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    Posted: 06 November 2014 at 9:39am
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"I have seen this, I have done this,you.. do not want this"
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With no inspiration,dope rhymes,expectation,
Let this martyr beat himself, like 1900's Flagellation,
Getting drawn & quartered with remains displayed effectively,
So in over your head, my words'll scalp you like a Cherokee,
Put this baby in the corner, like an old backstreet abortionist,
Tongue in knots,stuck to the spot,fold quicker than contortionists,
I Scratch claw bite,in an uphill fight til' the right to be here is proved,
While you got a specialist doctors appointment tommorrow to have the last 4 bars surgically removed,
Truth be told, let it be known, proclaim right from here to Yokohama,
Your style's too used, like some tattered ass shoes that you rent at the Bowlarama.
"I have seen this, I have done this,you.. do not want this"
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This fiend is crazy for an “L”, but on 420, this herb’d get smoked out.
‘Belt him’. - Trying to “cum” harder than me? ..This nerd’ll get choked out.

Bet you missed the point but I’m ‘sharp’ so I’ll use my time to ‘fill you in’.
Like the Babadook, rhymes combine with evil, I’ll lose my mind n kill you kid.

Playing games, EVP, underline a speedy 3, it’s easy to beat this “hangman”.
Useless, you’re stupid, it’s true.. To lose to you, I’d need to be insane, man.

Like a foster child, ‘I’m quick to take care of ya' like the next hoe to mother ya.

Like homeless drunk dying, “you took shots n spit” til a ‘Redcoat’ smothered ya.

Chronic? Please, we don’t need another wannabe, the world’s got a million.
I’ll have the last laugh as I put and end to this ‘comedy’ like Robin Williams!

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2. Babadook is a book within a movie which drove the reader to kill her kid.
3. Hangman is a childhood game.
4. Blood on a coat / Redcoat is a term for British. / lost to British assassin.
5. Robin Williams was a comedian who hung himself.

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Upping begrudgingly haha
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote spume corrupt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 November 2014 at 8:05pm
Both you guys have dropped verses that could be used pretty much on anyone
That's just not great battlefield material to start
Find a way to attach a verse to the opponent...that's how it's done

I gotta give this to lynch only cos it was nicer to read
vote 420

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Very indirect battle except for e.v.p first line about the L and 420. Lynch you had a good flow going but wasn't much punch there. E.v.p I feel you were more lyrical and had better structure in my opinion. The day you guys actual aim at each other you both will be problems.

MVGT: E.V.P.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote sage Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 November 2014 at 7:51pm
I felt this was a generic battle nothing personal both verses flowed well and nothing special stood out from both but I delt like EVP landed more punches than Lyn but I liked EVP's closer abd the 4rd bar of Lyn was also good
this is a pretty close one but Imma go with EVP for better flow and read.
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How I see it...

Lyn - Your verse wasnt bad, it just wasnt a direct shot at your opponent that is what mainly took away from your overall verse. Not a bad verse at all. Good drop and keep em coming.

E.V.P - Your verse wasnt bad either, but what wont it for you is that your verse was a bit more tailored for your opponent than his was for you. You did have some decent lines here. Overall good drop. Keep it up. I look forward to future drops from both of you.

MVGT - E.V.P for a cleaner, smoother, and more direct verse. 
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Lynch- I'll start with what I like with you. Your flow is on point, so does your rhyme scheme but your bars and punchlines...man miss me with the smart shit really. Your punches wasn't direct at all. It seems more like an open mic rather than a battle

E.V.P- Your bars and punchlines was slightly better but I dont feel your flow. The insane man and hangman line really fucked up the flow.

MVGT- E.V.P for actually making this battle sound like one. Both of you have something in store but try to make a battle seem like one.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Rutter knows best Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 November 2014 at 2:12am
I have to agree with the majority of the feedback. Lynch you wrote some okay and some nice lines but it wasn't tailored towards your opponent. Its not that, personal are everything but you both came with decent verses. Flow, wording, multi's were strong and your format was mostly done well. Take a little time to gather some material to work with about your opponent and you'll do alright.

E.v.p - Like said above you came with some a decent bars but overall you should of been more direct. Your style is a bit choppy but your punches mostly come through. Needs just a little tweeking.

Two decent writers, average battle but for a better punches and aproach e.v.p
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EVP Wins 5-1
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