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ProFound 
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 Posted: 01 August 2007 at 4:13pm |
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It may be aimed at me, wether it is or not... aim it all you want, cuz it AINT true. I voted on who I thought won...
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10491 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 01 August 2007 at 5:27pm |
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ok so yeah this "brother" line is controversial.
but can we keep the swaying outta here - especially due to the controversy of the line, so just let people make up their own minds and vote how they see fit. if ya wanna bitch an moan then go to the shit talk thread - hense the reason for it. note: all posts will be restored once the battle is over. |
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Poison
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Joined: 05 August 2007 Location: melbourne, aus Status: Offline Points: 17 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-0-0 Form: W |
Posted: 06 August 2007 at 2:07pm |
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ok ive read it thru..here comes a breakdown orion You got it in fa me 'cuz you jealous of the infamy i think this is ok.. it would be better if you named who said it though. in fa me/infamy is clever too, nice touch It's tru, and he got a thing fa me, we seen it's blatant lol. not that great a diss, but its funny STILL bitchin' 'bout gettin' kicked, this fake's enraged again not that great a diss but its funny and its topical Ya crew's embarrassed, you're outta control thats hard. ive heard a few lines about her but none like that. nice Type to diss lyin' outcha ass, it's evident, look lol..this is very witty to me, even though its not that great a diss You'll probly say I ducked Kon like I ain't kill him before thats pretty good. ive read xxplosive verse in the battle field where he said shav is kon's real name? and 2s does mention shav lol. so this is very very good just for being true..haha nice Cryin' in denial, just face it that I'm boss i saw highlights of the fight..haha, a little bit of a stretch with the word play but it's decent Everythin' you have'll be played, this kid ain't hard i saw a nam line in the other battle too..plus again this is a bit of a stretch as a diss, but not bad Call yaself Smooth but you lyin' sucka thats cold..haha "oh shit" line, def a ko punch, hits hard Now you dead too, ya mother's cryin' in shame also very cold..not so much of a punch but very disrespectful and a hard enough note to end on 2smooth Claimed he left... but quickly ran back guardin' his spot no one really associates "O" with 360 degrees do they..so its a bit of a stretch. nonetheless i do like the wordplay a LOT. best one of the battle i think, nice line nice..relevant, not much of a diss though an' You ain't structured, but you swear ya' rhymes are proper i think this is bad..relies way too heavily on an explanation and even then its a stretch. and from what ive read he did get the guy off the team, then let him back on..so its basically the opposite i'll make ya' suffer... the truth is ya flow stinks not bad..not good either though PUSSY... you ducked Shav again because you know he'd fold ya again reaching a bit for me. kinda like his willy lamond line, both a bit of a stretch, and yeah he pre-empted your setup as well thats hot..may-weather too..yea i like that a lot clever..hard... i like a lot..lines get a little long tho ...doesn't that suck?? everyone see's that i'm smashin' Sul... lol..you too focused on his initial..the simile is weak..kills the line imo i'll bash ya' skull quick and let ya' mind disolve slow... like this line quite a lot..thou like someone said i saw mcwoods use the same shit in his battle. but you did it better the wordplay is hot, the actual diss is ok
overall. best battle ive seen here. 2smooth had some hot wordplay but then some was too much of a stretch..and at points there was no strong diss. orion dissed considerably more, and when he didnt diss as hard he had more funny/witty parts to it to make up for it. whereas 2smooths wordplay..tho clever..didnt really do it for me every time and he had a couple misses. orion's was generally worded better and had better flow to it too.. so yeah vote orion |
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ju fuckin with me, ju fuckin with the best!
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Fatal
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Posted: 12 August 2007 at 2:41pm |
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Uppin this shit...(and since this is a close battle, lets have someone experienced vote this and not some newb or herb...)
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sparta
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Posted: 21 August 2007 at 2:39pm |
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More votes, anyone?
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Smart Allikk
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 4:43am |
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Orion : This first bar was ok, but you really didn't have any proof of it, shoulda had a link or somethin'. Second bar was ok again, nothing that made me say "wow". Third bar i thought was sick...lmao @ the game. The Anna Nicole wasn't that great. The fifth bar was funny haha. Again with the sixth bar, it was kinda weak. The Willie Lamond bar was dope, i really liked that one. Do hard and Nam really rhyme? No.. i didn't think so, which is why i didn't really like this bar. the next one was real low... i didnt like it at all..Last bar wasn't even a punch...Overall your verse was really basic and a lot of shit could have been fixed up to be of any effect.
Smooth : Opener was sick...nice wordplay..Second bar was a dope concept and an effective hit.The next bar was also dope wordplay.. i see alot of it in this verse. The no link punch was ill. The next bar was alright, a good punch and meta, same with the next bar. I really liked the "gassed-up" line..haha real creative smooth. I didnt really get it when you said his style is like a massive hole, so i dunno about that one. "Fall, O" line was sick, i liked that one a lot. The closer was killer. Over all i think smooth came A LOT harder, better punches, word play, you name it. Which is why he's getting my vote. My vote goes to 2Smooth for kickin' ass... good battle boys, i enjoyed this. |
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2smooth
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 11:56am |
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thank you for voting, Smart Alikk... and ^while it appears that you broke down what you liked and did not liked from each verse, it is apparently not in depth enough for the liking of Orion an' will therefore he will try to make your vote not count unless you explain it a little more... so, for everyone's sake, please elaborate... |
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Smart Allikk
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 12:50pm |
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fuck that, I already voted fairly, if he doesn't like it then that's his problem |
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hanGing
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 2:20pm |
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More explanation please Smart - a battle like this deserves the depth and explanations...
talked to O and 2s about this. |
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SwordedStylez
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Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4922 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 2:47pm |
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Orion You got it in fa me 'cuz you jealous of the infamy flow was on point, punch was decent, coulda been harder i reckon...disagree? don't bother, we both know you can beat this if u try. It's tru, and he got a thing fa me, we seen it's blatant flow fell off a little bit to me, punch was nice though STILL bitchin' 'bout gettin' kicked, this fake's enraged flow came back. i've seen that same punch worded differently about a million times though .... that flow was shaky at best man, what's goin on? punch was aite, kinda fillery to me. Type to diss lyin' outcha ass, it's evident, look flow back on point. punch was nice, funny too LOL You'll probly say I ducked Kon like I ain't kill him before lol kinda played punch but done well, flow was tight Cryin' in denial, just face it that I'm boss flow was good. punch was...meh...ok, u got better Everythin' you have'll be played, this kid ain't hard plaaayyyeed. come on O, you know you better than this. flow was fine. Call yaself Smooth but you lyin' sucka dope punch, i don't care what everyone else says about it, THIS is a personal. actually gettin personal is how battlin should be done. Now you dead too, ya mother's cryin' in shame a bit fillery, not a great closer flow: 3/5 overall: 9/15 2Smooth Claimed he left... but quickly ran back guardin' his spot decentish play, flow stumbled slightly in the second line, not bad punch an' You ain't structured, but you swear ya' rhymes are proper LOL, that was a nice bar. i'll make ya' suffer... the truth is ya flow stinks filler punch. flow was nice though PUSSY... you ducked Shav again because you know he'd fold ya hmm yeah aite, this was decent. flow was good you 'may weather' under these shots when they destroy ya'... man, you suck! you're just a bitch, so i'ma leave you smacked, chump... played punch, flow was tight, maybe save the exclamation overdose for dope bars ...doesn't that suck?? everyone see's that i'm smashin' Sul... haha, liked that one actually, i won't criticise the exclamations there. flow again, spot on pure filler punch. flow was on point again ok closer, decent personal/nameplay, flow was good. maybe 3 less exclamations for this one though :P flow: 4/5 overall: 11.5/15 Conclusion Orion, this was one of the worst verses i've ever seen from you (i'm Tigger by the way.) Flow was a mess, punches (excepting the brother one, which was dope) were decent at best. Overall I was dissapointed with your performance. 2Smooth, you had some decent punches, flow was on point (if a bit basic.) there were some bars which could have come from a tight battle verse, but you peppered the rest of the verse with filler. Overall though, Smooth came with better flow, better wordplay, and better punches. I never thought I'd say this in one of O's battles, but I think 2smooth took this fairly easy. Final Scores Big O : 9/15 My Vote goes to 2Smooth |
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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-Orion-
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 2:52pm |
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Tigger...hahaha oh shit what up...yeah well umm, though three people from the competing countries form a panel who were allowed to vote (Kay B, Nep, Flash) the rest can't be from UK/US...so ya vote doesn't stand...go figure...the setup is a bit of a shambles, but it is what it is |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Smart Allikk
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 2:52pm |
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You got it in fa me 'cuz you jealous of the infamy this was a good punch, nice wordplay. it flowed nice as well...
It's tru, and he got a thing fa me, we seen it's blatant I don't really understand the set-up... but the second line was comical, didnt really flow as i read it though.
STILL bitchin' 'bout gettin' kicked, this fake's enraged Good punch i really liked that one, i thought it was funny lol
Ya crew's embarrassed, you're outta control A decent punch i guess, flowed nicely...
Type to diss lyin' outcha ass, it's evident, look Clever, good punch and it made me laugh lol
You'll probly say I ducked Kon like I ain't kill him before I thought it was kinda weak.. or maybe i just didnt get it?
Cryin' in denial, just face it that I'm boss This was a sick punch/ word play... i really liked it, and it flowed good as i read it. I never did see the fight tho...
Everythin' you have'll be played, this kid ain't hard This bar has potential...the thing that threw me off the most was that 'hard' and 'nam' dont rhyme what so ever.
Call yaself Smooth but you lyin' sucka It was a good punch but...it was a low-blow thats why i didnt like it to much..I thought you were better than that Orion.
Now you dead too, ya mother's cryin' in shame It flowed well an all but i felt you didnt really hit smooth to hard with it.. 2 Smooth:
Claimed he left... but quickly ran back guardin' his spot This was a sick punch/wordplay..could of flowed better..but very effective
think you're 'dope'... but really you're one of the worst around yet another dope punch/wordplay.. it flowed nicely
an' You ain't structured, but you swear ya' rhymes are proper A personal punch that flowed good ..it was slick in my opinion
i'll make ya' suffer... the truth is ya flow stinks Sick punch smooth... thats killer. couldn't have flowed any better.
PUSSY... you ducked Shav again because you know he'd fold ya A personal and a punch all in one.. sick flow as i read and the jame oyebola line was sick
you 'may weather' under these shots when they destroy ya'... Flowed nicely, and the punch landed hard. Good shit smooth...
man, you suck! you're just a bitch, so i'ma leave you smacked, chump... Again, this was clever wordplay and a hard hitting punch... i was like wow
...doesn't that suck?? everyone see's that i'm smashin' Sul... Not really that great of a punch because i really didnt understand who a style could be like a massive hole... flowed good though.
i'll bash ya' skull quick and let ya' mind disolve slow... Sick punch, and real creative wordplay.
he says that the site is dying? well now i'm breakin' this ho... This was an alright punch, i felt you could have set it up a bit better? anyways flowed nicely, and it was a good finisher.
Vote: 2Smooth.... I felt that Orion "half-assed" some of his stuff,( not that it was bad because a lot of it was sick ) because a lot of it wasn't really as hard hitting and as affective as Smooths, . 2S has some real creative punches/wordplay...all of his shit flowed nicely as i read it. Only thing that i stumbled on was the "massive hole" line.. so 2Smooth GMV that better??? |
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 2:57pm |
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ah well, my vote doesn't stand...don't matter. I got to say orion lost anyway (and i wasn't stoned and mistaken this time O ;))
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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-Orion-
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 3:02pm |
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Yea erybody got their opinion, I dunno what to tell ya that wouldn't be classified as "swaying"
I'm assumin' all the votes stand now they're all explained, that's 4-3 Smooth, keep it movin'
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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2smooth
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 3:05pm |
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thx for the vote tig... even tho' it don't count lol... BUT... looks like Smart explained his shit in more depth... so, barring any complaining/ whining that makes it 4-3
mods? was that explained well enough?
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Smart Allikk
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 3:10pm |
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You got it in fa me 'cuz you jealous of the infamy this was a good punch, nice wordplay. it flowed nice as well...
It's tru, and he got a thing fa me, we seen it's blatant I don't really understand the set-up... but the second line was comical, didnt really flow as i read it though.
STILL bitchin' 'bout gettin' kicked, this fake's enraged Good punch i really liked that one, i thought it was funny lol
Ya crew's embarrassed, you're outta control A decent punch i guess, flowed nicely...
Type to diss lyin' outcha ass, it's evident, look Clever, good punch and it made me laugh lol
You'll probly say I ducked Kon like I ain't kill him before I thought it was kinda weak.. or maybe i just didnt get it?
Cryin' in denial, just face it that I'm boss This was a sick punch/ word play... i really liked it, and it flowed good as i read it. I never did see the fight tho...
Everythin' you have'll be played, this kid ain't hard This bar has potential...the thing that threw me off the most was that 'hard' and 'nam' dont rhyme what so ever.
Call yaself Smooth but you lyin' sucka It was a good punch but...it was a low-blow thats why i didnt like it to much..I thought you were better than that Orion.
Now you dead too, ya mother's cryin' in shame It flowed well an all but i felt you didnt really hit smooth to hard with it.. 2 Smooth:
Claimed he left... but quickly ran back guardin' his spot This was a sick punch/wordplay..could of flowed better..but very effective
think you're 'dope'... but really you're one of the worst around yet another dope punch/wordplay.. it flowed nicely
an' You ain't structured, but you swear ya' rhymes are proper A personal punch that flowed good ..it was slick in my opinion
i'll make ya' suffer... the truth is ya flow stinks Sick punch smooth... thats killer. couldn't have flowed any better.
PUSSY... you ducked Shav again because you know he'd fold ya A personal and a punch all in one.. sick flow as i read and the jame oyebola line was sick
you 'may weather' under these shots when they destroy ya'... Flowed nicely, and the punch landed hard. Good shit smooth...
man, you suck! you're just a bitch, so i'ma leave you smacked, chump... Again, this was clever wordplay and a hard hitting punch... i was like wow
...doesn't that suck?? everyone see's that i'm smashin' Sul... Not really that great of a punch because i really didnt understand who a style could be like a massive hole... flowed good though.
i'll bash ya' skull quick and let ya' mind disolve slow... Sick punch, and real creative wordplay.
he says that the site is dying? well now i'm breakin' this ho... This was an alright punch, i felt you could have set it up a bit better? anyways flowed nicely, and it was a good finisher.
Vote: 2Smooth.... I felt that Orion "half-assed" some of his stuff,( not that it was bad because a lot of it was sick ) because a lot of it wasn't really as hard hitting and as affective as Smooths, . 2S has some real creative punches/wordplay...all of his shit flowed nicely as i read it. Only thing that i stumbled on was the "massive hole" line.. so 2Smooth GMV that better??? |
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2smooth
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Posted: 31 August 2007 at 12:14pm |
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hmmmm.... ummm.... yeah.... so i guess O an' Sparta asked Ikon to see if it was cool if Woods votes on this battle, even tho' he's from the UK, they think he'd be fair...
...isn't swordedstyles aka Tigger from the UK, too?
is he not a fair voter? 'cuz i coulda sworn he voted... but it was dissallowed seein' as he was from the UK...
now i don't mind Woods votin', 'cuz i think he's fair an' unbiased as well... but if that's how it's gonna go down, why would you not want to allow ya' man Tig's vote to count? hmmm....
seems kinda weird to me, but keep it goin'...
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2smooth
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Posted: 31 August 2007 at 12:23pm |
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actually, fuck it... if you honestly don't think Tig is a fair voter, then say that... otherwise, if he IS a fair voter, then why did you dissallow his but then ask another from the UK to vote? i would like this to be explained a little... thanks...
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10491 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 31 August 2007 at 3:56pm |
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woods cant vote, hes from Northern Ireland, which, i thought was part of the United Kingdom, which, is battling the United States of America.
though feel free to correct me if I'm wrong, or if not physically being attached to England acctually makes a difference? |
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Point Blank
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Posted: 31 August 2007 at 4:00pm |
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I Thought Northern Ireland Werent Part Of The UK?
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