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  • First to three EXPLAINED votes wins (explanations to be judged by me), 3-0 is a KO
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    ĄGo, Frank...!

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    ĄGo, Orion...!

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 December 2004 at 7:05pm
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    ha GAME gon take this 1 fo sure

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 December 2004 at 7:03pm

    BSD

    I'm almost ashamed at the ease, this tournament's been a breeze-through
    Shit's pathetic - I got a no show, a KO, and now a final against THESE TWO?!?
    -frank---------------------
    Like fabric softener in dryers, my heat's dispellin' this lace's static
    I keep destroyin' frank round after round, keep my flows set on automatic (BRRRDATTT!)
    Servin' this herb a frank white burger, made complete with CFC's meat in his buns
    Peddlin' garbage lines, frank's crew ain't runnin' nothin' but Sanford & Sons
    I strike like a Nazi blitzkrieg, bark rhymes in German while dissectin' this feeble Jew
    But I refuse to make fun of his spelling - cuz evinn disslecksikxs arr teople poo
    -Game--------------------
    Shatter Game's pieces like Humpty Dumpty, fell off the wall when he heard he had me
    Left him Monopolized with my lines - his shit's more played than Milton Bradley
    His style's half-baked, gets me laughin' at lines, straight rollin' like Samson Simpson
    The last Renegade you faced was Orion, remember? You barely got any hits in!
    Unless you like l's on your form - just count this too in our battle of crews
    Cuz havin' sex with frank white's mom is the only way you can screw the pooch
    -Victory-------------------
    I'm not known for sufferin' fools, but I'm makin' these fools suffer... fin.

    Frank

    game and big stank are like america in the 50s they aint gonna see a "left winger"
    big stank aint rap with his voice hese more like a female rnb singer
    see stank you should change your name to bse that the only way your beef is killing me
    see dave you couldent "drop" anything "dope" if you spat from the priory
    see do not fuck with frank thats the moral of this tale
    the only time you created sick shit is when you dropped the soap in jail
    see like a bad smell we cant get rid of you
    man you should just be grateful eternity let you through
    now for game we all no your only live up to your name working the street
    no show thats the way your compete why the fuck you elite
    ill punch you so hard ill leave you with brails vision
    just like Fifa 2005 this "game" cant cope with competition
    frank white will force you underground like a london commuter
    games gonna be fucked up just like his own computer
    see saying you could beat franks taking the piss like a unrinal
    i dont no why i wasted owning game he wont even turn up for the final

    america hated commnists in the 1950s communists r called leftwingers the winner off this faces stalin a communist leader big stank hates his voice for rap bse or mad cow disease infected beef the priory is a clinic for drug addicts big stank dog has been in jail a few times he has a no show against eternity
    game.. game is a term for a prostitute prostitutes work the street brails was a famous blind fifa 2005 lost the game war wid pro eveolultion to be the uks top football game games computer is broke hese mates wit bolo

    Game

    Let's just be frank, you ain't biggy so stop mistakin my idol
    congrats, you whack fucks though for makin the finals
    This nigga's albino?...yup i atleast i got that straight
    BSD can't "fuck me up" cuz he's a dog...I castrate
    It's a rat race to finish...can you riddle me this?
    I'll nibble their WHITE bones quicker than KIBBLES 'N BITS (dog food)
    and i'm headed to win this, i stole MI's spot
    frank made it to the finals?!...oh yea cuz MI dropped
    "MI" hot or wut? i'll boil y'all thin just like noodles
    then add whackness, dogs, and franks...shit i'll come out with white poodles
    Invitation to frank's fat ass we havin' an eat out
    bring the drinks i got the hot DOGS for all the meat mouths!!!!(big sucka)
    don't look at my text records, we're not divorced you ducks
    just look at frank with worse records and rhymes forced as fuck
    Tis the season to kill the those in need, you sickenin' peasants
    and since i forgot ur christmas gifts, take this ass kickin as presents.



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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 December 2004 at 7:49pm
    1. BSD
    2. Game
    3. Frank

    1. Opener was killer. blitzkerig lines and dislexia lines, niiice. milton bardley played but good and pooch about frank's mom, harsh. Brougth consistent punchez had nice flow and very humorous shit.

    2. Game had some internal multies, had good rhymes, some decents punchez, some were justnot relevant... End line was a GOOD finisher.

    3. Frank u use alotta wordplay, and alot needs explanations. sometimes good someties bad. I thgouth u'd bring a more solid verse. Flow was choppy and some punchez missed totally. Good Effort.

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    OK... Upcomers... my people... all three of you have potential to go on to big things despite what other people might have (or might not have, whatever) told you...everyone knows my opinion is fact... OK... I'm gonna vote... and disregard the fact I'm crew with BSD... I'm not afraid to vote against anybody, and I know he won't mind if I speak the truth... Haven't read a word of any of this yet, so let me say, good luck to all three of you... and don't be offended by the criticism, because, there will, be a lot, of it...

    BSD... Not sure on the amount of time you spent on this one... seems like a straight key... It's good but not great... I expected great for the finals n' all... Flow was not that great for me, it's OK jus' speakin' it, but the rhythmic, rap-like flow wasn't there for me... mainly due to lack of rhymes but not just that, it's the fact they're long lines as well... Didn't get too lyrical in it but it still had some vintage BSD here n' there with results... The intro didn't get that big a laugh out of me and it seemed kinda predictable too... so swing and a miss... The outro tho was quite cool... maybe coulda made it a two-line bar tho... but I liked the simplistic wit used there... and it made a cool endin' without havin' to hit hard... Another thing that threw me was the three-bar bits for each person... I mean splittin' up the verse is fine but three bars is not a nice way to flow... should keep it even, and as the intro and outro were split from the rest it did throw the overall cohesion off quite a bit... automatic line was nice, but considerin' the fact you only gave yourself three bars to work with, that could've perhaps been made a set-up, and used the punchline to punch the opponent, especially someone like Frank who everyone has personals on... what with him not givin' a fuck n' all, AND the fact you two have had and probably still have beef... That considered you coulda come harder at him, but the meat/buns thing was funny as fuck, Sanford and Sons kinda basic simile really, a lil played as well, the whole garbage thing I mean... Dyslexics are teople poo, it'll always make me laugh but I've seen it before as you know, so it didn't really land that hard, and the Nazi/Jew shit is played... Which brings me on to Humpty Dumpty in the Game bit, also played... I like the Bradley and Simpson plays that follow, pretty funny. but I felt the Orion punch was weak... just thrown in with not much impact or build-up or anythin'... lmao @ the bit after tho, takes a shot at both of them, it's simple but it was still funny... So yeah... well, havin' read this and not the others yet, I'm not ashamed to say that it won't surprise me if you don't win this... Underachieved IMO...

    Frank... OK... the first line personifies just about everythin' wrong with your style... lmao. You have a really good idea, but you work it terribly in a long line with no flow. It's not actually worked in as a word play at all, just a simile and a very forced one at that... This voice thing is already played out... by you in fact... so another miss. Then you begin the next four lines with "see"... another problem of yours... ineffective repetition... Anyway, BSE was funny... priory was crap... nearly all "dope" plays are crap... if you're gonna use a "dope" play, make it a lead-up/set-up so it at least isn't the prominent part in the bar... Soap in jail shit is all played... Eternity punch was a good idea but worked so basically... so I'm not really feelin' that either to be honest. I don't get this no-show shit with Game... he's managed to show (last minute, but still show) for all rounds... and battles... so that doesn't do much for me... Not feelin' the brail or the Fifa punches at all... first one was just ineffective, and the second one is played and predictable, if you're gonna use Game punches make them more complex, or link them in with another bit of wordplay... The next bar was good... commuter bit was weird, 'cuz "underground" in Hip Hop is seen as a good thing, what with the underground scene, so that didn't come across how you meant really, but the computer thing was simple but funny... Take piss/urinal is played... and the show up thing was takin' what I said on MSN to you "I don't think he'll show up"... you shouldn't have used that, 'cuz so far he's shown up last minute every single time... so that was a miss to finish... Another underachiever here... a LOT of missin' punches, you tried to throw too many and very few landed if at all, and in my view, missed punches are worse than no punches... so this has costed you... Flow was eh... 'cuz again it had no rhythm, shorter lines than BSD yeah, but it was all monosyllabic and it read choppily to me and the rhymes were terrible, some didn't even rhyme properly, and yeah... just not nice... You attempted some good ideas and you got as personal as you could, as usual... but again, I wouldn't be surprised if you don't win now... This really is Game's for the taking...

    Game... You've got the best flow here, again not great tho, rhymes were more advanced throughout which really do affect the charisma and impact of the verse more than people credit for... Makes it roll off sweeter for me... So your effectiveness did centre on that to an extent... First bar was weak, let's be Frank is played, the BIG stuff is played, if you're gonna use BIG or Frank stuff make it original or don't bother; the punchline was weak too, just filler really, like BSD's intro... "Dog...I castrate" shit was quite funny... but with dogs it's called neutering, so you shoulda worked it on more relevantly/accurately... Kibbles n' bits punchline was on motherfuckin' point... really, best punch in the battle... good idea, hit both, original... good shit... Next bit tho you get a lil obsessive with MI, I mean ya rhyme is essentially "spot/dropped/hot" there, which is kinda weak... but it was a good point how he had a no-show pass, not worked that well overall in the bar tho... kinda weak... White poodles is weak tho... you've already played on their names and this wasn't nearly as effective, so it was a tired out punch... Meat mouths again... quite funny nameplay, but you've already been there with the dog play and you're overdoin' it now, plus the whole cock-suckin' shit is unimaginative, tho you did work it better than most... I like the divorced bit, but ducks was so forced, and the followin' punch was kinda basic and played... everyone says that to Frank... lovin' the flow on the finisher tho, which helped it make impact, it was good, simple but effective...

    Um... yeah this was disappointing from all of you... sorry. BSD... all your punches landed, which is one thing you had over both opponents... but structurally I wasn't feelin' it, you didn't use the bars you had to make enough of an impact... Frank... you brought more aggression and material than both, but fell back in the fact you missed way more than both ya opponents did... Game... Stylistically and structurally you were much better than both opponents which served you well, and you used elements better too, which again worked in your favour as neither opponent punched hard enough to make their raw-punch style killer. You fell back on repeatin' ideas a bit which made me lose interest, and also a few played parts...

    Hmmmmmm...

    VOTE: Game...

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 December 2004 at 7:59pm

    BSD..not bad Seen u come better...flow was ok Choppy on sumparts punchlines Were nice...Few Played..Personals on point props..Overall u had a Solid Verse..

    Frank..Really Wasnt Feel'n ur verse man No hate just Lines need 2 be Reworded u had the ideas n sum real nice ones but u need 2 work on the way u Word the punch..not bad personals n cudnt quite Catch the flow

    Game..aint peeped u before but u def got Textin Skills..Came nice with the flow..punchlines were nice..personals on point..Basically u Ripped these kids a new asshole..lol

    Overall Game took this battle in mostly every aspect Came hard n flowed Real nice Props man

     

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 December 2004 at 8:59pm

    ok.. my vote is for game.. here's why...

    this battle was between BSD and Game becaus efranks berse was forced, had a bad flow.. and jsut wasnt nearly as solid as the others'...

    BSD came with some solid punches and a decent flow.. and his verse was pretty good.. liked..

    Left him Monopolized with my lines - his shit's more played than Milton Bradley..........  and ........   Servin' this herb a frank white burger, made complete with CFC's meat in his buns

    however... game took this cuz his punches were as good and better and his flow was on point... was a lot better than the other 2's...

    loved this line,...

    then add whackness, dogs, and franks...shit i'll come out with white poodles

    all the other punches were solid...

    GAME took this because though his punches were well matched with BSD's, his flow was better and his structure was as well..

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 December 2004 at 9:01pm

    Game wins 3-1-0 and wins Battle Royale... well done...

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