love the approach you took on the topic this month because the way that you brought it looking through the crystal ball at everything, you left the potential open for yourself to make all the different dope plays that you had. I don't even need to say about the flow and the readability cause I don't think you've ever slipped up on that, at least not from the verses that I have read. 

Still got it.

Chain this was insane in the brain deadly drop as always