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    Posted: 13 December 2020 at 11:18pm
The 2020 Tournament

Semi-final: Text (standard rules)

Concrete vs levy420

Verses are to be 8 bars or 16 lines in length.

Battlers have 14 days from now to write their bars.

If there are no decisive votes on the battle after 7 days once the verse is posted, then I will vote in an unbiased manner and decide on the winner to continue to the next round.

If a battler ducks, due to timeframes being accurately adhered to, if it quacks like a duck and walks like a duck, I'll be calling it a duck.

If you don't both check in then your battle will be discontinued and parties that check-in will progress to successive rounds but parties that fail to check-in will be disqualified.

Battlers must check-in to the battle in order to proceed.

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No gas, beans digested quick--lentil soup, me an ash like whoooo!!!
Then you Handled cube by a pube- congrats homie🤷 way to let down the group

I'm just beating a corpse an it's clear, ya momma shoulda aborted
Its like he's missing vital organs, the way I lay crete contorted

Guilaten flow heads'll roll as I squabble on a bredren, drop from leader to henchmen
Raw aggression, levys high, watch my blade fly on con-descend'n

Left in the sky like lister, similar to that cage flic wit long hair
stepping stones meet debo, a upper cut n u'll see con aired----- (this my group fool) 💪💪💪

Rock n's like I'm nasir, Original syn we don't compare, it's smoke'n mirror's
U don't want the vapors, everyone vacates when the ghost appears

Roasting peers, like peppers, slow cooked to perfection, wit u flow's, complacent-C no progression
Just a con act, jump off that high horse, u placed ur self in, during those theropy sessions

Tare him in sections, mind sick-- infections, like that toxic wasteland om, they nuclear (knew clearer) check mate this bitch
Who the victor, this giants gonna cruise threw the ship, even if I'm putting fellow crew's fate at risk

Beast mode in the field,dropped a goose egg, dj flames tucked his tail n split sight…. wit scary quickness
Before I touchdown, I'ma burry my dawgs behind bars guess I'm mike vick____ merry christmas


















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record show you can't parry a swing, aint savvy with wins
going out like jesus with a cross the way I carry this syn
show you the ropes? yeah, have your neck tucked in a noose
unreal luck is the proof when you getting ducked by a goose
shoulda been chucked from the crew, being a sheepish wimp
was gonna break CHAIN this round, fuck the weakest link
your street cred shrinks, it's why it's time for abolishment
levi used to be tough as nails, now he proudly polish them
you still a damn novice lev, crafting fine lines ain't no joke
nickname with 420, cos it's high time you get smoked
Concrete, still relevant, never found it tough to wreck fools
tho your verse fits 2020, cos it's kinda rough to get through
and to be fair, no-showed to the semis - let's be real here
you so insignificant to battle, peeps dont bother to be there
however your name sounds, you'll be sure pronounced dead
cos when I 'stick to magazines', you know it's all about lead

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Aiit I gotsta get a vote in on this one and on the Ash/spume battle so we can hit up this final before the end of the world and there's not many other votes up in here so mine looks to be the decider.

levy420 your verse looks all over the place like it was typed in Word 95 or something but aiit into it. First bar wasn't all that hot, though personal it didn't hit the mark for me, second bar while mean was kinda played out like laying out concrete is cliche at best. 3rd bar coulda done more with the con-descendin' punch, like it wasn't really that funny even though it was personal, like a bit more humour could help that kind of line not be taken as personally considering you're both in the same crew and that as well. I liked the 4th bar that came across as a fresh bar and hit the mark direct and aggressively. Smoke n mirrors/ghost appears in the 5th bar flattened the strength of the bar as a multi and similarly in the 6th that multi was all kinds of stretched in how it was written. Coulda chiselled it back more. 7th was excessively long and looked like you were kinda giving him a pass through this round in how the verse read then the 8th felt like a bit of a waste of a bar. Expected more but still a solid verse regardless of the structure, I liked the con aired angle and the personals that were divulged but they could have been more creative and coherent and the verse would have gelled together better.

Concrete, ur first bar was off the top stronger as a bar than any of the amalgamation that was levys verse. The carry this syn was actually pretty funny. Ducked by a goose was ironic as and quite a good play in the second bar. 3rd bar was clean cut, as was the fourth - 'now he proudly polish em' was pretty funny. ain't no joke/you get smoked wasn't that clean even if the 'high time you get smoked' bar woulda hit harder had it have been. 2020 bar was good, as was the personal about no-showing the semis, and that reference in the last bar was a goodie too. Altogether Con brought a much more crafted verse with more directness, cleaner multis and inner rhymes and levy was messy with the verse even though both were about as personal as each other so I'm gonna have to say that 

MVGT Concrete

Since we're at the last day for votes on this tourney I'll set up the grand final and put up the roster within the next 24 hours and it looks like it'll be Concrete vs spume corrupt, big ups!
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