Open Mic: The Book of Enoch

Enoch

They descended with purpose, perfected entities asserting dense

Molecular murmurs, sure disturbance to our Earth as it rests in its purest

Convection is what stirred the very vessel they herded, we heard that

They were the messages, their words will be dissected to be learned

They weren't expected but emerged in a blaze, the scene was gorgeous

They became the leading forces and our deities of worship

Very patient with the orders were these Angels in Gomorrah

Civilizations reigning global, they were stationed in Atlantis

Scribing myriads of monuments in writing old as Sanskrit

Taught of spirits, sin, and consciousness, it's ominous complexity

Appearing in the darkness as they watched us over centuries

Build pyramids over aquifers to harvest in the energy

Sincere were their accomplishments, our eyes were opened endlessly

A year since they'd been brought to us, horizons darken destiny

Their tyranny and slaughter was appearing in our hardships

It was clearer in it's parts then the veneer that smeared the parchment

Blending fear into our hearts as if our fury was the target

Since it's clear that they had lost us they adhere to an apocalypse

Endearment to our daughters 'till their fathering the cradle

Make superior exalted kin, nostalgia for the ages, It's the call to cages

Homage paid to Amadeus, faulted, faded malt, decay of falling angels............

Saw the rising of the seas and all the slaughtered lives uprooted

As they're lying with our wives beneath us thriving in the lost Bermuda

Newly astral men had planted seeds which will establish family trees

To lead this land completely, the advantages of having seen

And understanding things the modern man just can't compete with

Each unlatching patterns, keep the master thesis out the masses reach

And keep it secret as they're latching leashes on this passive species

Pleading, after these disasters ceased the planted seeds begin to grow

As the citizens explode with growth the clinics paved insane traits

Crafting instruments of stone to clone as mimics to our brainwaves

To create slaves the safe way... Producing laws thats flawed with tricks

They introduced economy and fathered it, locked them into jobs like prison

Politics had spawned and risen positive, accomplished it, a conquered mission

Onwards competence had limits, knowledge of our God's existence

Is abolished, lives in all the hidden Nephalem, evolved with wisdom

Destined Suns live fatherless, The Messengers were called and left

They left us blessed and encouraged, wrestling death, and with fervor

Their vessel is cresting the surface rising upwards, they're ascending with purpose

This was a verse that got forfeited to in a topical battle, would really enjoy some feed on it. Ill return the favor for anyone who gives this a read.

The topic was 'first man to meet an alien'

Loved it. I love tales and speculations of the extraterrestrial. You obviously worked hard and were very focused on this. Just love how you created such a detailed history and the outcomes these beings led the world into. It almost becomes a very legit conspiracy, even a very believable piece of information that makes up what this world is today. It was very complete from beginning to the way you ended it telling of their departure. It just allowed my imagination to work throughout the whole piece and I enjoyed it a lot because of that. Pieces like this are usually ignored however because people get too caught up in the more simplified form of rap expression and if a topic, style, or presentation doesn't normally pique their interest, they won't give it a chance. I admire and respect and appreciate the work you put into this. Good job, man.

Mere dopeness.
I liked every bit of it. And tbh i learned alotta new words from it. Lol it was an immense show of vocab and creativity.
Youre concept was dope aswell... I liked yo approach on the subject.There were a lot of quotable bars in it.
I cant throw some critique on this piece,as it was the "next level" and perfectly executed drop imo...
Lots of props

That you for the feed everyone! I owe a bunch of you feed in return, have read a piece from chain and freeda ill will drop feed tmrw, and will find something to read and feed for the rest of you too. Cheers, hope everyone had an awesome holidays