Next Generation: R1-B6) hanGing [vs] WillyWhyte

12lines min - 16lines max
First to 5 or 3KO
No Biting
No Recycling
No Dickryde Votes
No Feeding/Flipping
Crew Votes Allowed
ALL Votes MUST be explained
ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted!
No Vote swaying Allowed
Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed.
No bitching, use the thread provided

if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show

all verses must be in by: Tuesday 27th of June 2006 at 12:00 midnight GMT
(thats UK Time, so dont try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse)

theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent.

Votes will last for 1 week from the date of the last verse entry

*edit* changed the lines from 20-50lines to 12-16lines, also extended the deadline an extra day, now 27th june *edit*




Edited by Scotty32 - 21 June 2006 at 5:14pm

*cricks neck*
*breathes*

(it's been a while...)

willy..

Your hopes abated, negated by punches so overrated
Leave you desecrated! sacrifical lamb just eviscerated?
Why so placid? Cos you've been acting like a dope vet?
Flow so flaccid! This bitch hasn't even got a vote yet
Atmospheric Lyrics Coast through you like spirits and ghosts
Relying on miracle boasts? to even come close to this genial host
Believe you're in this league - you must be concussed kid?
been here 11 days? done nothing - and you can be trusted?
You seem disgusted? easily broken down- hopes malajusted
Beaten like fake gold on rings - this "fools" encrusted

(and a bit of the trademark shit)

Hope and belief failed - like searches for holy grails
Impaled on rusty nails - entrails designed in lurid details
Skin pales violence unveiled in exhibitions of precision incision
decisions for funeral provisions willed into this final excision

my bad i went over line limit. i sware it said 20 before.

thnks for keepin it positive my brother. mad respect 2 hanging, he got sum lines. haha. uppin

WillyWhyte wrote:   i grab ya hand... then release mah fuckin GRIP..// the whole site hates me but yall can suck my fuckin DICK!/         im leavin his spine twisted, the whole site shocked/ i shot a accurate shot, might leave u on the side-walk!!//

I may sound slightly harsh here but its not..

i knew i lost but still some cats man lol, these internet sites will never change hahaha. but w/e, is whatever

i dont really care about cats, i just show respect when i vote in battles. n if u aint feelin someones hsit try to give advice instead of hating n being a cold motherfuckin piece of shit. text battling aint shit man n some of yall act like don dotta's cuz yall can text battle n got text battle respect around here... that aint shit to me, and yall treat me with no respect n expect me to give u respect off tect battling. unabomber n shit. w/e tho. haters can hate.

haters?

you want to cry over good votes some more..?

There was no disrespect shown - just brutal fucking honesty..

I can see what youre trying to say about "text punches" and missing - but text battling is the same thing - you have to "hurt" your opponent still.. Which in your verse isn't evident..

It's not harsh dude - It's just the way text battling works - something I had to learn.. coming from a violently different world - but I got the hang of it..

Oh and don't attack mods.. for no real reason..

Thanks for the votes people - good battle Willy - mebbe round 2 sometime..

uppin