Open Mic: The Members (Part Deux) |
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Shankley 
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 Topic: The Members (Part Deux)Posted: 17 December 2014 at 2:06pm |
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My flow is off the CHAIN i spit to amaze If you read real close I'll guide ya through the H4ZE I'll get freaky like Barry when i bond Mission With Dizzle call him Patricia after the first incision I'll kill Jay but not Beyonce but take her on t' random Feed her Beans 'til she's gassed up then ask for a Ransom And it's best Rutter knows it's better to pay up I'm aiming to leave Ashley's life in chaos Imma Free the 5th Dog and just have TURTLE soup They're no Lucky D to leave a Brotha Goosed I'm the Elite and leave ya brains on Concrete Ill leave a Kid in the Dark i Shun all Senseis I need No Medic i spit Verses of Fire in the best way I'm the Nigma I'm dropping E like at The Rave I got more iLL Scripts than remakes of XFade I'm not Pompus by saying "No Misfits" A fake crew scrapping the barrel wi' Slips And Penry, he doesn't even get One Line... If ya did it'd be at the bottom call it a "bum line"
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nomedic
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Posted: 17 December 2014 at 10:28pm |
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Haha this was a real nice verse the content was funny as fuck talk about a name dropping spree lol cant wait too see the next one stay up
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 17 December 2014 at 10:59pm |
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haha this was a good read. I had fun doing this a while back. Good stuff, your stuffed alot of names in this drop nrothaman
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CHAIN
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Posted: 17 December 2014 at 11:05pm |
 that first line gave me the withdrawal chills. but seriously tho It was a entertaining piece. This was better than the first one. Ps: I think you should do a 2014 recap, Skillz style. |
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 18 December 2014 at 12:08am |
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Nice fun piece shank, and i made the list this time. Good man. Keep 'em coming.
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#bananas
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Shankley
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Posted: 18 December 2014 at 11:12pm |
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Thanks for the feedback guys, it's appreciated. I had fun with thw first one and I was looking through all my old posts and saw that and thought... May fuck me I didn't know it was that long ago, I need to do another there are plenty of new members.
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 19 December 2014 at 12:24am |
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Liked this man, been done before, but you forced it less, had fun with it. Opener was my favourite reference, just got the piece bouncing in the right way from the off.
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Shankley
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Posted: 19 December 2014 at 12:14pm |
Yeah by me
 thanks Keeks for the feed, it's always good getting feed from the top tier writers like yaself and chain. |
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Mission
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Posted: 20 December 2014 at 8:49am |
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read this during the ban and lmao at the bond mission line. this was pretty good bro good use of names and some funny flips.
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Pompus
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Posted: 20 December 2014 at 9:12am |
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Lotta clever lines bro, very fun read, nice to see some shit like this every now and then, as far as the piece, solid work, stay up
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Shankley
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Posted: 23 December 2014 at 4:15pm |
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Thanks for the feed.
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Exoduzt
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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 4:01am |
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This was cool shank...enjoyable read...I'm still waiting for you to come out of your shell so to speak and just hit that next level of writing. It always seems your on the verge of taking the next step. You can stick to a concept without a doubt. Now I just want to see you expand on it
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