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    Posted: 30 May 2007 at 5:31pm


32 Lines over any beat.
No-Show counts as a loss.
For the title.
Due date is anytime next friday.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 May 2007 at 5:34pm
Nice..










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U gon show for this or what.. Otherwise ill leave it at the 22 lines i got










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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 June 2007 at 9:17pm
Yeah im doing it now.
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Im done but its fucked up had to rush, Couldnt mix it properly dont have time

I have to go to my moms an look after my lil brother yo
 
So it aint nowhere near my best but whatever if u win ill just rematch
 
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and its in writin below too... goodbye

U ya not fuckin wid, me im so ridicilous
Im a beast out the cage, Ur next like nicolous
Smart alik I will stop an pitch, u stoppin this
Naw... I will blow ya top off, like im poppin chris
Yeah im cocky but my reps the shit, check it kid
Give u 2 L's an leave u lookin like a lexus bitch
Cant punch, cant flow hes just another hoe
His reputations about the size of my little toe
Feel like torture, pickin on this little kid
Hes confused, he doesnt kno what his penis is
Im slick rick in this young frame, im top fame
If ur soo smart why couldnt u think of a betta name
He soo small like a skinny bitch, the idoit
My statues too big, trust me boy u aint beatin shit
He spends his time in canada chancin rear
prancin around ya city, lookin around for edges spear!
I put a hole in u.. wider than a subway
My punches always land, each line is a runway
Everyday On La, I be the fuckin boss
Too many dickryders, I have to fuckin beat em off
they told ya, u shouldnt mess wid the veterans
I just searched site, Aint no1 ya betta than
i come wid the heat, like engines in rovers
U just a mere mortal, I could turn a whole team over
Im Bruce lee, u aint close to being billy banks
This musta been prank, all u shootin is blanks
I ride the beat like a jockey ridin horse
Candian fuck, stick to playin hockey or coach
5 years time ill be spittin out the porsche
Ull be left in this furom, scotty pickin up ya corpse
Look now, an tell whose the bitch face
That reminds me, ask ya sister how my dick taste


*I showed* He losses What a surprise
 
What a waste of time running his mouth


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 12:32pm
mines all written out now. Im going to record right away. Sorry guys.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 3:54pm
Sorry this took so long guys. I had a real long night trippin' on 4 hits of acid. So here it is.
 
 
Yo .. ILLA ain't ILLA..thats like sayin' ecko is fubu
you fuckin fruit get a name that suits you
how you really gonna say your an illstar?
i'll devore you like an addict with a pill jar
what we want? not you mixtape mister..
unless its free then i'll give it to my little sister..
she can bump it her boom box
and throw the player on some gravel thats the only way your tune rocks
its about time you get a better style..
my sister had ya dick? shes 11 fuckin' pedofile..
im the best and the last..
so im takin' ILLAs tunes out with the rest of the trash
as soon as i slap this bitch, his tone falls
he never knew who he was callin' like anonymys phone calls
yeah thats right, your the bitch face..
try to hang on to your title but the pressure makes your wrist break
you should have never tempted the smartest
now i make ya look silly,and insulted as an artist
yeah that was a lame decision
It funny just because everybody but you fits your name description..
In the crowd ILLA tryin' to look inconpicious..
This is to easy,he admits he's rediciolous
how does ILLA think he might hit me?
i will snap crackle and pop this fool like rice crispys
im back on the beat, with the raps of defeat
I'll have you twistin' your neck to watch your back on the street
this kid is anciet like neanderthals
and couldn't drop with an impact if he did a fuckin' cannonball
you keep talkin' you will make me go delirious
This is the end of the dynastic period
and a one hit wonder with no punches to hit
might aswell drop the mic and stop clutchin your fist
 
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 7:04pm
ILLA - What happened here man?I understand that it was rushed but really you didnt diss him at all...you bigged yourself up the whole verse...Ive seen your battles before bro were are the personals?punches?Hits at all? I dont wanna sound harsh but your supposed to be the best audio head on this site and really you kinda let me down here...You rode the beat well no doubt but that didnt make up for the lyrics in my opinion..Like spitting out the porsche?total irrelivance to the battle..I dont mean to sound harsh but you can def do better than this
 
Smart - You flipped some shit nicely...examples such as the pedofile line and the Rediculous line...I actually enjoyed your choice of beat also ive learned we have similar taste...your flow was good and you were way more direct than ILLA in my opinion...I found that you tried some concepts of worldplay also...they were hit and miss you got some good concepts just gonna word em better...anyways good job on the diss you definently punched him more in my opinion and flipped his shit nicely...
 
So for having a more direct verse and punching his opponent more my vote goes to Smart Allik...If theres a rematch id like to see ILLA take his time so I can see what he can really do..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 7:51pm
I agree with DTK
 
Illa : Of course, you had pro quality and pro flow. BUT you lacked so much in personal punches. This was all "comercial shit" no real true underground punching, no word play. Your soposedly the best audio head on the site ( you are good, im not tryin to take that away ) But when you battle, you need to come out swinging like immortal technique not ja rule if ya no what i meen. I've seen you spit better shit then this, and i know it was rushed and I understand, but thats shit u can't be riskin with the title. If i sound harsh.. sorry, but your capable of more.
 
Smart : Actually surprised me lyricaly, i loved the rediculous flip and enjoyed the little sister flip. Also had some alright punches, you didn't need that many tho, as illa lacked them. Your flow was on point, I think your vocals coulda been up a bit higher, but... i listened to it really low. You have good ideas, sometimes you don't get them out the best. Just keep workin on your lyrics there elevatin a lot with every drop
 
Overall : sry for being harsh illa, but you really didn't come with many punches, while smart did. Call it dick riding, hate voting what ever you want. But Smart did when this, should be interesting to see the rematch.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 8:25pm
Where did the link to ILLA's song go?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 8:31pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 9:50pm
forreal this was sad...  not the fact that either was bad.. .but the fact that this was for the audio title.. and Illa didnt seem to care at all...  maybe that shows he deserves to lose

but fact is... DTK said it right...  Illa bigged himself up more than he actually punched SA... and he just didnt have anything that impressed me... 

Smart came with consistant hits... nothin too special... but fact is, he punched at illa and was more direct...  illa had a better delivery... but it just wasnt as direct and consistantly hittin as smart's...

so Vote:

Smart
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 9:59pm
Is that a KO err whaa??
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:28pm
lol @ illa arsin' it...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:28pm
what u cant listen to my shit an reply a day lata lol wtf
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:29pm
lmao at u listnen to mine an flippin the punches u cant do that yo










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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:39pm

Why? It's not in the rules.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:50pm

You can flip...Nobody posted ''No flipping''..Just re match him ILLA

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 June 2007 at 12:36am
Okay, this is what i understood and what i think Illa is meaning by the no flippin thing...It was due sometime on Friday(as stated in the rules), therefore, nobody could listen to each other's shit and flip..but Smart posted a day late and took advantage of it by listening first and flippin..
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