Battles under Review: Tabetic. v. 20

aiite ladEE.
in honor of tha pink and for you hun.
which i pimp as well (AIM) here we go...

*THINGS TO KNOW*
Cut in da Gut = a bitch gittin deep-fucked
Trojan Condoms = "Warmer Sensation" type...
ButterFace = Eveything Fine "BUT HER FACE"
She Skinny
There was this jokethread about a Renegade GangBang on her, thus "GroupieLuv"


I aint holding a knife to ya stomach - but you'll get "Cut in da Gut"
Ima "Hotter Sensation" than Any Trojan Man Product
U a "ButterFace" hunny, that means UGLAY in my Language
Cuz u aint got the "balls" to go against an undefeated Champion
I hurd u "BITE"... but i aint even thinkin about Lyrics
Cuz if u Use Your Teeth, i might hafta Choke-A-Bitch
I didnt have to "Suck-UP" just to get in this Crew
And i aint scared of nobody only "PUssy" Is YOU
Just cuz -Orion- likes ya Smile, doesnt mean ur Cool wit Me
I'll str8 up smack u in da face - two words - "BITCH PLEASE"
I've seen ya pic hunny - now come on Tabetic
Only reason u Avoidin' Beef iz cuz u lOOK Annorexic
Shit - ur not RESPECTED ure only here for GroupieLuv
Cuz this battle is like that porno... "SLUTS POUNDED BY THUGS"
Stupid Bitch, BE REAL, u got Shit for SKillz
This picture is fake, cuz that "truth is always Revelaed"
You have a open call-out and u think u winnin' w/ Applause?
This is ya "FIRST TIME" gittin HIT so i'll hafta "Lubricate theze Bars"
Im giving it "soft" to you, i aint even "Cummin' " HARD
But the da Bitch iz Bleedin' Already like i Tore da Tissue on Her WALLS

Twoooooooooooo-Ohhhhhhhhhhhh
All up in ya ASSSSsssss SweetCheeks

Uppin' For Votes


 

Tabetic... Flow was kinda eh... I think that was the only main problem of this, I prefer shorter lines n' things structured a lil more like 20's... but ya punches were fresh... witty ideas like the opener, closer, font, last roll... only one that didn't work for me was the skin spoils bar, it was just all over the place... Rhymes were simple but they weren't much of a part of ya verse, so w/e...

20... lmao... a lil too predictable man... all these lines to do wit' how she a woman... that's more or less the only offense ya verse has... Tho the beef line was HARD as a motherfucker... hardest in the battle, lubricate these bars was aight, I don't remember hearin' it before... but the rest was all too predictable for me, pussy, ain't got the balls (and you ain't undefeated, lol), bite, suck up, groupie love... all real predictable shit to throw at a woman... flow was better than ya opponent, rhymes on a similar level...

20 came with more but as I've always said, weak and played shit sets you back a LOT and you're better off just gettin' rid of it... In elements you matched up aight but Tabetic had the more witty/original punches, tho 20 was more direct, a lot of them were weak, so even if a punch hits you inbetween the eyes, if it's weak, who's carin' ya know?

VOTE: Tabetic

ok..

Tabetic- ya flow was better than 20's, and your opening line and closing line were hot... but in between those 2 lines, there just wasn't much there.

20- flow was kinda weak... but i liked your punches.. the line:

I've seen ya pic hunny - now come on Tabetic
Only reason u Avoidin' Beef iz cuz u lOOK Annorexic

hot shit... groupie love bar was tight too... as was the opener...

im gonna give this to 20... because though tabetics flow was better, he came with more punches... i felt as though tabetic's middle bars were sorta fillers... 20 came with punches throughout his verse.

VOTE--- 20

2-1 in my favor UPPIN plz...

Tabetic

He came this far...just to feel the shots-i-sprayed,Like "tickle me elmo" your raps are "soft"-and-"played"// Your flow falls off befor being able to "launch-a-shot", Shatter your "membrains" cause your skin "caught-my-font"//
Everyone come to see me unload "ammo" on this ass-hole, Explode your "character" now this is ya last-roll//Cause "spontaneous combusting" with out "friction", This aint a "sparked" beef just the pain you been placed-in// In "heated" combat ill make your blood-"boil", leave you "bruised" and "batterd" till your "skin-spoils"// Construct a "punch" to "knock" you off your scaffold, You could only with this battle if the votes were hat-pulled//

Krazy

Cause spontaneous combusting with our friction�
Only this ain�t a sparked beef just pain your placed in�
Your flow falls off before being able to launch-a-shot�
Shatter your membranes cause your skin caught-my-font�
In a heated conflict I�m a make your blood boil�
Leave you �bruised� and battered till your �skin spoils��
Construct a punch to knock you off your scaffold�
You�d only win this battle if the votes were hat pulled�

there u go