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    Posted: 20 May 2007 at 1:33pm
This was the last battle I did it was  awhile ago against a guy called G Writ, its only 5 bars but should give an average of where I'm at.
 
 
 
Listen to this fool trying to speak truth, he's the personification of the uneducated youth
Don't sell me short cos I ain't been in a booth, G can't write properly, his surname's proof

Ya ain't got it easy depite me back outta the blue, I'll still knuckle down and rip ya a few
I ain't taking it easy cos of the crew, I Googled "over-hyped" and got hyperlinked to you

Cleary Writ's a G but in name only, only time that he's happy is stroking the mane of his my little pony
Don't try and put a frame on me, no-one believes ya, because we crew ya nothing but a drain on me

My bars are like an aphrodisiac, cos they always make me come hard and leave this bitch on its back
G needs to get used to being under attack, ya easy prey in this site so ya best stay close to the pack

Every one of my bars straight fucked ya , took that ego bubble ya got and gave it a puncture
I've spotted ya skeleton fetish at this juncture, ironic that ya like bones yet ya drops lack structure
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Listen to this fool trying to speak truth,
he's the personification of the uneducated youth
Don't sell me short cos I ain't been in a booth,
G can't write properly, his surname's proof
Ya ain't got it easy depite me back outta the blue,
I'll still knuckle down and rip ya a few
I ain't taking it easy cos of the crew,
I Googled "over-hyped" and got hyperlinked to you
Cleary Writ's a G but in name only,
only time that he's happy is stroking the mane of his my little pony
Don't try and put a frame on me,
no-one believes ya, because we crew ya nothing but a drain on me
My bars are like an aphrodisiac,
cos they always make me come hard and leave this bitch on its back
G needs to get used to being under attack,
ya easy prey in this site so ya best stay close to the pack
Every one of my bars straight fucked ya ,
took that ego bubble ya got and gave it a puncture
I've spotted ya skeleton fetish at this juncture,
ironic that ya like bones yet ya drops lack structure


^^structure is much better like this.. Nov, some decent concepts, google and cant write properly, but they needed much better wording, need to learn how to form a direct hittin punch, till then ya Nov.
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i liked this, thought flow was good and had good concepts, obviously not the best but i thought low ama
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