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iLL ScriptureZ 
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 Topic: The ReturnPosted: 18 February 2015 at 1:10pm |
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First post back & I’m tryna find the words of what the feelin’ is like Betrayal, ignorance & disrespect isn’t somethin’ I’m dealin’ wit light Motherfuckers be actin’ different when you killin’ it right? I guess now I’ll be consider rabies… the only illness that bites SMH! Write a topical on ME ‘bout how I fell from the glory Just to have the same outcome as me from tellin’ the story I wrote that verse from a concept that was spoke through words It’s no different than tellin’ a story your grandmother told you first Dumb hellish but I’ll just relish from it plenty Prolly change my name to Jose, cuz the Jealous Ones Still Envy Exo, I ain’t mad at the fact you was diggin’ fa’ dirt You had a hunch, checked on it after sniffin’ ma’ work I aint no different than anyone here, cept’ when I kick it its worth Real recognize real is startin’ to look a lil’ different ya heard? Lost respect for me? Fine. You’re supposed to take pride in ya lines Like a man should that’s how males are design since the prime I put my soul into my rhymes how dare you start fuckin’ wit mine Soundin’ like the sparrin’ partner that always wanted to shine This aint a diss, I’m finally gettin’ my time to speak Say somethin’ if anyone else on this shit tryna beef Tired of you hyped up sweet bitches talkin’ what realness about Ya’ll must have gum disease the way you keep iLL in your mouth …Now… I’m in a quiet place aimin’ a rifle in violent ways Biochemical warheads weaponized from a Taiwan base Tribal tactics like spearheadin’ daggers into a lions face Recognized by my title stoppin’ any faggots vitals pace Annihilate any adamant object that has survival rates If CPR is administered I’ll make sure the arrivals late A vicious tidal wave & watch iLL layin’ these raps & get served in their fuckin’ skin like Chilean sea bass Fuck wit me never to be found like Malaysian air crafts Suck the oxygen out the room like where the air at? Leave sores & wounds on every corpse I’ve beaten up to this My finest flow has more mind control than a North Korean publicist From the core I’m speakin’ up more to bein’ gluttonous & for sport I lure you fuckin’ poor people into punishment Behead’em for the gore fuck the respected & the poor I see people as punchin’ bags that are connected to the floor Go to an open casket viewin’ with smokin’ matches Throw’em in so fast & fastened the coffin closed ‘Til we’re all in smoke gaggin’ like chokin’ hazards As the smoke clears I’m showin’ 2 loaded magnums Like an old assassin with no hold on his colon spasms …I’m sprayin’ shit – hangin’ greats quick if my rate slips Heart darker than the grave shift, I’m not what the sane is Stronger than Bane’s fist use your face to break shit Thought I was operatin’ a trash truck how I make your waist lift Fuck your strategies bitch! Your angles done, aint shit My knockout range is up there with Daniel sons crane kick I want you to die so bad I can fuckin’ taste it I said I want you dead so bad I gonna fuckin’ taste it If I’m trash it’s a wonder how your raps didn’t blunder Roll the sleeve up of a Jewish woman… …& ask to get her number… iLL’s a household name that you wantin’ to be But every verse I drop you ain’t fuckin’ wit me |
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 1:20pm |
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I will give this proper feed. This was....... stay tuned
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IsaiahtheGreat
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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 1:22pm |
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Wow! I thought you were never coming come back to this site, man. But anyway, you killed this as usual. This flowed smoothly throughout & the multis were on point.
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Ransom
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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 1:27pm |
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Welcome back Scripts, Dope piece bro you couldn't of come back any better.. The rabies line was a nice play on your situation and the aggression was top notch. As always man you shattered it in both sections, Can easily quote the entire drop.. Glad to have you back though.. I was getting de- motivated again...
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~Lyrical Death Dealer~
"The Mike Myers of Papyrus" |
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 1:43pm |
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Props ransom.. Hit my PM
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 1:53pm |
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First post back & I’m tryna find the words of what the feelin’ is like
Exo, I ain’t mad at the fact you was diggin’ fa’ dirt
Lost respect for me? Fine. You’re supposed to take pride in ya lines
Tribal tactics like spearheadin’ daggers into a lions face
Behead’em for the gore fuck the respected & the poor Go to an open casket viewin’ with smokin’ matches
Stronger than Bane’s fist use your face to break shit
I want you to die so bad I can fuckin’ taste it
iLL’s a household name that you wantin’ to be
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Concrete
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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 1:59pm |
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I won't bother to take a stand if what you did was wrong or not, it's ancient news now anyways.
But this was definately a right way to respond to the drama, droppin a nice OM speaking your mind on the subject. I prefer this over endless bickering in the fuck yall section.
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 2:04pm |
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Diz thanks for the feedback... that jewish woman line is referring to the tattooed number on their arm during the holocaust
Con.. appreciate the feed... Isiah... thanks
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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 6:36pm |
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Rabies line was dope...liked the gum disease one.
Guess you meant animate object? Old assassin with no hold on his colon spasms was super slick flow & quite funny actually, good combo! Overall this was a cool drop, I liked how you out your side of the story out in verse form & then progressed into a kind of hype/punchline verse to show what you could do, was a good mix. Felt like it was a quick throwaway type thing & you could do a lot more damage if you cleaned it up a little & landed some more expansive multis. Was a good job though. |
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 8:02pm |
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Appreciate it Cuba
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Posted: 19 February 2015 at 11:58pm |
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I do respect you for coming back with an OM...I like that a lot. I'm always honest man. I did lose a bit of respect but thats me on the previous situation. Thats how I feel on the subject. And I will tell you how I feel on it. But other than that...Its good to have you back in the OM cus your OM'S have been fire. This is no different. this was sick. You have a very casual way with wordplay that makes it seem effortless. You also maintain a very fluid flow throughout this whole drop. the loaded magnums colon spasms sprayin shit was sick. I really enjoyed this...good shit
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 20 February 2015 at 12:16am |
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Honesty is something we all need. It's beating a dead horse when we say we have our opinion about the situation. No grudge, no beef. It happened. Shit, we prolly have plenty of different opinions about shit but that wont change the fact if you're a dope artist or not. Honest feed and being real is something I'm always for, always keep it 100
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A-one AR Royalty
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Posted: 20 February 2015 at 12:31am |
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This was ill and clever this killed alot of compition your multis were on point I learn alot from vets with top skill.
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dalinquent
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Posted: 20 February 2015 at 12:32am |
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this was hit and miss to me... Obviously i don't know what happened
with you or whatever but the first verse felt too much like crying to
me... Again, i dont know the situation but it sounds like u were caught
biting and felt the need to address it... commendable... Second verse
was decent tho, a few really clever plays made it enjoyable. Especially
liked the colon spasms part for instance... cool verse
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 23 February 2015 at 6:24pm |
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LOL @ crying....
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Posted: 24 February 2015 at 10:29pm |
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First off, I don't blame you for wanting to adrenals shit. Must have been annoying as duck watching in on everyone speaking on it. I get the angle you came with the first half. That's where I thought you'd be coming from. It served it's purpose and was put together well enough. The second half was back to your usual dope pieces. Your choice of multi's are always different to the norm and it flowed real nice and the concepts were interesting. The vocab is always refreshing and no change here. Nice return piece. Good shit.
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#bananas
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 24 February 2015 at 10:47pm |
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Props Rut
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