Open Mic: Truth's punishment

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"Some say that a lie kills, yet sometimes the truth alone is punishment"

...Insight...

Situations where truths never spread, it's no surprise that we ask

President bush for the REAL reason, our solders died in iraq

Countless attempts at expressing wishes, that the silence is broken

But no reply is given, it's clear only the violence has spoken

Truth becomes Punishment,  never wanna put em down

Like when ya twenty stone girl, questions if she's lookin' round

Debates whether she's covering up the camel toe in new spedo's

Aint gun say shit, you aint gettin another girl you NEED those! 

Why's daddy leaving us, why's that man got a shovel as he uses dirt

The conclusions clear, an old urban legend that the truth'll hurt...

...My story...

For years iv searched for the truth, for the reasons you left

But for years i was lied, truth was hidden i believed your the best

Deceived like the rest, mother didn't wana hurt a child

But the difference between past events and todays versions wild

Up until the age of fifteen i believe you'd walked for the best of us

Never discovered the truth till i witnessed scars on her chest from cuts

Questioned how they was made, i forced a reply

Explained she was showered with boiling water...didn't want a daughter thats why

...

You found out she was pregnant and tried to force the abortion

Than the truth was revealed, you didn't walk you was pushed

And that you swing fists so hard...everytime you'd talk she would shush

The 'perfect' father id once believed i had was only a vision

The feelings for you i once had vanished, i was lonely n missing

Hard to accept you wasn't a man despite the cheers

Still tryna fight my fears, which on my pillows id write in tears 24

Each drop spelling out the words "revenge is the key" fight back

 I learnt you'd steal my baby food money, to feed habits n buy crack

Why that? I search from answers but you never write back

So now ill bite back, take this dynamite of emotions and ignite that

Though i put the facts of what you done strangely to use

I now forever live in fear ill turn out the same, thanks to the truth

...Always thought i wanted to know...truth's punishment..

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Kay B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kay B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Truth's punishment Posted: 09 December 2007 at 3:43pm
	"Some say that a lie kills, yet sometimes the truth alone is punishment" ...Insight... Situations where truths never spread, it's no surprise that we ask President bush for the REAL reason, our solders died in iraq Countless attempts at expressing wishes, that the silence is broken But no reply is given, it's clear only the violence has spoken Truth becomes Punishment, never wanna put em down Like when ya twenty stone girl, questions if she's lookin' round Debates whether she's covering up the camel toe in new spedo's Aint gun say shit, you aint gettin another girl you NEED those! Why's daddy leaving us, why's that man got a shovel as he uses dirt The conclusions clear, an old urban legend that the truth'll hurt... *...My story...* For years iv searched for the truth, for the reasons you left But for years i was lied, truth was hidden i believed your the best Deceived like the rest, mother didn't wana hurt a child But the difference between past events and todays versions wild Up until the age of fifteen i believe you'd walked for the best of us Never discovered the truth till i witnessed scars on her chest from cuts Questioned how they was made, i forced a reply Explained she was showered with boiling water...didn't want a daughter thats why ... You found out she was pregnant and tried to force the abortion Than the truth was revealed, you didn't walk you was pushed And that you swing fists so hard...everytime you'd talk she would shush The 'perfect' father id once believed i had was only a vision The feelings for you i once had vanished, i was lonely n missing Hard to accept you wasn't a man despite the cheers Still tryna fight my fears, which on my pillows id write in tears 24 Each drop spelling out the words "revenge is the key" fight back I learnt you'd steal my baby food money, to feed habits n buy crack Why that? I search from answers but you never write back So now ill bite back, take this dynamite of emotions and ignite that Though i put the facts of what you done strangely to use I now forever live in fear ill turn out the same, thanks to the truth ...Always thought i wanted to know...truth's punishment..


Fatal Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Fatal Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 09 December 2007 at 6:07pm
	Dope verse...flow was good throughout...story was nicely discribed...overall was a deep verse wit good emotion...keep up man ...1


Masta_P Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 06 December 2007 Location: mInD yO oWn F'iNg BiTnEZz Status: Offline Points: 375 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-5-2 Form: LLLLNN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Masta_P Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 09 December 2007 at 9:04pm
	very nice verse kay- flowed very well and also had good emotion.


Freeda5thDawg Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 19 June 2006 Status: Offline Points: 1324 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-1-0 Form: WWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Freeda5thDawg Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 10 December 2007 at 12:02am
	shit, the emotion was greatly expressed...lyrical point of view, it was written very well and the details and storytellin was on point...very enjoyable read...u never cease to express yaself deeply in these kinda pieces, and readin them really catches my attention alot...can catch some real inspiration from ya writin man...nice shit...


Kay B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kay B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 10 December 2007 at 9:42am
	Props, thanks guys