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Trizzy Tre 
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 Topic: Stylin On'em Part 2- Trizzy Tre/Various LA artistsPosted: 22 May 2014 at 2:30pm |
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Stylin On’em: Part 2 – Trizzy Tre ft. CHAIN, Exoduzt, Boss, Beans “We be the sickest, so we STILL stylin on this bitches……” {Trizzy Tre} Obliterate the opposition, so fuck beef n back stabbers, try sayin shit… Die n lay’em quick, when haymakers level everything within a 5 mile radius! My style dangerous! Mix a hurricane wit a tornado the way I spit heat bro… impacts of how Sandy decimated all the shore-lines of the East Coast! Cling to old shit bro? Resourcing archives for punchlines, ...think it works? You been gasping for life with ya verse,’ bury’em’ easy to see him really push up dirt! You aint the first! Trolls lurk for attention as champions lack aggression… I 'See' the bitch in you, ....cuz Triz “lay-sick” lines like eye surgery correction! Ur sure in hibernation, I keep KO’in dudes so caution is fair… 'Outlining so many bodies' I’m like a King James ritual how I stay puttin chalk in the air!
{CHAIN} I paint the town red, I'm a legend not a saint No need to start guessin' who's hard headed fueled up like car parts with a dark fetish.. for sharp weapons that'll maim a carcus and leave a shark headless.. So start messin' with my dark arts and learn a harsh lesson... my squad rips apart henchmen and will leave a large part of ya heart stressin'... half you faggots know you can't rock wit' us coppers ain't stoppin us... I only run with pill poppers hip hoppers scumbags and pick pocketers!... Believe it or not I went from sleeping on cots to just keeping it hot... by decieving the cops with devious plots meet at the spot if you fein for tha rock... people are not getting better the evil just rots with no saviour at home... cut up the white as I run for my life livin on the edge call me Razor Ramon... {Boss} No time to reason I'll drive shrapnel into brains with no nuclear fission or ignition {Beans} Ya rhymes cryin for fuse, while my rhymes shining, dividing you pukes... I throw up numbers in swag, wacks wildin out over the fact im stylin on you! Minds confused!..I wet bitches, my text kisses have you queens hurtin… King hands open up wit chaos flow so hard you think you feeling Ashley squirtin! I’m too nice! Couldn’t kick it wit me if you pursued a smooth stride… A true hype, wit a giant soul in all my work and I’m not talkin on my shoe size! Beans spit? You sea sick and that aint the reason ya tummy hurt… Believe kid, my strategic always prepared…unlike a bitten, pre written Dougy verse! Best of writers greatness, hearts’ll stop short, have ya chest wires break quick… Vets retired for fakeness, feelin this freshness’ll have you cry when you taste this! ******************************************************************* |
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Posted: 22 May 2014 at 3:02pm |
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God damn.
..i'll be back for feed after i digest what i just read. |
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 22 May 2014 at 6:19pm |
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Beans
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Posted: 22 May 2014 at 10:49pm |
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Yo chain,Exo boss and trizz!
This shit was fire fellas thanks for the opertunity with this Trizz that diss tho... |
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Posted: 23 May 2014 at 2:09am |
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Shit was nasty, everyone killed it.
That Solange line from CHAIN was hilarious. Boss' pussies full of shit line too. Just...god damn lol.
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 2:54pm |
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Thanks for the feed man.
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 3:25pm |
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Whoa fellahs this shit was hella dope
Every one brought their a game through TRIZZ What a way to open this bitch up jeah Exo and chain i respect you guys fuck your flows are simply Sick Boss that was some sick shit Beans famo haha big ups man you closed this with no sweat Smooth shit loved reading this collab fellahs stay up ya'll |
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 3:33pm |
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Damn!!, these niggas came hard as fuck.
Pretty dope stuff in this bitch!!! Word to Trizz. |
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 3:48pm |
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Dope shit.
Tre- You always have the basics about how to make a sick verse. And one thing I like about your style, is that you always have a dope opener and closer. And it's something that I really believe in, like, you should of course come with it for every bar, but I think it's SO important to start and finish strong, and your opener and closer were great. The first set the tone, the last was a really fresh reference, well put. CHAIN- No one does short style like you, that's been established. Short and sweet, quality or quantity. That Jesus opener was the typa shit that no one else on here would come up with lol you know how it is. Exo- Your internal game is off the chain. And you know it.. I always struggle to pick out highlight bars with you, because you're not about references and punchlines, you're about making a tight verse. Your shit clicks so tightly, that singling out a line is useless, cos it's dope within the context of the rhyme scheme. Boss- Not seen any of your shit, but I was impressed. It was always gonna be a struggle to keep up with these dudes, but you weren't too far behind. Apart from a dope closer, what really stood out for me, was the personality that showed through, which you don't really see from newer members. That knuckles in your face shit, showed confidence, you but a switch in your flow, just cos you could, just for a laugh. I like doing that myself. Beans- You came solid mate, really liked the shoe size bar. You kept a consistent flow, and got straight to the point. Pulled it altogether quite nicely. Props.
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 3:58pm |
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Damn shits dope in these verse, they're fire.
everyone killed it the way it should be. Do more of this. and Stay active... |
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Beans
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 9:23pm |
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Thanks for the feed yall
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 8:12pm |
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Triz : spearheaded the project and 'bombed atomically' on all of us. Dope
Chain: came up short. Exoduzt: he won. I thought triz had it, but ex took it. Boss: not familiar with dude. But he definitely was trying. And he went hard.Every other line was a dope concept/punchline. I'll keep checking for him Beans: disrespectful and vulgar, the perfect closer. Man, everybody killed it. Chain's shit was liiiight if you ask me. |
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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 3:39am |
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first off thanks to trizz for getting this together...
Trizz: I enjoyed your verse the most in this collab followed by Beans...Your verse was really good...I especially liked the sandy storm line because thats something I can relate too...it hit us pretty hard out here. Not as much as the Jersey shore but we still got rocked in parts. anyways back to ya verse...Taking shots at certain people is all good in my book to be honest I will never be one to hate....so there that is lol... That king james line was fucking awesome to be honest..but I will not cap his name cus I'm a laker and Kobe fan lol...good shit tho CHAIN: What happened?...I mean your verse was nice in the way you worded things and your smooth style but it wasnt the CHAIN I'm used too....When I heard you were on this collab I was like "alrite Ima try to bring something to this so he doesnt outshine everyone as usual"...Maybe its just me but this wasnt the CHAIN im used too...and you know for a fact I mean no disrespect your my homie....You know what I mean Boss: You have an aggressive style which I appreciate but where are you from?.. I re read ya verse a few times and the scheme and wording is there but I feel the flow has to be a little more on point. You have a unique style that you could run with without a doubt...In my opinion the flow needs some work. but I really want to see your work in the future so drop some more shit. Beans: I'm so glad you stepped out of just the battling world. Shit like this helps you improve so much but it seems your already down with it and know what the fuck ya doing....I used to be just a horrorcore battler and only did that shit...As soon as I realized I could do my own stories and shit I just went with it...Beans...you can battle but you also can do a lot more if you try no joke....this verse proves it...no joke start doing topicals homie.... overall it was an honor ...thanks trizz for setting this up
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 8:33pm |
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Thanks for the props on this fellas. Boss was a nice addition to this collabo. Def a solid newbie I have to say Exo spazed out on this one. |
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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 9:01pm |
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Nice shit yall.. you all brought some good shit. Tre started this shit nice radius line was nice.. chain tbh I think one of ya rhymes in the beginning was off, the constraints line didnt fit in or coulda been worded better to make the rhyme more polished. Exoduzt killed this. Damn.. keep it up. Boss verse was nice too.. I read that shit in a crooked flow and it was perfect. Beans had a nice closer to an overall solid collab.
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Posted: 30 May 2014 at 2:12am |
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good looks on the replies its much appreciated
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 03 June 2014 at 3:15pm |
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I didnt even see this, but thanks for the feed Stalin.
You need to get active again bruh....
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Posted: 03 June 2014 at 3:29pm |
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CHAIN: What happened?...I mean your verse was nice
in the way you worded things and your smooth style but it wasnt the CHAIN I'm used too....When I
heard you were on this collab I was like "alrite Ima try to bring
something to this so he doesnt outshine everyone as usual"...Maybe its
just me but this wasnt the CHAIN im used too...and you know for a fact I mean
no disrespect your my homie....You know what I mean I thought it was dope but then I read the other verses. It was extra light, no excuses.
I totally agree. Appreciate the honesty. Btw: where the **** you be at? scream @ me. |
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Posted: 03 June 2014 at 5:27pm |
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i thought it was dope too CHAIN...just not the caliber im used to seeing from you....you know its all good homie!
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Posted: 04 June 2014 at 3:07am |
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All verses were good reads. Trizzy and Exo stood out the most. There were plenty of fresh lines throughout this drop, it was a great one.
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