Open Mic: the dark icemane taunt em wile they die

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    Posted: 10 January 2013 at 9:01pm
a chicogo nigga from the noth side boy
come wit sum heat not a toys r us toy
we dont giva fuck bitch boy kick rocks
you fuckn wit a mafia we lettn off shots
real street shit yea we all got family
see ya son cryn cuz we calln him bambi
scater like roatchs wen it click klack pops
look you in the eye till ya heart beat stops
we taunt you wile you die bitch taunt you wile you die
are words are clearly hurtn you look like you finna cry
we taunt you wile you die bitch taunt you wile you die
kill you before you repent that way we sure yo bitch ass fry

its a message to you haters its been steamn for a wile
my ryms are the greatest remind me to put this shit on file
now back to the story up above the last bar
we dont giva fuck kill you tonight bitch sleep toma
we doit over an over so we call are self insaine
think before you step boy simon city ant no game
its time to let you niggas know that icemane to cold
shoot them bullets like fire boy your fotune has been told
look up in the sky take it in before its gone
he slowly slips away i kinda like it yyaw is that wrong?
HAHA fuck naw bitch we crazy its who we are
them murders from the north side say it wit me SCR, 

HUUUHH HAHA 
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gimmi sum feed back on this yo 
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote J Sass Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 January 2013 at 4:23pm
it was coo i liked yo last shyt better
 
but keep doin ya thang
 
 
 
 
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thnx dude i just wontd to do some cold hearted shit an wen i was chilln i herrd tha beat  an just did it

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote J504 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 January 2013 at 12:59am

Rhyming was ok, subject matter just didn't keep me interested like other drop did.

I think for the concept of this, it would've been more creative to go in a different direction. Maybe come at this from a serial killer point of view instead of "gang" element.

I know that the gang issue has been a touchy subject lately but you know I gotta keep it 100 with my feed... Most people these days consider SCR to be a clown show, especially in the south where it has been bastardized for the most part.


I liked your other drop alot more than this one tbh.

 


 

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There is more scr in MS than any we're in USA an I'm from Chicago lol but anyway this was just a dark rap sum cold blooded shit I'm ima start back on the real shit tho I ant a internet thug
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