Text Battle Archive: [T]Joffy428 Vs Rapper T |
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joffy428
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Posted: 02 February 2021 at 7:35pm |
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joffy428
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Rapper T What did I say last _ime Stop Stealing The T in time dam u always late in our Debate i always Seem to be the first to knock on your name And sending it to the wall of shame located
beside The Red carpet in hollywood is the orange wall of Failed and Unwanted Rapper Names But in the book of Rap Gods you're Wanted for stealing your now labeled A Mocky Mouse I mean Stealing The word RAPPER and use it as your name to put some kinda swagga on your pimpled faced and your bandana is on The wrong Way but when you turned around to look in a mirror u got spacey and lost aim as u remember that ๐ oranged Wall with your Name u pissed All over Yourself and on the toilet your wife yells it's wet everytime you Loser and adds your not a rapper nor. A poet. she' goes to take a shit and inject some kinda crack to forget Your lame Ass Name And So your fat wife Will beat and sit down on ur face like she. use to. now she's fat you Won't let her now she just force you as she looks for her panty she blames U you stole her Only Grandma Panty that had written on it Mon-Fri๐ฉ u shoulda looked better Rapper T Cause. Your panty Says Jan-Dec in Orange letter Rememberrrrrr duhhhhhhh |
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Rapper T
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joffy you're like the shitty bit of toffee that gets stuck to a shoe just a gritty bit of coffee grind in this bucket of slew cunt you got nothing to do? but just scrawl these absolute pieces of shit? u faggot I'll beat you to bits, be thankful I'm leavin' u this cos ur whole style and I mean WHOLE STYLE is completely unhostile u bring a ho style to this hostel and your meeting some hostiles ur weak and flop child, the kinda clown kicked outta circuses u fucked with the wrong crowd. we'll find u now and rip out ya cervixes been down to piss on his pertinence this fuckboy joffy's a lame this'll be ya 14th straight loss, that's a win for T... nite nite no name
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Cuba
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Upping for vote(s)
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
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Well Joffy good to read your at this still, now i don't mean to be a
Cunt here,but you're verses are still in the realm of hard to read,let me explain,any punch/personal you formulate gets lost in this wall of words you run with, it's broken because your bars just bleed into each other, which forces the reader to decipher them themselves, which can and does cause confusion and breaks up flow in the process,the other major problem I read with you're rhymes is the disses/punches don't seemed fleshed out, they come off as if this was a freestyle or an entry in a jotter to expand on and use,other than that I'm good,now the part where I will give you heaps of credit is your tenacity,you really are the Knight downed on the battle field ready to dust off rise and fight again...respect. Well I'm going to give this to RT, his verse was better aimed and to be honest directed, plus his aggression was evident in this tussle and more to my liking.. Vote .Rapper T....peace |
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Crimson Juice
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Due to lack of votes this is now closed with the win going to RapperT.
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
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