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Jay Homicide 
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 Topic: Sad State Of AffairsPosted: 13 January 2010 at 5:43pm |
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Should be recordin this soon, so jus want to show y'all.
The current state of affairs has got me depressed Seems I can’t do anything without feelin' real stressed No job, an’ feel like I’m in a constant struggle Goin’ through each day tryna stay outta trouble Made more than my fair share of mistakes Hurt people, an’ played it off like ‘its fate’ Not really seein how much pain I was inflictin’ But somehow I ended up as my biggest victim Flooded my system with drugs an’ alcohol Parents tellin’ me I was outta control No doubt it took its toll, jus took time to sink in Now I look back like, what the fuck was I thinkin’ Guess when you’re in it you fail to see the damage Think there’s no need to change, somehow y’all manage Til you find yourself alone with ya thoughts Guess sometimes life is the hardest lesson taught Edited by Jay Homicide - 13 January 2010 at 5:58pm |
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I-kontinue
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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 6:20pm |
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This is the general writing as therapy. The emotional factor behind it is there, so it works. Lyricism was ok. Depends on how you deliver it if it could be a listenable audio track. Gonna be really short though.
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Jay Homicide
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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 6:25pm |
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Yeah forgot to say it was part of a collab so I'll only be doin one verse.
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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 7:39pm |
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Cambridgeshire huh . . . cool
I don't exactly wanna play counsellor regarding the piece, 'cuz I don't know you...the writing was OK |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 9:52pm |
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not bad man this was ite i didnt even relise half of this an @ Orion wats good wit Cambridgeshire? jus outer interest sounded like ya know a lil sumthing bout tha area?
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 10:00pm |
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My parents live there
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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rapdisup
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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 10:03pm |
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ohhhh cool sum areas are gud sum are shyt lol
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
It aint over till I Rapdisup |
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Posted: 13 January 2010 at 10:16pm |
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Agreed
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Jay Homicide
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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 12:16am |
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Cheers for the feed. Yeah Raps haha we all got our skeletons in the closet. Also agreed on the point of Cambridgeshire.
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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 1:02pm |
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I aint got no skeletons in my closet! who told you wat! haha
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
It aint over till I Rapdisup |
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Posted: 18 January 2010 at 9:05pm |
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Jay
Rhyming was ok a little simple maybe but decent still
you stayed on topic well and the piece had some feeling
cool
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