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Calibra
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Topic: Ignorant Shit 3 Ft. ChainPosted: 11 December 2009 at 5:50pm |
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We do not promote ignorance in this establishment... [Chain] Preaching to the choir while I'm serenading lesbians Beat the ants I can while the chairmen face their elephants Losing all their wars as I barricade my settlements Gearing up for battle where sheriffs hate to let us win Wishing I was there when Larry Davis tested them I'm sticking to the script while Interrogating thespians Scared to change society 'cause parents ain't intelligent Paraphrase this sentiment till Sarah Palin's president I'm really not that conscious, won't wear a cape to rescue men I really don't care 'bout the married gays in Netherland Shy away from gossiping like ”Mary Kate's the better twin” Rebel with a cause where Mary Jane's the medicine I talk about how strong Ares made us veterans Looking in the mirror like these pair of shades is heaven sent Too macho to ignore that Terrence J is feminine Watching Rocsi's lotion while it marinates her melanin... [Calibra] Turnin' melons into smoothies, Veterans to Guccis Severin' a groupie cause my Heaven is unruley Levelin' the playing field, defener of the jury Im shinin' with a verse like this, was never into Rubies Eye to eye, the Dragons den, the endin' of this movie Armed with words to pierce flesh, they're enterin' like Bruce Lee Loosely, terms are used repeatedly to bruise me If you could see that stupidly they equally amuse me Etherin' as standard, pens are secretly my uzi While ya life story comes across as weaker than The Goonies Eat from my plate, make no mistake, ya livin' in the mans house You only failed to help yourself, these fuckers want a hand out And overnight I showed the light, still dealin' with this insolence Why can't you See Jay? You just revealed ya ignorance Tired of takin' shit from pricks, still seethin' from this incident And now ya gettin' fucked you bitch... New Era's gettin' intimite! Edited by Calibra - 11 December 2009 at 5:59pm |
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Posted: 11 December 2009 at 7:52pm |
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Coolio
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Calibra
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Posted: 11 December 2009 at 8:23pm |
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Thanks for your time!
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Posted: 11 December 2009 at 8:50pm |
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As expected pretty much perfect, both had decent flow and both had nice content, out of the two i preferd chains simply cause i enjoyed it more but both verse's were really good and had lines i liked.
Best chain lines imo were Shy away from gossiping like ”Mary Kate's the better twin” Rebel with a cause where Mary Jane's the medicine I talk about how strong Ares made us veterans Looking in the mirror like these pair of shades is heaven sent Best cal lines were Eat from my plate, make no mistake, ya livin' in the mans house You only failed to help yourself, these fuckers want a hand out And overnight I showed the light, still dealin' with this insolence Why can't you See Jay? You just revealed ya ignorance |
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Posted: 11 December 2009 at 9:31pm |
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Both are top on the site when it comes to rhymes, Chain had the better rhymes, but Cal had more..if that makes sense.. I just found Chains rhymes much smoother. Flow was good on both, nothin that really stood out all that much though compared to ya usual standards.. Nice shit yall
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Posted: 12 December 2009 at 3:36pm |
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^ Stealth bump What you want me to say...you both know how to rhyme & you both know I will know that and appreciate it, wasn't the greatest drop ever but it was coolio...I could be anal and pick out minor things I didn't like but it serves no purpose and takes away from me liking the verses
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Posted: 12 December 2009 at 5:48pm |
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chain.. as usual nice rhyming and flow.. always the one who shows more complexity in the verse....
Shy away from gossiping like ”Mary Kate's the better twin” Rebel with a cause where Mary Jane's the medicine ^^I like this line.. Calibra Eat from my plate, make no mistake, ya livin' in the mans house You only failed to help yourself, these fuckers want a hand out And overnight I showed the light, still dealin' with this insolence Why can't you See Jay? You just revealed ya ignorance that one stood more.. nice read.. the rest seem bit weak to me.. but u doing great. ez would be nice if u feed my verse in return Edited by Rameez - 12 December 2009 at 5:49pm |
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Posted: 17 December 2009 at 10:43pm |
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this shit was definitely sick..flows were tight, content was fresh...props to Chain, for killing it on the multis...and to Calibra, for spittin' some flames...peace y'all, I'm out..
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I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
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