1-2 Punch League: Slip vs Jackbars vs Intrikit (WEEK 5) |
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 Topic: Slip vs Jackbars vs Intrikit (WEEK 5)Posted: 28 September 2016 at 1:10am |
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Slip
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Posted: 28 September 2016 at 9:38pm |
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Expo: Intrikits a biter Intrikit Jack bars off emcees trying to get a little action
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JackBarz
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Posted: 29 September 2016 at 7:12pm |
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Slip a murder cats on sight fam it ain't poor plummin'when that pipe blam,
All bullshit aside this intrikit kid ain't no fucken mcee he more like a Hype Man |
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Posted: 30 September 2016 at 9:00pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. This was a rather close one. Slip: Your set up was quite nice, felt a bit statement-ish but it served its purpose. The punch itself was humorous and personal while still maintaining a directivness, which I appreciate here. The scheme was rather decent. Jack: I think you focused more on the incorporation of multis rather than on a direct approach here. I was missing the personal here tbh. I liked the obvious linkage of the 'plumbing/pipe' play, but it didn't connect with your next line. Vote - Slip
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Posted: 01 October 2016 at 9:40am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. I guess Intrikit missed the drop time here, so I'll continue still.. Slip i liked the concept of your punch/personal here,I liked the set up and the way you got at them both too,a good clean hit,and in all honesty a well directed bar,that also had good humour coupled with it,the way the bar was tailored was for me creative I believe,good bar.. Jack I must say I was feeling the set up against Slip,having couplets like the plumbing/pipe was in itself a nice touch, but then your bar lost it traction due to a very light jab and approach towards Intrikit,but the fact your overall aim and directness was better here I feel,so props to you.. Overall,yeah Slip got this but JB is improving so maybe we got more to come from him,shame Intrikit couldn't make it might of been a different story here,but anyways props to you both.. Vote..Slip..peace. |
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Posted: 02 October 2016 at 4:11am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. nice job slip altho it wasn't as hard against jack who ended up ebing the only one of the two that showed up. but still ncie job incorporating both names. jack, I don't know, I just never see any type of personal. its all just generic for me. mfvgt slip, better on all aspects.
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Posted: 02 October 2016 at 4:52am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. slip didn't attack jack...but rather used him as an element in the attack on intrikit...Jack attacked both but the relationship between lines was sloppy. went with the better execution v. Slip |
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