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Smoothtung
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Posted: 27 January 2014 at 6:03pm |
'Special Olympics Sponsors' - That Horrorcore you ‘don’t like’ - (Caution: What you are about to read is extremely disrespectful.. we hope you enjoy) ...and we will. - MANC - The name's Gable Corinthian, I bring disabled Olympians fitted with gauges for limbs, willing & able to sprint in em see cuz failure to win's a hint that maiming is imminent if they trailing in the relay.. aim & spray em with that instrument no lingering & wincing, limp and make it to the finish line by 'finish line' I mean skin-linked remains of 80 Finish guys the winners prize? the biggest slice of flesh fresh off an infants thighs a side of Kittens eyes mixed in with bile derived from Fish insides the next event is swimming in condemned cement, but check the twist unless they're quick the wet cement will set and they'll be left to sink and fester in the wretched stench of fetishist molesters piss impress us & we'll let em live - defect, and we'll behead their kids the best is yet to hit, but first, the next up, you can watch & laugh we'll chop the hands & let blood blot the canvas - it's a boxing match!! just not the classic type, they'll have to fight despite the loss is bad you might go into shock, collapse, but try to not.. just dodge the jabs providing that they're not the type that caves in, I can grant sedation calm the pain in time for them to make the final transportation straight into the main event, a race that's timed ejaculation clamped in braces, standing naked raping dying cancer patients Who's game then? - SMOOTH - Im Skip O’conner the special olympics sponsor, Holler! This year we’re introducing the fitted collar. A sky high zip-line atop of a pit of lava. We don’t provide a single doctor.. So bring the trauma! Injected the contestants with hormones to get em stronger! Then starved em all.. we decided to ‘thin the roster’.. And it’s for you insane jackasses.. We even sell rain jackets so you won’t get h...it with the slobber! When they drink we’ll make em drink out of saucers. Give a wink to their fathers. Strip n’ shit and do the jig in their boxers! The parents say we’re pigs and we’re monsters. Watch the kids hit the pond for the log run and piss in the water. Get bit by an otter and defecate. We’re lettin’ bullets fly on little Ely Walter in 7th place! Forcing the contestants to crab-walk. And pouring quarts of molten metal on their flesh if they back talk! I’ll be half-cocked off the lager we’re selling, Obnoxiously swearing and constantly yelling At Austin who’s smelling the hands that he fished from his crotch and telling my confidants “i’ma give his poppa a swelling!” Am i NOT compelling? Who’s NOT rebelling THEN? Check so many deaths off the list that i’m tossing n’ testing pens. Bombing the finish line.. or Finish guys.. Blowing their arms in the air just to watch all the digits fly! Too much? |
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Shankley
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This was insane... crazy flow even beter concepts and Manc that closer was just a cold glass of LMFAO. It was great ou had the reader from the first line and the more you read the more it pulled you in deeper. The imagery was always constant great especially with the choice of words. Smooth you had so much humour it almost distracted me from the subject... Great job guys.
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U.N.L.M.
Standard Member Joined: 19 December 2006 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 1955 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-15-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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Manc:
the winners prize? the biggest slice of flesh fresh off an infants thighs
a side of Kittens eyes mixed in with bile derived from Fish insides ^Damn...just the fluidity of that bar...whew...this bar and the closer were real crazy IMO - the rhyme, image, etc...This concept is a good one as well so props to whoever thought of that. Smooth: lmao @ thin the roster... Forcing the contestants to crab-walk. And pouring quarts of molten metal on their flesh if they back talk! ^Ill, nuff said...closer as well was crazy... A sick collab, guys...literally...get some help haha |
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Manc
Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW |
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Haha appreciate the positive words dude.
This was all Smooths idea. Manz got a crazyily creative mind. And his verse was fuckin dope!! Great collab opportunity |
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The Law
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Haha man I was dying with laughter throughout both of your guys verses.
Manc your verse is really something else, I loved how you ended it. Smooth an awesome verse to follow up manc with, dope from start to finish I was rolling at the little stutter you added with "h…it" lol Really humorous, really great put together verses here. You two should collab more often, this was great.
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JBrenn
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ManC good to see you drop something. OM is hot this month. Smooth I haven't read much of your stuff but this was on point. You gents killed the flow. Keep dropping fellas.
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IZIAH
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holy fuck! shiit, this was crazy guys. dayum. made me cringe just about everywhere. but man. good stuff. i liked how u guys were starting with names and shit. but wow. hella good!
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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this was fresh and both brought their own twist to it... had me laughing the whole way through! theres plenty of quotables throughout both verses
Manc - UNLM quoted your standout... the slickness that rolled off was just crazy! talents right there! Smooth - Welcome back bro can see your time away hasnt hindered you at all! definitely held your own in a crazy creative topic! Good shit!
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CHAIN
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damn, y'all just came through the OM like this.
It doesnt get any better, the best of the best. And the concept was |
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Et Cetra
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Wordplay used was awesome
The flow was sick multies were best I seen on la Nice use of short lines.:) |
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For the love of god please shut this site down
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J504
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So I hop on LA and see like 50 names I don't recognize... I'm about to dip and I see this.
Damn, y'all still got it. This is 2 dope writers matching each other with equal skill and making a dope collab. This is what's up, both of y'all shined in this. This had a sick and twisted vibe, it was humorous and the rhyming was just nonstop fly as fuck. I'm pleased as a motherfucker to see the top dudes still killing it here. This shit was straight up bonkers! |
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Reptillian
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Dark Eye
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Really dope! nice lines..
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