The 10th Plague: R2) Dressed2Kill vs. Dalinquent |
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Bolo
Standard Member ¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
Topic: R2) Dressed2Kill vs. Dalinquent Posted: 23 September 2008 at 7:28pm |
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First to 5 or 3KO Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained Vote swaying will be deleted Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided If you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show (IMPORTANT: If you don't think you will be able to make it, the sooner you make me aware of it, the better, as a reserve will be selected to take your place.) All verses must be in by: Thursday, 2nd of October 2008 at 12:00 AM EST (that's Midnight on Wednesday EST, or 5am Thurs. GMT) There's no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! if you have problems PM'ing it to me, my email address is in my profile. If you have to e-mail your verse, make sure you title of the e-mail reads: "(your username) - Round 1 verse vs. (your opponent)". NO EXCUSES. Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. If you finish your verse ahead of the deadline, send it to me as soon as possible. Verses will be posted and the battles opened for votes as soon as both verses are received. Edited by Bolo - 24 September 2008 at 10:28am |
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Bolo
Standard Member ¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
Posted: 02 October 2008 at 4:21pm | |
dtk:
Expos *Dallas Stars..self explanitory *St Quentin is a prison..his first names quentin *For all you U.K. kids..his names Quentin Barber..a QB is a quarterback in football..a blitz means to basically rush the passer *He had partial ownership of S.E.C. with Mackie *Calls himself Salvatore..Salvatore means Savior *Dal is a character in the book the outsiders..im predicting that people know this novel?
Kid You're LA's Hoe..Ya Fucked,An Il Be Breakin The Slut! Sure Ya Last Names Barber..But Hell You Aint Makin The Cut! I Beat Up On Rookies..And This Hater Is Next Bitch Dal A Star?Not Even If He Was A Hockey Player In Texas!* He Aint Got Venom..While I Stay Fresh And All Out Spittin Quentin Aint Familiar With Bars..Unless Were Talkin About Prisons! Im Already Under His Skin!We All Know This Weaklin's Rippin Its Funny How I Got QB Under Pressure..And I Aint Even Blitzin!* You Know You Got No Chance..Il Be Smashing Fucking Nerds Dal Aint Even Respectable..He Stays Wack By Ducking Herbs..
This Kids A Faggot..Claming That Im Gonna Get Fucked, What?
History's Biting Salvatores Ass..Yupp This Savior Is Left Strung Up!*
Im A Powerhouse Hitter..Dress Will Be Leaving His Ass Dyin
He Releases Beats Out For Free..Cuz Nobody Would Buy Em!
Dude You're Going No Where Fast! Like A Car Without Tires
Dal Aint Gettin Props Unless He Was In That Book The Outsiders!* Dal:
..::FYI::..
Lindsey = GF/She cheated on him before* Hasn't done audio in ages, Claims he can't afford a mic of his own** http://img513.imageshack.us/my.php?image=verygoodfootballpictureyn1.jpg*** Erm...**** Round two? Time to pound you, No point in you trying to win... This battle's like when Lindsey cheated, I'm about t'have him crying again* Boohoo Bitch... Dress'll get dropped to the floor, Dal overshadows this dude See I broke even, In less than 100 matches WITHOUT battling noobs Dal's is smashing ya duke... And I only say you're trash cause it's true why the fuck you think Nick stop letting ya wack ass in the booth?** I'm bashin' this fruit, And showing the world your a faggot now Riddle me this... Since when is scoring with balls worth braggin about?*** Get ya ass out ya mouth, Cause the shit ya talkin is weak homie And the way I'm fuckin' up dress, Ya'll goin think I spilled a drink on D**** Look bitch, My shit is dope whereas ya drops boring... So fa the W, I'ma scorch this bitch and leave josh broilin Cause you straight weak, And after this verse, I'mma make you hate me Cause I'm destroying my fan, Like I upgraded to A.C. F-F-F-Finish Him... I'm bout t'pummble this bitch, DTK, You ain't fucking with this Truth be told, The dopest bars in ya posts usually come in ya sig |
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Kay B
Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 02 October 2008 at 6:20pm | |
Dress Kid You're LA's Hoe..Ya Fucked,An Il Be Breakin The Slut! Sure Ya Last Names Barber..But Hell You Aint Makin The Cut! Nice wordplay and swing punch was there but i think it was doper play that actual punch, nice open though I Beat Up On Rookies..And This Hater Is Next Bitch Dal A Star?Not Even If He Was A Hockey Player In Texas!* Lol nice, again decent play and the punch landed He Aint Got Venom..While I Stay Fresh And All Out Spittin Quentin Aint Familiar With Bars..Unless Were Talkin About Prisons! Prison plays been on dal before but not in this manner so i think this was nice, good hit Im Already Under His Skin!We All Know This Weaklin's Rippin Its Funny How I Got QB Under Pressure..And I Aint Even Blitzin!* You Know You Got No Chance..Il Be Smashing Fucking Nerds Dal Aint Even Respectable..He Stays Wack By Ducking Herbs.. Nice personal This Kids A Faggot..Claming That Im Gonna Get Fucked, What? History's Biting Salvatores Ass..Yupp This Savior Is Left Strung Up!* Nice Im A Powerhouse Hitter..Dress Will Be Leaving His Ass Dyin He Releases Beats Out For Free..Cuz Nobody Would Buy Em! Meh this was iight but not the greatest Dude You're Going No Where Fast! Like A Car Without Tires
Dal Aint Gettin Props Unless He Was In That Book The Outsiders!*
Nice
Overall - Decent verse, had some punches that landed but than had certain bars that were better plays than actual punches imo, could go against you as im yet to read dal's verse
Round two? Time to pound you, No point in you trying to win...
This battle's like when Lindsey cheated, I'm about t'have him crying again* Nice, not as effective as it'd be with proof as it COULD be fake (not saying it is) but obviously with proof it'd hit harder...but it's decent Boohoo Bitch...
Dress'll get dropped to the floor, Dal overshadows this dude See I broke even, In less than 100 matches WITHOUT battling noobs Lol nice, great hit and decent personal Dal's is smashing ya duke... And I only say you're trash cause it's true why the fuck you think Nick stop letting ya wack ass in the booth?** haha again nice funny punch...i dint know dress EVER done audio?..but i guess i was wrong lol nice hit I'm bashin' this fruit, And showing the world your a faggot now Riddle me this... Since when is scoring with balls worth braggin about?*** Lol not the hardest of hits, but funny Get ya ass out ya mouth, Cause the shit ya talkin is weak homie And the way I'm fuckin' up dress, Ya'll goin think I spilled a drink on D**** Meh seen these types of plays alotta times...not too great Look bitch, My shit is dope whereas ya drops boring... So fa the W, I'ma scorch this bitch and leave josh broilin Cool Cause you straight weak, And after this verse, I'mma make you hate me Cause I'm destroying my fan, Like I upgraded to A.C. Lol nice F-F-F-Finish Him... I'm bout t'pummble this bitch, DTK, You ain't fucking with this Truth be told, The dopest bars in ya posts usually come in ya sig Meh not the greatest closer tbh ok punch i guess Overall - A decent verse, few nice punches that made me laugh, opener was cool closer wasn't all that, but had a decent mid section...punches landed Overall Vote - A real good battle, personally thought dress would take this but only problem i had with dress's verse was that it seemed to have more/better wordplay than the actual punch but did have a few nice bars...Where as dal just seemed to concentrate on hitting his oponent and hoping to catch him on the chin..hard one to call tbh...Both had decent hits and other good aspects in there verse's gotta come down to the verse i enjoyed and felt the better of the two Vote - Dress, others may disagree but i personally felt his verse more though dal had some nice lines..take nothing away from dal though, decent verse man...dope battle |
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Matt The Ripper
Superior Member Joined: 19 March 2008 Location: Cultus Lake, BC Status: Offline Points: 4042 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-40-2 Form: WLLLLL |
Posted: 02 October 2008 at 7:59pm | |
Kid You're LA's Hoe..Ya Fucked,An Il Be Breakin The Slut! Sure Ya Last Names Barber..But Hell You Aint Makin The Cut! I Beat Up On Rookies..And This Hater Is Next Bitch Dal A Star?Not Even If He Was A Hockey Player In Texas!* He Aint Got Venom..While I Stay Fresh And All Out Spittin Quentin Aint Familiar With Bars..Unless Were Talkin About Prisons! Im Already Under His Skin!We All Know This Weaklin's Rippin Its Funny How I Got QB Under Pressure..And I Aint Even Blitzin!* You Know You Got No Chance..Il Be Smashing Fucking Nerds
Opener: Not very strong, imo. Bar 2: Nice shot here. Bar 3: Love the set up here... and the follow through was well played. Bar 4: lol Bar 5: I've never seen it before, but i'm new and this just sounds played. Bar 6: Nice. Bar 7: Not bad. Closer: Nothing too hard-hitting here. Overall, my votes going to: DressToKill, for the better worded, better structured verse with harder hitting punches and better plays. |
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Matt The Ripper
Superior Member Joined: 19 March 2008 Location: Cultus Lake, BC Status: Offline Points: 4042 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-40-2 Form: WLLLLL |
Posted: 02 October 2008 at 8:00pm | |
Whoa.. that's kinda cool n' all, but can a mod fix whatever I did there, please? LOL
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
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I-kontinue
Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 02 October 2008 at 9:11pm | |
DTK
Opener: Solid. No complaints… Nice w/p & personal combo… 2nd bar: Ha… Nice hit… same opinion are above, getting at his audio, plus the wordplay… Pro-ish beginning so far yo… 3rd bar: You want this eh? Can see you did your research n shit… Even though bars/prison is played, you brought a new spin on it by personalizing it with his name… Solid 4th bar: Ha… Consistent hitting continues… This is my type’a w/p personal combo shit… 5th bar: This was okay because of it’s relevance… Good personal, and an okay hit… 6th bar: This was some sick shit... Simple as that... The link isn't working, so I researched myself that dude was a shoe designer... Ha... I can't believe no one's used this before... My fave hit of the verse 7th bar: Good use of personal yo… Nice clownin’ hit… 8th Cool closer… A very solid verse… You came correct… Nice research and use of wordplay/personal combo… DAL Opener: Wow. This is basically unfair… Very hard personal hit yo 2nd bar: Solid, nice clowin’ type hit… 3rd bar: This was straight… Another clownin’ type hit 4th bar: I like the integration of personal and wordplay… 5th bar: Not so hard of a hit… I’ve seen too many of these type hits against DTK… This didn’t really have enough of a unique spin to it for me 6th bar… Nice idea yo… The link helped alooot in this one. The different spellings are questionable… Brolin/Broilin… but I saw where you were comin from, so just the idea and relating this to the W gives you points… 7th bar: Nice… 8th bar: Good… no complaints, though this isn‘t overly dope either (For a closer especially)… Close battle… Good reads… Dal had the audio-type flow which helped his punches go together smoother. DTK’s w/p & personals combo was really nice in this though… Shit’s close, but when it comes to punch lines, I feel DTK had the slighter edge… He hit dal in 2 areas sometimes in a single punches, which is what I generally try to do/go for… Good battle… Definitely shouldn’t be a KO, but I’m not gonna vote on the other just because I think it wasn’t a KO… Close shit, best battle I’ve read so far V/DTK |
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Bolo
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Posted: 02 October 2008 at 9:32pm | |
DTK is through
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