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Cee-Jay Outlaw 
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 Topic: Round 3 - Kay Vs SpumePosted: 10 May 2013 at 5:05pm |
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Verses due.. 20th May at Midnight BST
blind drops, same as before 16 lines check in so I know you're cool good luck!
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 5:44pm |
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Kay B
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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 5:59pm |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:26pm |
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Kay
Unlike ya last two 'wins', i ain't duckin, so patience
But ONLY time U come close to K..is ya fuckin' location Ya last two verses spume, had to be drunk, n drink to quote Best bet's to use big words, the voters may THINK its dope Rep the same crew but the top talent..U aint near those Props for not gettin stuck in a jam...nah bitch it was CLEAR ROAD I'll leave u callin' em dickriders, ya lost it an' moaning Punched so hard spumes left with HIS definition, frothin' n foamin' Claimin' u can win this shit, go ahead scream n shout..ya fucked Cause like being a mod, once again my jobs to take out corrupt I worry for you, delusional already without receiving shots Get the drs in LI,this kid genuinely believes he's hot!!! Your a ghost kid, not relevant, a few believers?..Crock of shit Checked the open mic, n it's the ONLY place u ain't droppin shit (where u at)... Must feel good being in the semi's, an not yet met dudes? Manc lied spume, shit wernt slept ON..it was fuckin slept THROUGH Fuck outta here with ur easy wins.... |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:28pm |
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Spume
Expo: Kay is mid-table and from Watford Watford just made the play offs/ its a runners up position..(Championship) The Ram thing is on the real............Fuck a link!!!! Jehu.... Kay was behind Manc in the ranks and then Jehu showed up and knocked him down Closer...Big Game doubts I can win this/ Jams an HanGing ducked me HanGing is Kay's leader(Mod) and Kay is goosed here!! ............................................................................................................... I hate Kay B Emo style, dont know why he'd wanna spit gay proving his steeze is mixed up with "shit" as my E Bom hits Kay What dat ego driven bitch say? Prediction was fake an way off like Buaben of Ghana this Watford midfielder only makes the play offs Try taking the day off! 9000 post, and ya'll rep is still as soft as cheese I lost all respect for this salty spreadable catching feelings off rameze Try dealing with this grief! Choked up like you got cocks in the mouth only cos this trash is a puppet for LI do we call him Oscar the Grouch Jehu's knocking him down! A new running in the ranks you'll find an Kay B pissed, he wanna be the one coming up on Manc's behind Crazy in love like that, but if this bitch is Fierce he aint bringing it its clear when B goes hard he wants Jay to put a ring on it............(SICK) The thing is this, I'm killing off a weakling an everybody seeing it What the fucks up with da crew Lyricist Inc? I'd never wanna B in it Stinging hits prove my doubters wrong! Punches have fucked this dude Game is off, you should try follow my leader, this is duck duck goose!! |
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spume corrupt
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Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL |
Posted: 22 May 2013 at 12:51pm |
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Good battle Kay!!!
Anybody wanna break this down an vote? |
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Kay B
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Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 22 May 2013 at 7:53pm |
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You too man, let's get some votes on this
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BIG GAME
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Joined: 16 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 4322 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-4-0 Form: WLWWLW |
Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:55pm |
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Kay
Unlike ya last two 'wins', i ain't duckin, so patience
But ONLY time U come close to K..is ya fuckin' location Great way to start this off! Congrats Kay, you get the first 10/10 I have EVER gave. Great set up, execution, wordplay and multis. 10/10 Ya last two verses spume, had to be drunk, n drink to quote Best bet's to use big words, the voters may THINK its dope I dunno Kay, I'm not feeling this. Excuse me if I'm missing the punch, but if there isn't some type of underlying punch here, this seems to be more of a statement. 6/10 Rep the same crew but the top talent..U aint near those Props for not gettin stuck in a jam...nah bitch it was CLEAR ROAD Nice concept here, but it could have been stronger imo. 7/10 I'll leave u callin' em dickriders, ya lost it an' moaning Punched so hard spumes left with HIS definition, frothin' n foamin' I've seen this type of Spume play before, but this has a bit of original touch to it imo.7/10 Claimin' u can win this shit, go ahead scream n shout..ya fucked Cause like being a mod, once again my jobs to take out corrupt This was pretty solid imo. Nice set up, execution, multis and nameplay, and concept. 8/10 I worry for you, delusional already without receiving shots Get the drs in LI,this kid genuinely believes he's hot!!! This was creative and has some clever wordplay and nice multis 7/10 Your a ghost kid, not relevant, a few believers?..Crock of shit Checked the open mic, n it's the ONLY place u ain't droppin shit (where u at)... A small jab here 5/10 Must feel good being in the semi's, an not yet met dudes? Manc lied spume, shit wernt slept ON..it was fuckin slept THROUGH not bad, but lacked some impact 7/10 Spume I hate Kay B Emo style, dont know why he'd wanna spit gay proving his steeze is mixed up with "shit" as my E Bom hits Kay I pm'd you an asked for an expo on this bar and I still don't really understand it completely. I got to say it's just not a real decent concept 5/10 What dat ego driven bitch say? Prediction was fake an way off like Buaben of Ghana this Watford midfielder only makes the play offs Not too shabby, Nice little analogy there. 6/10 Try taking the day off! 9000 post, and ya'll rep is still as soft as cheese I lost all respect for this salty spreadable catching feelings off rameze This was pretty statementish imo Not too hard of a hit 6/10 Try dealing with this grief! Choked up like you got cocks in the mouth only cos this trash is a puppet for LI do we call him Oscar the Grouch Not bad here, Nice little personal, but nothing too solid 6/10 Jehu's knocking him down! A new running in the ranks you'll find an Kay B pissed, he wanna be the one coming up on Manc's behind ehh, I dunno if I would have taken the gay route. 6/10 Crazy in love like that, but if this bitch is Fierce he aint bringing it its clear when B goes hard he wants Jay to put a ring on it............(SICK) Clever wordplay and nameplay but, I'm jus not feeling the gay approach here ... 6/10 The thing is this, I'm killing off a weakling an everybody seeing it What the fucks up with da crew Lyricist Inc? I'd never wanna B in it This was actually a dope bar. Nice set up and execution and concept. 9/10 Stinging hits prove my doubters wrong! Punches have fucked this dude Game is off, you should try follow my leader, this is duck duck goose!! This was funny, not much of a hit though. 7/10 Alright, time to do some math ... Kay B: 57 Spume: 51 Well if my maths correct V:Kay No hate fellas, I wish ya both could win. But only one can. Good Luck. |
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spume corrupt
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Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL |
Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:06pm |
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Preciate the feedback bg
1/0 Kay b |
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BIG GAME
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Joined: 16 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 4322 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-4-0 Form: WLWWLW |
Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:13pm |
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No prob Spume,
I feel kinda shitty tho because I still don't understand the opener. So if you want to dis-allow my vote, i would completely understand. Because this IS a semi final round and I would want my voters to understand my punches if they are going to vote. One time Ki said I was a boxing ref, cos I don't get punches .lol I'm just tryin to help get this process on it's way as nobody is voting. I hate voting against anybody who made it this far! |
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Kay B
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Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:21pm |
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Thanks for the vote and breakdown game, appreciate it
1-0 uppin |
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The_Guy
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:52pm |
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Unlike ya last two 'wins', i ain't duckin, so patience
But ONLY time U come close to K..is ya fuckin' location Great opener...punch was there, wordplay was there also 9/10 Ya last two verses spume, had to be drunk, n drink to quote Best bet's to use big words, the voters may THINK its dope THe use of big words make people THINK its good...i see where you are coming from just didnt hit that hard like your opener 7/10 Rep the same crew but the top talent..U aint near those Props for not gettin stuck in a jam...nah bitch it was CLEAR ROAD Decent punch...7/10 I'll leave u callin' em dickriders, ya lost it an' moaning Punched so hard spumes left with HIS definition, frothin' n foamin' Decent name play with the definition of "spume"...7/10 Claimin' u can win this shit, go ahead scream n shout..ya fucked Cause like being a mod, once again my jobs to take out corrupt ehh...this was an ok line...didnt hit that hard to me...6/10 I worry for you, delusional already without receiving shots Get the drs in LI,this kid genuinely believes he's hot!!! I like the concept of this with the whole doctor and shots and feeling hot...7/10 Your a ghost kid, not relevant, a few believers?..Crock of shit Checked the open mic, n it's the ONLY place u ain't droppin shit (where u at)... ehhh...6/10 Must feel good being in the semi's, an not yet met dudes? Manc lied spume, shit wernt slept ON..it was fuckin slept THROUGH Could have ended your verse stronger...had a little punch but not much...6/10 I hate Kay B Emo style, dont know why he'd wanna spit gay proving his steeze is mixed up with "shit" as my E Bom hits Kay Went over my head...5/10 What dat ego driven bitch say? Prediction was fake an way off like Buaben of Ghana this Watford midfielder only makes the play offs Nice set up....decent punch 7/10 Try taking the day off! 9000 post, and ya'll rep is still as soft as cheese I lost all respect for this salty spreadable catching feelings off rameze Didn't hit that hard to me...5/10 Try dealing with this grief! Choked up like you got cocks in the mouth only cos this trash is a puppet for LI do we call him Oscar the Grouch decent set up and punch...7/10 Jehu's knocking him down! A new running in the ranks you'll find an Kay B pissed, he wanna be the one coming up on Manc's behind I like the wordplay and concept 8/10 Crazy in love like that, but if this bitch is Fierce he aint bringing it its clear when B goes hard he wants Jay to put a ring on it............(SICK) Again, nice wordplay and concept 8/10 The thing is this, I'm killing off a weakling an everybody seeing it What the fucks up with da crew Lyricist Inc? I'd never wanna B in it Decent attempt at a personal/punch 7/10 Stinging hits prove my doubters wrong! Punches have fucked this dude Game is off, you should try follow my leader, this is duck duck goose!! Kay-55Decent closer...7/10 Spume-54 V:Kay by a point...great battle from both...and respect to both for bringing your best(if that was y'all best) no shade thrown to you spume. |
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 10:07pm |
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Ok new guy fair nuff
Thanks for taking the time out 2/0 Kay |
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The_Guy
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 10:37pm |
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no prob
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BIG GAME
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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 8:37pm |
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uppin
come on with the votes please. |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 9:14pm |
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Kay
Unlike ya last two 'wins', i ain't duckin, so patience But ONLY time U come close to K..is ya fuckin' location ^ Simple by your standards, but it hit, so 7/10. Ya last two verses spume, had to be drunk, n drink to quote Best bet's to use big words, the voters may THINK its dope ^Generic and general, but wasn't wack, so 5/10. Rep the same crew but the top talent..U aint near those Props for not gettin stuck in a jam...nah bitch it was CLEAR ROAD ^This was nice, nameplay, previous battle reference.. 8/10. I'll leave u callin' em dickriders, ya lost it an' moaning Punched so hard spumes left with HIS definition, frothin' n foamin' ^Alright, props for attacking his name, but it could've been more complex.. 6/10. Claimin' u can win this shit, go ahead scream n shout..ya fucked Cause like being a mod, once again my jobs to take out corrupt ^Nice bar, the set up was a bit choppy for me, but the punch made up for it. 7/10. I worry for you, delusional already without receiving shots Get the drs in LI,this kid genuinely believes he's hot!!! ^Only genuinely weak bar in your verse for me man. Some newb stuff. No hate. 4/10. Your a ghost kid, not relevant, a few believers?..Crock of shit Checked the open mic, n it's the ONLY place u ain't droppin shit (where u at)... ^Generic filler, but you got at him, and it had that aggression. 5/10. Must feel good being in the semi's, an not yet met dudes? Manc lied spume, shit wernt slept ON..it was fuckin slept THROUGH ^Good way to finish it, solid reference, clowning shit. 7/10. Spume I hate Kay B Emo style, dont know why he'd wanna spit gay proving his steeze is mixed up with "shit" as my E Bom hits Kay ^This isn't a complicated line, so I don't see the confusion. I think it's cos you highlighted 'shit', people were waiting for mind blowing word play. This was an alright opener, but not much of a punch. 5/10. What dat ego driven bitch say? Prediction was fake an way off like Buaben of Ghana this Watford midfielder only makes the play offs ^This was nice. Good use of location and social relevance. 7/10. Try taking the day off! 9000 post, and ya'll rep is still as soft as cheese I lost all respect for this salty spreadable catching feelings off rameze ^This wasn't complex, but it did make me laugh. Clowning, whilst bringing up some LA history. 7/10. Try dealing with this grief! Choked up like you got cocks in the mouth only cos this trash is a puppet for LI do we call him Oscar the Grouch ^Generic word play, with messy wording. 6/10. Jehu's knocking him down! A new running in the ranks you'll find an Kay B pissed, he wanna be the one coming up on Manc's behind ^This was some good shit. Relevant. Personal. Clowing. 8/10. Crazy in love like that, but if this bitch is Fierce he aint bringing it its clear when B goes hard he wants Jay to put a ring on it............(SICK) ^This was nice. But could've been better. Might've been better if you'd referenced 'Jay' as being homocide or J504. But I guess there wasn't the material. 7/10. The thing is this, I'm killing off a weakling an everybody seeing it What the fucks up with da crew Lyricist Inc? I'd never wanna B in it ^Ruthless. And name play. Like it. 7/10. Stinging hits prove my doubters wrong! Punches have fucked this dude Game is off, you should try follow my leader, this is duck duck goose ^Didn't hit for me if i'm being honest. Could've ended way better. 5/10. Kay- 49 Spume- 52 That's how I saw it anyway, it's a fucking close battle. Lots of highs and lows. And I find that you have very similar battle styles. No hate Kay, you know that. MVGT- Spume. |
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Kay B
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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 9:39pm |
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Thanks for dropping a vote Keeks, appreciate it
2-1 Kay |
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Lucky D
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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 12:51am |
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Kay Unlike ya last two 'wins', i ain't duckin, so patience But ONLY time U come close to K..is ya fuckin' location Very good set up, but teh finish let it down IMO 2/4 Ya last two verses spume, had to be drunk, n drink to quote Best bet's to use big words, the voters may THINK its dope This was alright, decent shot at his vocab...1/4 Rep the same crew but the top talent..U aint near those Props for not gettin stuck in a jam...nah bitch it was CLEAR ROAD Much better than the opener for his route through the tourney...4/4 I'll leave u callin' em dickriders, ya lost it an' moaning Punched so hard spumes left with HIS definition, frothin' n foamin' Decent shot at a nameplay I haven't seen it before...actually had to check it out 3/4 Claimin' u can win this shit, go ahead scream n shout..ya fucked Cause like being a mod, once again my jobs to take out corrupt Set up wasn't that good, but the finish saved it...2/4 I worry for you, delusional already without receiving shots Get the drs in LI,this kid genuinely believes he's hot!!! Kinda weak with this one in my opinion. 1/4 Your a ghost kid, not relevant, a few believers?..Crock of shit Checked the open mic, n it's the ONLY place u ain't droppin shit (where u at)... This was also just alright, not really that good 1/4 Must feel good being in the semi's, an not yet met dudes? Manc lied spume, shit wernt slept ON..it was fuckin slept THROUGH Good closer, thought this was one of the best bars 4/4 Fuck outta here with ur easy wins.... Overall---This was alright, I thought it should be better considering the experience you have, closer was very good. 18/32 Spume Expo: Kay is mid-table and from Watford Watford just made the play offs/ its a runners up position..(Championship) The Ram thing is on the real............Fuck a link!!!! Jehu.... Kay was behind Manc in the ranks and then Jehu showed up and knocked him down Closer...Big Game doubts I can win this/ Jams an HanGing ducked me HanGing is Kay's leader(Mod) and Kay is goosed here!! ............................................................................................................... I hate Kay B Emo style, dont know why he'd wanna spit gay proving his steeze is mixed up with "shit" as my E Bom hits Kay Didn't like the opener, don't like gay plays, think there a cop out..finsih was alright 2/4 What dat ego driven bitch say? Prediction was fake an way off like Buaben of Ghana this Watford midfielder only makes the play offs I guess this is alright, I mean I don't know much about football, but its alright 2/4 Try taking the day off! 9000 post, and ya'll rep is still as soft as cheese I lost all respect for this salty spreadable catching feelings off rameze Set up was weak, but the finish was good, like the Ram play...2/4 Try dealing with this grief! Choked up like you got cocks in the mouth only cos this trash is a puppet for LI do we call him Oscar the Grouch Thought this one wasn't that good either, another homo shot, Puppet for LI mehh 1/4 Jehu's knocking him down! A new running in the ranks you'll find an Kay B pissed, he wanna be the one coming up on Manc's behind This one was decent, even though its a homo play it was actually good. 3/4 Crazy in love like that, but if this bitch is Fierce he aint bringing it its clear when B goes hard he wants Jay to put a ring on it............(SICK) Another nice shot here, set up was better than the finish 3/4 The thing is this, I'm killing off a weakling an everybody seeing it What the fucks up with da crew Lyricist Inc? I'd never wanna B in it Thought this one was a weak attempt also, filler first and dissin' ya own crew? 1/4 Stinging hits prove my doubters wrong! Punches have fucked this dude Game is off, you should try follow my leader, this is duck duck goose!! Weak opener IMO, this should've been the best shot here....1/4 Overall. I was kinda disappointed with this verse, Way too many homo references, even though a couple were alright. Opener wasn't that good at all 15/32 Just so ya'll know..2 points for each line..4 per bar |
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 9:59am |
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Yeah I defo flopped on this verse
Wont happen again Kay kept it more pro I just got carried away wit tryna be too Clever I can see where I went wrong here Good luck in the final kay |
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spume corrupt
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Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL |
Posted: 24 May 2013 at 10:06am |
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Ha ha I didn't see kiks vote
So it's still on Honestly I'm just glad someone Else got my verse as it is meant to be seen ..not surprised it's a UK head |
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