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TURTLE 
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 Topic: TURTLE/Matt The Ripper .::COLLAB::.Posted: 18 November 2013 at 9:09pm |
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Me n TURTLE at it again, we puttin crack in our pens Everyone knows we sick, we don't have to pretend Everything we craft is intense, got everyone thinkin Matt's sniffin meth Fuck your weak punches, we got steel chairs to smash in your head Graphic concepts too extreme to be mainstream So if you make me angry, i'll make ya brains bleed Crazy? Yeah, maybe, i mean more than likely My theme's like speed, shit'll fuck up ya psyche Slightly enlightening, but you know i like to be frightening I'll leave bodies everywhere, i don't need to hide a thing Kinda think i kinda think too much about death these days I am completely insane now, i couldn't be less deranged Wrestling with demons, feelin like i couldn't possibly be a human being We drink human blood n you best believe we ain't leavin anybody breathing... ~TURTLE~ ...Pleasing to the eyes as you read what we verbalize, Make you speak in tongues like baptist and evangelize.. Poison in every line we spit like venemous toxins, As it makes you sick in the brain of youre helpless noggins.. Youre shits irrelevant, delicate minds under development, These noobs tryin hard but to no available prevalent.. We coming strong like the juggernauts temperament, Make it rain on you bitches like a war zones regiment.. Elegant rhymes from two intelligent guys with the element of surprise- First shot ready to fire like snipers negligent to comply- Evident to apply an etiquette supply to which I imply- That the words on the screen are a testament to rise So to suggest that we are any less obsessed of what we write would test our mutual respect.... ...Goodbye!!! |
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Titu
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Posted: 18 November 2013 at 9:41pm |
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Daymm !
Tight verses from both. Matt: some solid shit bro... Idk wtf you were doing before. You really dropped quality stuff back in the days just like this one. Sone people might say " this kind of self hypong is boring bla bla bla" but i like it tbh. I guess i told you before i like your aggressive style and this is an example why i do so... Here are some hot bars and lines... Everything we craft is intense, got everyone thinkin Matt's sniffin meth Fuck your weak punches, we got steel chairs to smash in your head ^^ i liked the concept here. Aggressive style.. Graphic concepts too extreme to be mainstream So if you make me angry, i'll make ya brains bleed ^^^ flow was really tight here. Wrestling with demons, feelin like i couldn't possibly be a human being We drink human blood n you best believe we ain't leavin anybody breathing... ^^^ dope closer.. Same agressive style. I like the opening line more, concept was really raw. Turtle: Comon bro, another bomb. You already know what I think about yo skills. Your rhyme complexity always get me.This was dope imo... Flow was very smooth throughout. You also had agressive stance in there..Plus, i also liked this show off of vocab... Here are few quotes(though yo whole verse was worth quoting): ...Pleasing to the eyes as you read what we verbalize, Make you speak in tongues like baptist and evangelize.. ^^^ dope opener imo... Really liked it.. Plus yo flow was butter smooth here.. We coming strong like the juggernauts temperament, Make it rain on you bitches like a war zones regiment.. ^^^ daymmm!!!! Perfctly executed. Elegant rhymes from two intelligent guys with the element of surprise ^^^ the way you crafted this line, shows your skills. Dope collab fellas. Really liked it. Keep producing the fire... |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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TURTLE
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Posted: 18 November 2013 at 9:49pm |
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Sweet, thanks TITU for the feed!
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 1:02pm |
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Lol shitbdnt see you dropped this, dropped it again, myself, but with a title lol
And thanks for the good looks, gentlemen! |
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 1:03pm |
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Big props to Turtle on another job well done!
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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Kosmosis
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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 1:06pm |
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Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 1:07pm |
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^ hater = winning
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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TURTLE
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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 10:35pm |
Don't worry Kosmo, you're always a winner in my book 
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 12:19am |
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Hah. Pathetic.
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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Dougysnuggy
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 1:17am |
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Damn... where to begin..
Matt, I liked the brain bleed line, pretty dope. Crazy? Yeah, maybe, i mean more than likely My theme's like speed, shit'll fuck up ya psyche Slightly enlightening, but you know i like to be frightening I'll leave bodies everywhere, i don't need to hide a thing < Couldve been hide things to flow better Overall, Matt, your verse was pretty edged. I liked the rhyme schemes you used. THe syllable count was a little high on some lines in comparison to the line before... But whatever. Turtle.....
oison in every line we spit like venemous toxins, As it makes you sick in the brain of youre helpless noggins.. < Dope... but ugh... Your* Youre shits irrelevant, delicate minds under development, < .... Your * sorry man.... These noobs tryin hard but to no available prevalent.. We coming strong like the juggernauts temperament, Make it rain on you bitches like a war zones regiment.. This is my favorite part of your verse. The fucking rhyme scheme here is nuts. You just made juggernauts rhyme with war zone.... Nice. OVerall this was pretty dope, I think you and matt both brought some interesting rhyme schemes in this. I'd be down for a collab. Hmu |
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TURTLE
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 1:24am |
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Thanks bud, appreciate ya checkin this.
And ya ill holler atcha about the collab sometime! |
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 1:57am |
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Lol im a keystyler, Doug, i don't take much time on my collab verses... First thought = best thought n go
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 9:21am |
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You guys are fucking viscous back to back like that.
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