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    Posted: 26 June 2007 at 11:01pm

This, I think is an ok one.. let me know what you think,, I need different opinions...

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If there is work to be done, I'm the one to depend on,
I'm a pro, I'm a show how to blow with the flow,
I dont get low, I grow to make even more dough,
I'm the new lil wayne, I'm gon make my own drought,
I'm gonna eat rappers, day in and day out..
If you wanna stay in my way hommie, get ready for war,
Armythug is tak'n over bitch, and he aint fuck'n around anymore.Tongue
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Novice...

ya need to work on ya flow... the words rjhyme for the most part yes... but the lines dont flow well together.. very sparatic...  and work on bein more creative with ya shit... not a buncha Don and money talk...
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