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RTShark33
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Topic: Please rank mePosted: 20 May 2007 at 1:33pm |
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This was the last battle I did it was awhile ago against a guy called G Writ, its only 5 bars but should give an average of where I'm at.
Listen to this fool trying to speak truth, he's the personification of the uneducated youth
Don't sell me short cos I ain't been in a booth, G can't write properly, his surname's proof Ya ain't got it easy depite me back outta the blue, I'll still knuckle down and rip ya a few I ain't taking it easy cos of the crew, I Googled "over-hyped" and got hyperlinked to you Cleary Writ's a G but in name only, only time that he's happy is stroking the mane of his my little pony Don't try and put a frame on me, no-one believes ya, because we crew ya nothing but a drain on me My bars are like an aphrodisiac, cos they always make me come hard and leave this bitch on its back G needs to get used to being under attack, ya easy prey in this site so ya best stay close to the pack Every one of my bars straight fucked ya , took that ego bubble ya got and gave it a puncture I've spotted ya skeleton fetish at this juncture, ironic that ya like bones yet ya drops lack structure |
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Mackie
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Joined: 20 August 2005 Location: MK Status: Offline Points: 1505 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 45-38-4 Form: LLWLNW |
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Posted: 20 May 2007 at 4:07pm |
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Listen to this fool trying to speak truth,
he's the personification of the uneducated youth Don't sell me short cos I ain't been in a booth, G can't write properly, his surname's proof Ya ain't got it easy depite me back outta the blue, I'll still knuckle down and rip ya a few I ain't taking it easy cos of the crew, I Googled "over-hyped" and got hyperlinked to you Cleary Writ's a G but in name only, only time that he's happy is stroking the mane of his my little pony Don't try and put a frame on me, no-one believes ya, because we crew ya nothing but a drain on me My bars are like an aphrodisiac, cos they always make me come hard and leave this bitch on its back G needs to get used to being under attack, ya easy prey in this site so ya best stay close to the pack Every one of my bars straight fucked ya , took that ego bubble ya got and gave it a puncture I've spotted ya skeleton fetish at this juncture, ironic that ya like bones yet ya drops lack structure ^^structure is much better like this.. Nov, some decent concepts, google and cant write properly, but they needed much better wording, need to learn how to form a direct hittin punch, till then ya Nov. |
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mcwoods
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Joined: 04 December 2006 Status: Offline Points: 4204 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 42-51-0 Form: LLLLWW |
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Posted: 20 May 2007 at 5:16pm |
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i liked this, thought flow was good and had good concepts, obviously not the best but i thought low ama
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