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    Posted: 23 September 2008 at 7:28pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 October 2008 at 4:21pm
dtk:

Expos

*Dallas Stars..self explanitory

*St Quentin is a prison..his first names quentin

*For all you U.K. kids..his names Quentin Barber..a QB is a quarterback in football..a blitz means to basically rush the passer

*He had partial ownership of S.E.C. with Mackie

*Calls himself Salvatore..Salvatore means Savior

 *Dal is a character in the book the outsiders..im predicting that people know this novel?
 

Kid You're LA's Hoe..Ya Fucked,An Il Be Breakin The Slut!

Sure Ya Last Names Barber..But Hell You Aint Makin The Cut!

I Beat Up On Rookies..And This Hater Is Next Bitch

Dal A Star?Not Even If He Was A Hockey Player In Texas!*

He Aint Got Venom..While I Stay Fresh And All Out Spittin

Quentin Aint Familiar With Bars..Unless Were Talkin About Prisons!

Im Already Under His Skin!We All Know This Weaklin's Rippin

Its Funny How I Got QB Under Pressure..And I Aint Even Blitzin!*

You Know You Got No Chance..Il Be Smashing Fucking Nerds

Dal Aint Even Respectable..He Stays Wack By Ducking Herbs..
This Kids A Faggot..Claming That Im Gonna Get Fucked, What?
History's Biting Salvatores Ass..Yupp This Savior Is Left Strung Up!*
Im A Powerhouse Hitter..Dress Will Be Leaving His Ass Dyin
He Releases Beats Out For Free..Cuz Nobody Would Buy Em!
Dude You're Going No Where Fast! Like A Car Without Tires
Dal Aint Gettin Props Unless He Was In That Book The Outsiders!*



Dal:

..::FYI::..
Lindsey = GF/She cheated on him before*
Hasn't done audio in ages, Claims he can't afford a mic of his own**
http://img513.imageshack.us/my.php?image=verygoodfootballpictureyn1.jpg***
Erm...****

Round two? Time to pound you, No point in you trying to win...
This battle's like when Lindsey cheated, I'm about t'have him crying again*

Boohoo Bitch...

Dress'll get dropped to the floor, Dal overshadows this dude
See I broke even, In less than 100 matches WITHOUT battling noobs
Dal's is smashing ya duke... And I only say you're trash cause it's true
why the fuck you think Nick stop letting ya wack ass in the booth?**
I'm bashin' this fruit, And showing the world your a faggot now
Riddle me this... Since when is scoring with balls worth braggin about?***
Get ya ass out ya mouth, Cause the shit ya talkin is weak homie
And the way I'm fuckin' up dress, Ya'll goin think I spilled a drink on D****

Look bitch, My shit is dope whereas ya drops boring...
So fa the W, I'ma scorch this bitch and leave josh broilin
Cause you straight weak, And after this verse, I'mma make you hate me
Cause I'm destroying my fan, Like I upgraded to A.C.

F-F-F-Finish Him...

I'm bout t'pummble this bitch, DTK, You ain't fucking with this
Truth be told, The dopest bars in ya posts usually come in ya sig

I am the one that knocks...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 October 2008 at 6:20pm

Dress


Kid You're LA's Hoe..Ya Fucked,An Il Be Breakin The Slut!

Sure Ya Last Names Barber..But Hell You Aint Makin The Cut!

Nice wordplay and swing punch was there but i think it was doper play that actual punch, nice open though

I Beat Up On Rookies..And This Hater Is Next Bitch

Dal A Star?Not Even If He Was A Hockey Player In Texas!*

Lol nice, again decent play and the punch landed

He Aint Got Venom..While I Stay Fresh And All Out Spittin

Quentin Aint Familiar With Bars..Unless Were Talkin About Prisons!

Prison plays been on dal before but not in this manner so i think this was nice, good hit

Im Already Under His Skin!We All Know This Weaklin's Rippin

Its Funny How I Got QB Under Pressure..And I Aint Even Blitzin!*

This was iight nice play, but not the greatest punch imo

You Know You Got No Chance..Il Be Smashing Fucking Nerds

Dal Aint Even Respectable..He Stays Wack By Ducking Herbs..
Nice personal
This Kids A Faggot..Claming That Im Gonna Get Fucked, What?
History's Biting Salvatores Ass..Yupp This Savior Is Left Strung Up!*
Nice
Im A Powerhouse Hitter..Dress Will Be Leaving His Ass Dyin
He Releases Beats Out For Free..Cuz Nobody Would Buy Em!
Meh this was iight but not the greatest
Dude You're Going No Where Fast! Like A Car Without Tires
Dal Aint Gettin Props Unless He Was In That Book The Outsiders!*
Nice

Overall -
Decent verse, had some punches that landed but than had certain bars that were better plays than actual punches imo, could go against you as im yet to read dal's verse

Round two? Time to pound you, No point in you trying to win...
This battle's like when Lindsey cheated, I'm about t'have him crying again*
Nice, not as effective as it'd be with proof as it COULD be fake (not saying it is) but obviously with proof it'd hit harder...but it's decent

Boohoo Bitch...

Dress'll get dropped to the floor, Dal overshadows this dude
See I broke even, In less than 100 matches WITHOUT battling noobs
Lol nice, great hit and decent personal
Dal's is smashing ya duke... And I only say you're trash cause it's true

why the fuck you think Nick stop letting ya wack ass in the booth?**
haha again nice funny punch...i dint know dress EVER done audio?..but i guess i was wrong lol nice hit
I'm bashin' this fruit, And showing the world your a faggot now
Riddle me this... Since when is scoring with balls worth braggin about?***
Lol not the hardest of hits, but funny
Get ya ass out ya mouth, Cause the shit ya talkin is weak homie
And the way I'm fuckin' up dress, Ya'll goin think I spilled a drink on D****
Meh seen these types of plays alotta times...not too great

Look bitch, My shit is dope whereas ya drops boring...
So fa the W, I'ma scorch this bitch and leave josh broilin
Cool
Cause you straight weak, And after this verse, I'mma make you hate me
Cause I'm destroying my fan, Like I upgraded to A.C.
Lol nice

F-F-F-Finish Him...

I'm bout t'pummble this bitch, DTK, You ain't fucking with this
Truth be told, The dopest bars in ya posts usually come in ya sig
Meh not the greatest closer tbh ok punch i guess

Overall - 
A decent verse, few nice punches that made me laugh, opener was cool closer wasn't all that, but had a decent mid section...punches landed

Overall Vote -
A real good battle, personally thought dress would take this but only problem i had with dress's verse was that it seemed to have more/better wordplay than the actual punch but did have a few nice bars...Where as dal just seemed to concentrate on hitting his oponent and hoping to catch him on the chin..hard one to call tbh...Both had decent hits and other good aspects in there verse's gotta come down to the verse i enjoyed and felt the better of the two

Vote - Dress, others may disagree but i personally felt his verse more though dal had some nice lines..take nothing away from dal though, decent verse man...dope battle


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 October 2008 at 7:59pm

Originally posted by DressToKill DressToKill wrote:

Kid You're LA's Hoe..Ya Fucked,An Il Be Breakin The Slut!

Sure Ya Last Names Barber..But Hell You Aint Makin The Cut!

I Beat Up On Rookies..And This Hater Is Next Bitch

Dal A Star?Not Even If He Was A Hockey Player In Texas!*

He Aint Got Venom..While I Stay Fresh And All Out Spittin

Quentin Aint Familiar With Bars..Unless Were Talkin About Prisons!

Im Already Under His Skin!We All Know This Weaklin's Rippin

Its Funny How I Got QB Under Pressure..And I Aint Even Blitzin!*

You Know You Got No Chance..Il Be Smashing Fucking Nerds

Dal Aint Even Respectable..He Stays Wack By Ducking Herbs..
This Kids A Faggot..Claming That Im Gonna Get Fucked, What?
History's Biting Salvatores Ass..Yupp This Savior Is Left Strung Up!*
Im A Powerhouse Hitter..Dress Will Be Leaving His Ass Dyin
He Releases Beats Out For Free..Cuz Nobody Would Buy Em!
Dude You're Going No Where Fast! Like A Car Without Tires
Dal Aint Gettin Props Unless He Was In That Book The Outsiders!*


Opener: Nice opener, good strong set-up and a nice delivery on the punch.
Bar 2: Nice play.
Bar 3: Haha... nice play once again!
Bar 4: Not feeling this one so much.
Bar 5: Nice hit here.
Bar 6: lol. Got a laugh out of me, anyway.
Bar 7: Decent personal.
Closer: Very nice...



Originally posted by Dal Dal wrote:


Round two? Time to pound you, No point in you trying to win...

This battle's like when Lindsey cheated, I'm about t'have him crying again*

Boohoo Bitch...

Dress'll get dropped to the floor, Dal overshadows this dude
See I broke even, In less than 100 matches WITHOUT battling noobs
Dal's is smashing ya duke... And I only say you're trash cause it's true
why the fuck you think Nick stop letting ya wack ass in the booth?**
I'm bashin' this fruit, And showing the world your a faggot now
Riddle me this... Since when is scoring with balls worth braggin about?***
Get ya ass out ya mouth, Cause the shit ya talkin is weak homie
And the way I'm fuckin' up dress, Ya'll goin think I spilled a drink on D****

Look bitch, My shit is dope whereas ya drops boring...
So fa the W, I'ma scorch this bitch and leave josh broilin
Cause you straight weak, And after this verse, I'mma make you hate me
Cause I'm destroying my fan, Like I upgraded to A.C.

F-F-F-Finish Him...

I'm bout t'pummble this bitch, DTK, You ain't fucking with this
Truth be told, The dopest bars in ya posts usually come in ya sig


Opener: Not very strong, imo.
Bar 2: Nice shot here.
Bar 3: Love the set up here... and the follow through was well played.
Bar 4: lol
Bar 5: I've never seen it before, but i'm new and this just sounds played.
Bar 6: Nice.
Bar 7: Not bad.
Closer: Nothing too hard-hitting here.




Overall, my votes going to: DressToKill, for the better worded, better structured verse with harder hitting punches and better plays.

Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth


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Whoa.. that's kinda cool n' all, but can a mod fix whatever I did there, please? LOL
Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 October 2008 at 9:11pm
DTK
Opener: Solid. No complaints… Nice w/p & personal combo…
2nd bar: Ha… Nice hit… same opinion are above, getting at his audio, plus the wordplay… Pro-ish beginning so far yo…
3rd bar: You want this eh? Can see you did your research n shit… Even though bars/prison is played, you brought a new spin on it by personalizing it with his name… Solid
4th bar: Ha… Consistent hitting continues… This is my type’a w/p personal combo shit…
5th bar: This was okay because of it’s relevance… Good personal, and an okay hit…
6th bar: This was some sick shit... Simple as that... The link isn't working, so I researched myself that dude was a shoe designer... Ha... I can't believe no one's used this before... My fave hit of the verse
7th bar: Good use of personal yo… Nice clownin’ hit…
8th Cool closer…

A very solid verse… You came correct… Nice research and use of wordplay/personal combo…

DAL
Opener: Wow. This is basically unfair… Very hard personal hit yo
2nd bar: Solid, nice clowin’ type hit…
3rd bar: This was straight… Another clownin’ type hit
4th bar: I like the integration of personal and wordplay…
5th bar: Not so hard of a hit… I’ve seen too many of these type hits against DTK… This didn’t really have enough of a unique spin to it for me
6th bar… Nice idea yo… The link helped alooot in this one. The different spellings are questionable… Brolin/Broilin… but I saw where you were comin from, so just the idea and relating this to the W gives you points…
7th bar: Nice…
8th bar: Good… no complaints, though this isn‘t overly dope either (For a closer especially)…

Close battle… Good reads… Dal had the audio-type flow which helped his punches go together smoother. DTK’s w/p & personals combo was really nice in this though… Shit’s close, but when it comes to punch lines, I feel DTK had the slighter edge… He hit dal in 2 areas sometimes in a single punches, which is what I generally try to do/go for… Good battle… Definitely shouldn’t be a KO, but I’m not gonna vote on the other just because I think it wasn’t a KO… Close shit, best battle I’ve read so far

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 October 2008 at 9:32pm
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