Spit for Rank: Prologue

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   Picture pen paint proudly painted

Then test truth, the topic tainted

facts forced forcefully then fucked n fainted

relate it!

then laugh, cuz aint it funny how life really works

pen your words down only for sum jerk to reap the perks

keep the seaped blood stained to see that im real in shirts

peel the skirts!

cuz baby runnin up on you, you jus plain fucked

i aint sexist wen it comes to death 

jus pesimesstic wen a mystic claims truth in breath

WordzAGod told to the messengers Vega and Set

the two that became one, spittin slient verses that crept

cept wen they nest in ya mind they start to run wild

turn your emotions to anger never closed like an open file

make u feel alone wit the death like trapped on an isle

these words spoken make u relive past horrors....like oj on trial

A demon speakin in tongues teachin all things bad for fun

im truly schizophrenic, no i aint, jus parts of my mind go numb

Im Vega, no we're set and if u really wanna battle you dumb

i spit death like recitin words to give out the 10 plagues

im a mystic wit written passages spittin concoctions of a mage

a cocky angel whose presence has him locked from god, im full a rage

if my mind was a book and this was the prologue...would u turn the page

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-Set- Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 06 August 2007 Status: Offline Points: 121 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-4-0 Form: LLWLWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote -Set- Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Prologue Posted: 06 August 2007 at 10:52pm
	Picture pen paint proudly painted Then test truth, the topic tainted facts forced forcefully then fucked n fainted relate it! then laugh, cuz aint it funny how life really works pen your words down only for sum jerk to reap the perks keep the seaped blood stained to see that im real in shirts peel the skirts! cuz baby runnin up on you, you jus plain fucked i aint sexist wen it comes to death jus pesimesstic wen a mystic claims truth in breath WordzAGod told to the messengers Vega and Set the two that became one, spittin slient verses that crept cept wen they nest in ya mind they start to run wild turn your emotions to anger never closed like an open file make u feel alone wit the death like trapped on an isle these words spoken make u relive past horrors....like oj on trial A demon speakin in tongues teachin all things bad for fun im truly schizophrenic, no i aint, jus parts of my mind go numb Im Vega, no we're set and if u really wanna battle you dumb i spit death like recitin words to give out the 10 plagues im a mystic wit written passages spittin concoctions of a mage a cocky angel whose presence has him locked from god, im full a rage if my mind was a book and this was the prologue...would u turn the page


Fatal Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Fatal Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 06 August 2007 at 11:47pm
	Haha, this was pretty cool man...some sick twisted shit...ok now based on ya use of multies and ya vocab ima rank u AMA....curious to see a battle verse from u to get a better grasp on ya battle skills not jus an open mic...need to work on transitional rhymes and multies, but nice flow...liked the OJ line.... RANK: AMA


SageOne Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 12 June 2006 Location: At Your House Status: Offline Points: 2976 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-13-2 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote SageOne Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 07 August 2007 at 4:11am
	http://www.btnhboard.com/forums/archive/index.php/t-96696.html Hmm I liked it, but this is nearly 3 months old and I think it's best if you have something a little more recent, your rank could be more of an accurate portrayal if you have fresher spits. Stay up/ Edited by SageOne - 07 August 2007 at 4:22am

-Set- Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 06 August 2007 Status: Offline Points: 121 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-4-0 Form: LLWLWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote -Set- Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 07 August 2007 at 9:29pm
	yes i was thinkin of wither to use a new one or an old one n since i was in a rush i chose an old...i'll write sumn new here soon for ya'll wen i get time. cuz u can bet im gon be around for good while


SageOne Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 12 June 2006 Location: At Your House Status: Offline Points: 2976 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-13-2 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote SageOne Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 08 August 2007 at 10:07pm
	Glad to hear it, gotta have some active heads.

2smooth Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote 2smooth Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 09 August 2007 at 10:09am
	AMA

G-Pfeif Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 19 June 2004 Location: Maryland Status: Offline Points: 2541 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-0 Form: WWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote G-Pfeif Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 10 August 2007 at 3:05pm
	you get ama from me... because your multies and aliteration was good.. but some of your shit is redundant : "facts forced forcefully"... thats redundant to the point of annoying keep workin
	<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v313/G-Pfeif/SuckaMCTo-DoList.png" /> "I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks"

-Set- Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 06 August 2007 Status: Offline Points: 121 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-4-0 Form: LLWLWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote -Set- Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 14 August 2007 at 9:33pm
	not neccesarily redundant its jus alliteration, kinda like papoose shit. but i understand where u gettin at