Spit for Rank: RanK Me Kid:)

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   CheCc Dis Out  

For Da Bread i STay In da *Cut* Like KnifeZ Wen Stabbin//
YoU NiGghuz Frial Sittin BaCc While Ya Lyfe Is Crashin//
ill SNatch Ya Girl While Ya Lyfe If Passin U Talk alot of SHyt But No *Action*
YoU NiGgHuz Die When Da Riffle Clappin Put Her In da RoOm While Da Lights Is Flashin// She Bent Down Nd Told Me to *Beat It* Like Micheal Jackson!//U SlaCcin While Im Snappin U Gona Die When Im PoPpin Dis//
Bullets Penetrate Threw Ya Skull Nd ya AsSoffoGus//
Ma Album Yea im DroPpin It Ima Grind Till i Got ThiCk Cash//
Nd If u A Fag Ill Make Ya Eyes *Blue* Like *Crip* FlaGz//
Big MaGz Enough To Leave Dis NigGhuz Bones Broke//
i Aint In WWF But Dawg Ma BlOod Is *Stone Cold*//
And You Hoes KNow ill Grip Da Mac Nd PoP Away//
Da Bullets?? Sound Like *PoP Corn* In a Microwave!//
shyytttt......I Got Alot Of Ways To Git Ma Hands On Dis GravY *OcK*//
Talk Shyt Till Da EightY CoCkEd Da Gact LOaded Wit CraZzy Shots//
Da HoOd KNow I PLay Wit Weight Cuttin Coke Wit Razer Blades//
i Handle Da *RoCk*=(CoCain) Well But Naw i Aint Dwayne Wade!*

Edited by X=xSclusivex=X - 26 April 2007 at 10:08pm

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X=xSclusivex=X Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 April 2007 Status: Offline Points: 216 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-2-0 Form: WWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote X=xSclusivex=X Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: RanK Me Kid:) Posted: 26 April 2007 at 9:52pm
	CheCc Dis Out For Da Bread i STay In da Cut Like KnifeZ Wen Stabbin// YoU NiGghuz Frial Sittin BaCc While Ya Lyfe Is Crashin// ill SNatch Ya Girl While Ya Lyfe If Passin U Talk alot of SHyt But No Action YoU NiGgHuz Die When Da Riffle Clappin Put Her In da RoOm While Da Lights Is Flashin// She Bent Down Nd Told Me to Beat It Like Micheal Jackson!//U SlaCcin While Im Snappin U Gona Die When Im PoPpin Dis// Bullets Penetrate Threw Ya Skull Nd ya AsSoffoGus// Ma Album Yea im DroPpin It Ima Grind Till i Got ThiCk Cash// Nd If u A Fag Ill Make Ya Eyes Blue Like Crip FlaGz// Big MaGz Enough To Leave Dis NigGhuz Bones Broke// i Aint In WWF But Dawg Ma BlOod Is Stone Cold// And You Hoes KNow ill Grip Da Mac Nd PoP Away// Da Bullets?? Sound Like PoP Corn In a Microwave!// shyytttt......I Got Alot Of Ways To Git Ma Hands On Dis GravY OcK// Talk Shyt Till Da EightY CoCkEd Da Gact LOaded Wit CraZzy Shots// Da HoOd KNow I PLay Wit Weight Cuttin Coke Wit Razer Blades// i Handle Da RoCk=(CoCain) Well But Naw i Aint Dwayne Wade!* Edited by X=xSclusivex=X - 26 April 2007 at 10:08pm
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G-Pfeif Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 19 June 2004 Location: Maryland Status: Offline Points: 2541 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-0 Form: WWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote G-Pfeif Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 26 April 2007 at 9:57pm
	lmao... you actually have to post a verse up to be ranked
	<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v313/G-Pfeif/SuckaMCTo-DoList.png" /> "I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks"

X=xSclusivex=X Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 April 2007 Status: Offline Points: 216 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-2-0 Form: WWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote X=xSclusivex=X Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 26 April 2007 at 10:21pm
	Ma BAd ma Shyt FcCed Up When i Was TypIn OcK,BhUt Chea Ery 1 Rate Holla At Dis Jawn.
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G-Pfeif Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 19 June 2004 Location: Maryland Status: Offline Points: 2541 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-0 Form: WWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote G-Pfeif Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 26 April 2007 at 10:31pm
	i like this... you could structure it a little better... but you have a street style without being played and boring... there was some creative shit here. not bad.. i say AMA the three ranks are Novice, amateur, and Professional... i think this is amateur
	<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v313/G-Pfeif/SuckaMCTo-DoList.png" /> "I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks"

X=xSclusivex=X Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 April 2007 Status: Offline Points: 216 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-2-0 Form: WWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote X=xSclusivex=X Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 26 April 2007 at 10:35pm
	ThanKz B For Da Construcive Critsm:) UpPin
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dalinquent Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote dalinquent Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 26 April 2007 at 10:38pm
	I'd say low ama becuase he shit was played imo...The fact that he knows how to make wordplay/punches gets him ama tho...If he could come up with less predictable lines he'd get ama but low ama for now...wait their both the same...Course, me vote dont count so uppin


2smooth Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote 2smooth Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 April 2007 at 10:18am
	i don't know if my vote still counts in here, seeing as it's been quite a while... but i vote AMA as well... you got some good ideas (yeah a few were played, but you tried to give them your own twist) and a good flow... like GP said, work on your structure a bit and maybe shorten a few sylables here and there to improve the flow... try to think up wordplays that are less street talk and more intelligent and that will help too... nice drop, tho...