Battles under Review: Tikal ~vs~ JBrenn |
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JBrenn 
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 Topic: Tikal ~vs~ JBrennPosted: 06 November 2007 at 10:47pm |
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5 bars...
3-0 ko
first to 5 otherwise
due: asap! no later than a week! a greement by saying check
Check!
Good luck and we should prolly vote on at least two battles....
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Tikal
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Joined: 06 November 2007 Location: Miami Status: Offline Points: 16 |
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Posted: 06 November 2007 at 10:52pm |
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check....ill post some time tomarow
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JBrenn
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Posted: 06 November 2007 at 11:47pm |
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ok...
Its funny how these kids come from miami to a uk site to lose...*
Cook this kid like a french fry leave em batterd a salted an bruised (assaulted),
He thinks hes gonna be a big star get on all the big contact list....
Compressing his spine is the only way hes dropping a compact disc,(cd)
Only time he could flip shit is if he soiled himself in a highspeed car chase,
Hows this bar taste kid put on a hawiian T and thinks he's scar face...Ur not
Take a dirt nap cause im rippin through T like warren sapp at a baby gap,
Kids fruitier than an orange tic tac t dont spit mac just click BACK.(the back button)
Gettin high off a nickle bag he forges style but wont bite cuz he prefers a pickle gag!
Says his name is jorge it could be elmo and im still wont tikal this fag...(tickle)
* the miami dolphins went to london and lost to the new york giants! site / web site duhhh lol....
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Tikal
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Posted: 07 November 2007 at 3:06pm |
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I�m �PRIMETIME� like �DEION�, this peon tempts-disaster from hectic-slanders~~//
Bow-down, you�ve MET-ya-MASTER, I�ll �wear you down� like ELECTRIC �SANDERS�// PATHETIC BASTARD!! Fuck second, your shit is hittin THIRD RATE// You EARN HATE from my heightened word-rate that CURSE your birth-date and all ya NERD-TRAITS// Put holes thru ya �pocket-protector� with chrome when I bust SHOTS-in-ya-SECTOR ~~// I could use ROCKETS-to-WRECK-YA, or spit-acid and turn the balls in ya SOCKETS-to-NECTAR// Start callin-me-LECTER~~ cause I�m eating emcees in a cannibal-fashion~~// Get left in a CAST-or-IN-TRACTION when I have ya physical DISMANTLED-wit-PASSION // My BARS have you �on-lock�, and you can�t �break-out� if had ALLERGIC REACTIONS// This VIRGIN-needs-ACTION, cause he can�t �CUT� like a surgeon-with-some-person-distractin�// |
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Point Blank
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Posted: 07 November 2007 at 3:21pm |
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Easy Vote....
J, Ya Verse Was Decent. Some Good Nameplay Punches An Miami Punches, Scarface Thing Was Cool. The Occasional Multi Seemed Forced But Apart From That The Flow Was 'Ok'. Overall An Average Verse, But Pretty Good Compared To Some Of Your Other Verses. Tikal, This Was A Nice Verse, But For A Battle, It's Pretty Useless. Not ONE Line Was Aimed At Him, As No Personals Were Used. No Offence, But This Could Easily Have Been Bitten With You Only Bein A New Member. This Is The Type Of Verse That Could Be Used Against Anyone. Verses Like This Would Be Hot If They Had Personals In. JBrenn GMV |
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Swift Styles
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Posted: 07 November 2007 at 3:35pm |
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^ word. here on LA its probably alot different from the site you came from. no need to capitalize rhymes we can spot those out any way, it makes it harder to read through.
Tikal: some dope content here but not much of a battle verse like point said, nothing was Aimed at him. Coulda flipped a line or came up with a personal to show originalty in future battles, do some HW on your opponent and make it more effective. nice metas though. J: average content. dope closer though nice name punch! wasnt feeling the BACK bar at all. but more showed more of what we are looking for in battles. Flow was off in few places. Hard to decide here.. Though Tikal had no direct punching his flow was tighter. but.. I'm gonna go with JBreen for showing more ....LA ..battle experience and punchlines. nice drops by both J GMV |
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_HolloW_
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Posted: 07 November 2007 at 9:42pm |
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I'm don't throw the "biter" label around much at all, cause I hate the term... But Blank's probably right. SS, you shouldn't needa tell him this.
Notice the TOTALLY different way these verses are written.... Like they were by too different people. Now, this isn't hard physical-evidence, but it's apparent that either he copied it from somewhere, or for some ungodly reason, he's the only person to ever do this who feels the need to type like a completely different person for this battle... All I'm sayin', look into it.
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Spent six months hurtin' who I shoulda been supportin'/
But I was nervous, I was stupid, I was pushin' for abortion/ |
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JBrenn
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Posted: 07 November 2007 at 10:00pm |
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any way..... 2-0 me uppin for the ko
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Point Blank
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Posted: 08 November 2007 at 10:31am |
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Lol @ Me Being Correct
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Rameez
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Posted: 08 November 2007 at 10:47am |
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Vote > Jbrenn
Tikal is biting whore.. |
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