1-2 Punch League: Slecht vs Daydizzle (week 8) |
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 Topic: Slecht vs Daydizzle (week 8)Posted: 19 October 2016 at 11:56pm |
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Due by Friday midnight
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#bananas
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Slecht
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Posted: 20 October 2016 at 11:38pm |
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Got it.
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Posted: 21 October 2016 at 2:33pm |
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Got it? Slecht, this isnt a check-in like we in a Hotel Lobby
look how stupid you are, i bet your bars are riddled with holes nd Sloppy |
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Posted: 23 October 2016 at 11:31am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Slecht: I enjoyed your use of "got it" in this bar. It gave me a sense of comprehension, that ultimately you were trying to convey that you were on the same page ... but I feel that it was just self hype, and there was nothing in your bar that couldn't be used against anyone. It's pro's we're that it was effortlessly succinct with no more than 2 words of filler, max. It's cons were that it didn't rhyme. ProTip: what most battlers do, in order to rhyme the first and second line, is include a second line. Drizzle: Loved how you flipped his entire verse against him. It was a real personal attack when you told him he was stupid, that would've done some real damage. But for the actual punch, it was just conjecture as to what his future bars may be like, and I felt this could've hit harder. This for me was a clash of styles, and will be largely down to preference. I had to read them a few times, but I'm going with one that landed more hits on his opponent so ... MFVGT Daydizzle89 |
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Posted: 24 October 2016 at 7:50pm |
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Slecht, No doubt this shit was a massively overconfident drop, I see you though man, there was method in this madness, y'all lured the guy into a false sense of security......Clever stuff Flipizzle Dizz, Damn homie you fell into the old two word trap, bar was pretty generic beyond the aggressive personal it started with, maybe the work rate should get you the win, but I can't ignore the fact the rules clearly state NO FLIPS.... VOTE Slecht.... reluctantly |
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Posted: 24 October 2016 at 8:26pm |
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Vote = Sombrero
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Posted: 24 October 2016 at 8:39pm |
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Slecht - This was nice. I like how you came in with a simple yet very effective bar. Ill break it down
GOT - You see this right here? Greatest of Time, you are the greatest of time. This was respectfully the most hard hitting bar i have read in a long time. You saying you are the greatness of time. Its a slap in my face. If you are the greatest. than that means im not shit. So i see where you went with this. Some good hype and the punch was effective. I think you could have worded this better but its still fuckin hard hitting IT.- Ok ok ok , i see you bro. i work in the IT industry and i see you went after my career. That is one personal attack man. You are making me feel a little like a piece of shit. Like you murdered my career. i see why you went this route. DOPE Me- weak shit mvgt Slecht |
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