Open Mic: "Thought you didn't care"

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    Posted: 19 December 2013 at 10:50pm
Lyrically is how I handle shit

BG went off the deep end, we just laugh as the attack worsens...
DAMN your girl looks like Meadow Soprano!  the crack version...
Your a fuckin loser and so's the MOB yeah I know the truth hurts...
It's ironic all your rhymes got holes in it just like your roof work...
Don't make me spill the beans cus I don't give a fuck no more!...
In all honesty your fucking skank Bitch looks like such a whore...
How you in the Game Big time and don't know what a dub goes for?...
You claim to hate this site but live here. I think you might die from ya doses...
You claim you don't care but threatened to fly over oceans...
to fight Manc but naw you don't cry over postin?...
no lie this guy isn't joking.  Thats how serious this dude takes this site...
So many different alias's this guy just fakes his life...
the road back to no haterville? yeah you should take that route...
I still can't believe you actually took a picture of your neighbors house!...
Good looks and thanks to Manc he proved it with all the evidence in it's entirety...
no roofs in the winter? get on that Ohio unemployment you detriment to society!
I know you hating life rite now just thinking that the worlds shit...
You skinny broke bitch in the passenger side of ya girls whip!...
She'll never know how pearls fit unless I put it around her neck...
you mad bro? cus in your pages of shit talk you were soundin' stressed...
this clown just sweats at his keyboard claiming everything isn't fair...
If it bothers you so much then leave! AND I THOUGHT YOU DIDN'T CARE?...

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Fire!!!
N I ain't just saying it. I think everyone will agree that this was pure ether!!

Fuck!!

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I see you
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This was a BG diss, so i didn't get to reading it yet, but you definitely someone would have to think twice about stepping to and carefully plan their attack well in advance lol

Keep killin shit, mayng!!
Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
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Heavy bars, fam. I know got that personal approach and I dig that.

Damn @ that next door neighbours house bar! Lol
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thanks for the replies so far fellas

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Lol- My mans back.

Solid bars throughput... Flow was really smooth.
Lots of quotable bars in that. Suck cincepts and perfection executions...

"i see you" < this coment explains how hard it was lol

Props bro


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Even though there were some funny bars in this, I couldn't laugh cause this shit was that serious. This is what ya call "telling it like it is". The title of this and that ending line was perfect, that's the contradiction of Shawn to a T. The psychology behind this was solid and threatening to fly across oceans.

This was murderous.
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good looks on all the replies so far

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sickness. one of the better shawn disses. Thumbs Up
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this was quite good ex…. i know you do topicals more but this had punches man… good shit
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thanks for the replies

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Good diss ex, heavy hits here...
Glad to see less chirpin in this diss although you did diss me to
It's all about writing. Liked this read for sure
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Although I'm not too into this whole Big Game ordeal going on all over Open Mic, I do appreciate your lyrical display of battle skill here, Exo. You obviously use the personal aspect to your advantage very efficiently and wisely so in creating a very strong, and effective battle rap. Good ish, man.
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