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Titu 
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Joined: 04 July 2013 Location: 🔥 Hell 🔥 Status: Offline Points: 4522 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-19-0 Form: WWWWWW |
 Topic: Titu VS ReuskiPosted: 08 October 2013 at 7:04pm |
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house drop ya verse
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Reuski
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Joined: 08 October 2013 Location: Ireland Status: Offline Points: 29 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-0-0 Form: W |
Posted: 08 October 2013 at 7:14pm |
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Battlin me , I think you’re delirious With that profile picture, I can’t even take you serious, You probably rap worse than Miley Cyrus. Now you’re gonna lose to a kid that’s Irish. We’re the whitest country the world’s ever had Losin to one of us, that’s just sad, I got enough rhymes to go on for years,
But if I don’t stop now, you’re gonna be in tears. |
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Titu
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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 7:17pm |
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check
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Reuski
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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 7:20pm |
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check?
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Titu
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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 7:31pm |
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yes. i will drop my verse soon
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Reuski
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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 7:36pm |
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Ok :)
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Reuski
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Posted: 08 October 2013 at 9:38pm |
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Anytime soon?
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Reuski
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Posted: 09 October 2013 at 4:22pm |
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You said soon 22 hours ago. Come on
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Titu
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Posted: 09 October 2013 at 4:57pm |
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You called the beast bitch- how the fuck you gon deal with me, Im the metal crusher-i wont reuse this "used" key, Ill just melt you then send your corpse to your irish folks, And your ass will be a history like your  old played jokes, I could sense the insecurity- thats eatin' you alive, This guy is too obsessed with the fact he is broke n white, My guns flash like the cameras- say cheeeeese and smile, Then i will kick your "wannabe" whack ass back to 8 miles, Expos: 1st bar: Reuski ( re-us-ki = re - used- key) 2nd bar: - he is irish - his 3rd line ( Miley jokes are old now) 3rd: -see his 5th line 4rth: - his name is B rabbit. Eminem played the role of "B rabbit" in his movie 8 mile. |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Shankley
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Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 09 October 2013 at 6:06pm |
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Reuski: nice verse good flow and you had some nice rhymes but NO personals or name flips its too generic.
Titu: good flow decent verse and some nice lines as well I liked the name play and you used his verse nicely. MVGT Titu for a better verse and punches Reuski dont be disheartened by this just read some tutorials and some of the Vets verses and see how the form punches and personals. |
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BIG GAME
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Posted: 09 October 2013 at 7:20pm |
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ReRe: Your shit is way simple. It's a verse full of weak statements. It's missing punchlines. There was nothing too clever about anything that ya said. Very weak, ya need a lot of work, keep practicing.
Tit: The opener was a good attempt but a complete failure at the end. Though you attempted a nameplay punch, you forced the whole concept. You would have had better success by using a different concept for the same nameplay. For me, you win this battle for having a more thought out verse. Though none of your personals or punches inflict no damage, they are at least obvious attempts at throwing a punch, as ReRe never swung. Not much here. It's never exciting unless there are well thought out plays by the battlers. Think your shit our more. Vote: Tit |
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BIG GAME
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Posted: 09 October 2013 at 7:22pm |
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Reuski
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Posted: 09 October 2013 at 7:52pm |
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Thanks for the feedback guys. It is my first time on this site so I am no expert. Hopefully I'll improve.
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Titu
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Posted: 10 October 2013 at 10:56am |
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thanks yall for feed n votes.
2/0 me
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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JBrenn
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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 5:44pm |
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Really game hit this on the head. Weak battle from two start up emcees.
Titu you show good concepts and a good flow some of this has potential. keep upping your game your punches are almost there. Reu don't key style your shit take time and think your verse through all the way. Titu gets this by a land slide. 3-0 ko. |
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Titu
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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 9:39pm |
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Hahaha
Mods? Can we close this. Thanks for votes |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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JBrenn
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Posted: 28 October 2013 at 6:54am |
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Bitter alert mods!
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Titu
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Joined: 04 July 2013 Location: 🔥 Hell 🔥 Status: Offline Points: 4522 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-19-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 28 October 2013 at 6:57am |
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Aight J. Ima repot his postt
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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JBrenn
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Posted: 28 October 2013 at 7:15am |
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T if he bite someone for that garbage of a verse I think your ok bro. Lol that verse was straight ass.
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Titu
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Joined: 04 July 2013 Location: 🔥 Hell 🔥 Status: Offline Points: 4522 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-19-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 28 October 2013 at 7:20am |
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Lol.
It needs a "brain" to cheat. |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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