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.hang-man. 
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 Topic: rank....Posted: 23 January 2008 at 2:20pm |
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yupyupyup.... ya cheap hoes lost.... i'll beat ya ass down at low cost.& you'll only turn the TIDE when you need ya clothes wash.
my blows boss, came to the site like whats the smerk about?
all i see is unemplyment lines, coz that shit aint workin out.
i'll jerk ya mouth, wanna talk about rank but ya sound weak.
im on top of the food chain.... most of yall is just ground beef.
shits astounding, fuck with me?.... if any rapper choose,
you'll 'fall out boy' until every alternative band is after you.
get crack in two, whatver your shits are you wont get far.
& if the 'odd' are against me, i'll break even like a twixs bar.
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 4:10pm |
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To me Thats Just a load of Random Bullshit made up into 10 lines.
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.hang-man.
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 5:07pm |
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please elaborate? |
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.hang-man.
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 5:11pm |
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understanding a punch the most important aspect of texts. |
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 5:16pm |
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well basically ur just chatting about nothing, which to me sounds like you have no reason for the drop and just want to get a rank straight away,
get crack in two, whatver your shits are you wont get far.
& if the 'odd' are against me, i'll break even like a twixs bar. i mean what is the point in including that line it has no purpose whatsoever thats why i gave it novice |
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.hang-man.
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 5:22pm |
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your not good at this are you? |
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 5:23pm |
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well i cant give much feed besides it being next to nothing there many people would agree with wat i gave it although you do have potential as the flow is there and it flows very sweetly but the verse just aint working in terms of content anywayz nice drop and drop some open mics which have a little bit more to em than this drop
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.hang-man.
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 5:32pm |
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do you know what it means to have the odds against you? & whats the opposite of odd, EVEN. so which is stating i'll BREAK EVEN. you do know punclines are double standard? |
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.hang-man.
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 5:33pm |
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oh shit ma bad, you thought this was a written piece? no no no, its a battle verse. hahahaha, thats where the communication problem start lol....
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Scotty32
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 5:38pm |
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Since this is "Spit for Rank" you only need to listen to S4R Judges
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.hang-man.
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 5:48pm |
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for rank do you spit written or anyhting coz i dropped a battle verse |
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Bolo
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 6:09pm |
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technicaly anything...but generally battles are preffered, since thats usually the point of being ranked
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I am the one that knocks...
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Fatal
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 6:10pm |
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I'd advise not listening to CJ since he's one of the worst on the site, (no offense cj) nor is he even a judge, so i dont know why he's even posting in here...also to answer ya question, you can drop either a battle verse OR regular verse...doesnt matter As for your rank, you seem to know what your doing....you have a grasp of punches and wordplay...but they were quite simple...i'd suggest reading battles from our better members to get an idea of dope punches...
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 6:55pm |
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my prayer:
times up, the road to sucess is like an egg & my guides fuck,
scrambling for the light but i'll never see the sunny side up.
thats just my luck, bones all watered down & my joints fluid
try to stand tall but like a fat person chin, theres no point to it.
so if i put my point through it,.... it'll just border what is mine.
wanted to block it out but it was in every corner of my mind.
im askin for more this time, GOD, please dont push me.
im sorry, i had to let the cat out the bag coz i aint no pussy.
its not what it should be. look, the enime was actin dull.
they had a bone to pick, so now im left with a fracture skull.
& a cracked up jaw, open heavens door, the abuse aint fair.
im not askin for a seat, just hopin we can play musical chair.
*PATIENT DIED IN HOSPITLE BED*
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.hang-man.
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 6:56pm |
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hows that for a written? o yeah i kyestyle my battle verse |
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Posted: 23 January 2008 at 7:44pm |
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only one verse allowed homie... and im goin off of your first...
i agree with fatal... AMA you have a grasp of multi's and original punches.. liked the workin out line... few others were decent.. i like ya style... nice flow there... you deff could use some polishing.. but id say this was pretty decent.... and CJ... shut the hell up... the day your opinion counts on this site is the day i leave |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 24 January 2008 at 10:54am |
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so ur offerin me ur S4R Status when u leave then pfeif?
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Scotty32
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Posted: 24 January 2008 at 11:01am |
Though it is very kind of G-Pfeif to give you his S4R Judge status, im afraid its not down to him. Only I can appoint people S4R Judges, so if Pfeif left, you wouldnt be able to be a S4R Judge. Enjoy.. |
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Rameez
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Posted: 26 January 2008 at 12:33am |
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that was pretty good verse hang.man nice multi and good flow all the way.. CJ don't critique on these Ranking threads.. and your level is lower than this person who jus spitted.. so take it easy...
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Posted: 26 January 2008 at 10:47am |
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didnt even realize im still on as a judge..
like everyone said dont listen to CJ, u got good rhymes and flow, punches are decent, good use some more agressive punches to make em hit harder, but u said it was keystyle so thats all good
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