Textual Torture: R1-B6) DressToKill vs 2smooth

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First to 5 or 3KO
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DressedToKill:

*Micheal Jacksons song..smooth criminal
*UFC's big beef vs Ken Shamrock and Tito Ortiz..it was supposed to
be a epic battle..but Ortiz KO'ed Shamrock in the first round
*In my ama/pros callout..''Fatal'' ice bustin a nut to battle dtk....Hes In Dynasty..
*He didnt check in

Il Take Advantage Of His Weaknesses,Hes Fulla Wack Flaws!
'Smooth' Couldnt 'Be All Over Me',If I Got A Brazilian Wax Job..(Hah)
BLAT BLAT
This Kid Is Falling Behind,NOBODY Thinks This Pricks Mean
I Havent Seen A 'Smooth Criminal',Since M-J Hit The Big Screen!*
I Rip Spleens,Is There A Emcee Your More Clever Than?
NOPE,You've Been Here Three Years!And Still Not A Veteran...(GTFO)
You Stop Reppin Kid! I Continue To Drop Punches I Cant Stop
This Is A Bigger 'First Round Upset' Than Ortiz Vs Shamrock!*
Peeps Thinking You Taking It?I Highly Doubt You Can Handle D
Ya Must Feel Privilaged?Ya Whole Crews Beggin Ta Battle Me! (Icez..)*
Yet What About You?You Aint Reppin Kid Better FORGET IT...
Cuz Your Afraid To Write A Check,Like You Were In Debt Kid! (Cheque)*
You Aint Tough Faggot,We Know This Bluff Cant Hack It
Its Ironic How I Put 2'Smooth',Threw Some Rough Patches!
Ya Faced With Doubt,Your Gonna Loose Just Embrace The Route
Ya Verse Is A Bad Vender,How Smoothie Leaves A Sour Taste In Ya Mouth

DTK...opener was alright, didn't really work grammatically but I liked it...smooth criminal was cool...veteran was alright, nothing majorly hard tho...ortiz was good, that was a nice bar...rest of it was pretty consistent, write a cheque was alright...closer was nicely done, i liked it...

2smooth...flow throughout was impeccable...opener was a nice softener....consistent hits throughout, only one I wasnt feeling was the NFG punch...closer was really good

Overall, I thought DTK's verse threatened to become really nice but never quite made it, in that he laid a nice foundation through consistency but had no real haymakers that would have made this battle tough to judge...2smooth kept it really tight and had 3 or 4 really nice punches, (4th, 6th, 16th lines), and that was enough to win this IMO...good battle gentlemen

v. 2smooth

thats that then, smooths through.