Battles under Review: Se�or Perfecto vs Stoic...

This fag might as well �not try, the choice is his�, I�ll fuckin� �smoke Senor� like �monoxide poisoning!�

Battle me and I�ll smother you with �pampers ya shit in�, throwing your �tantrums and bitchin�
This fag won�t survive half the beating I plan to give him, I �bloody Semors� like �aneurysms!�
Kid wants to die? no one is �stoppin or savin him�, Senor talks so pussy his fucking �mouth is a labium�
Your punches don�t even reach the peak of the shitter, textwise Senor, you�re the �weak of the littler�
To my verses your lines don�t even 'exceed the filler', if you�re a �Rapper�, kid I'm a 'cerebral killer!'
If I�m even in a tourney, faggot �competing is fruitless�, so don�t talk down to me like I�m a herbs you�re �being in crews with�
Beat me? If you think it�s forseeable prove it, shit, I �penetrate Senor Perfecto� like 'permeable fluids!'
This kid talks more shit than krytique, but he�s half of the punchin, and all wack with the nothin�
I �snapped a cerebellum�, and left the �nucleus with a ruption�, sent Senor home �cuppin his balls�, and it gave him �concussion!�
Man, I could beat you three times and you�ll still come with lame battling, you�re shit�s would  always be the save average
It�s just too bad prewriting doesn�t mean you �stand to gain an advantage�, because now all you�re leaving the battle fields with is �substantial brain damage!�
Alright Senor, it�s over, this is the finisher, and there�s �near death probability�,
You can battle me again, but the only place you�ll get is a �severe head trauma facility!�

Hmmm...this wasnt the best battle...both had a good grasp of multis and flow (stoic had a cuple of mismatchin multis but wasnt anything major)...I thought in terms of rhyme scheme/multis/flow Senor did a better job...and was a bit smoother and a bit more fluid in the style he presented than Stoic

As for Stoic's punches...I felt like you a bit inconsistant and needed to 'execute' ya punchlines a bit better, for instance

"Beat me? If you think it�s forseeable prove it, shit, I �penetrate Senor Perfecto� like 'permeable fluids"

^^^ in one sense I liked how u were sayin you were gona penetrate him, and the simile off it was nice...but I think it wudda bin better with "penetrate him quicker than..." or something else, coz the concept was nice but it was a bit bare for my liking...you had other less effective lines like "cuppin his ball so it gave him a concussion" waheva the line was...it was pretty weak from where Im sittin man, didnt like it...and I thought you were a bit inconsistant overall in your drop

SP also had some gay shit in his drop:

Stop lying or I'll drop rhymes harder than rockslides,

^^ Weak metaphor, understood the concept of metaphors - however this was jus a gay meta, didnt like it...However, while Stoic had flaws in his major lines and his minor lines I felt SPs verse was definately a less flaw-ridden verse, his flaws stood around the perifarory of his verse where, in comparion, Stoic had flaws thruout his verse...I think the distinction between SP and Stoic here was that SP was able to write some decent disses into his verse, and flipped a cuple of things Stoic sed, which although didnt have a devestatin effect had a big enough effect to tip the scales slightly in SPs favour...and lol @ SP criticising my wordplay then using "breaking the mould like man handling pottery" <---dont do that, its decent wordplay but its biggin yaself up rather than dissin...ya need to use wordplay to diss or your no better than ppl who force wordplay to make it sound clever...

My vote still goes to SP though, both need to diss harder in the future though

PEace

Stoic wrote: This kid talks more shit than krytique, but he�s half of the punchin, and all wack with the nothin�

There is no member on this site called Krytique, let alone one who talks shit... This is obviously bitten too...

Away it goes...