Cypher Games: Something different

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   This idea was brought on by a cypher rebel wrote (sorry bro)

No spitting about what you've read in books heard in music or seen on t.v
Let's switch things up by rattling of a few bars with
Real meaning behind them try to pick up either where the
Person above left off or at least showing an understanding of what 
They are saying. 

(No shit talking only criticize if you can clearly explain on how to improve their work such as structure 
Or a part that could of been much more).....

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Mikey425 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 07 January 2016 Location: Evt-City Status: Offline Points: 227 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-3-1 Form: LLLNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Mikey425 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Something different Posted: 18 January 2016 at 8:14am
	This idea was brought on by a cypher rebel wrote (sorry bro) No spitting about what you've read in books heard in music or seen on t.v Let's switch things up by rattling of a few bars with Real meaning behind them try to pick up either where the Person above left off or at least showing an understanding of what They are saying. (No shit talking only criticize if you can clearly explain on how to improve their work such as structure Or a part that could of been much more).....

Sammy Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Beacon of Light Joined: 24 October 2015 Status: Offline Points: 2227 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sammy Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 18 January 2016 at 9:48am
	a bit unclear here but i guess i'll start off and hopefully i can see what you are trying to do here. I watched in amusement. There was nothing to do. Why was he out alone? was there something to prove? Perhaps a hunt was issued by Grunt, alpha of the group. They used to howl at the moon. I endowed them with brute strength. But now, what to do? He was a Wolf cub just about one or two. Cowering. "Move son! Go down by the rivulet now!" As his doom saunters closer he growled and issued vein warning. Really what could he do? At this instance, he look up at me for assistance. Breathing and huffing as evening breeze brushed trees and leaves rustling..


Slip Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 04 June 2013 Location: St Johns. N.L. Status: Offline Points: 1612 Crew: Alter Egos Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 14-33-0 Form: LLLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Slip Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 19 January 2016 at 12:28am
	sounds of mother nature echo threw the skys as the sun begins to set a full moon starts to rise if you listen carefully you can hear them threw the snow leaving a beaten path behind them where ever they may go when they feel the need to feed and the hunger takes control like a beast unleashed released feasting meat right off the bone no surprise the night life comes alive demons are known to roam wolves resembling men arrive from the woods into your home always travelling in these savage packs attacking those alone

Mikey425 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 07 January 2016 Location: Evt-City Status: Offline Points: 227 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-3-1 Form: LLLNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Mikey425 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 19 January 2016 at 12:43am
	Right on slip Well presented with clear metaphors I would of left out either unleashed or the word released seems to stretch a bit Other then that you got the idea