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    Posted: 14 March 2005 at 7:30pm

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no crew/d.r/hate votes

first 5 votes......3=ko......4=tko

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 March 2005 at 9:22pm

GAME You can`t DUCK-from these ruff SCRIPTZ,get FUCKED-QUICK//
they,ll hit ur chest so hard ya LUNGS-SPlit(damn)//
u wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch,
Ya lack-the-wits//
my voice SPITZ BULLETS like I'm clappin-clips//
AGAINST THEE You wouldn't hold hot rhymes if you grabbed-my-lips//
Fuck Wit Ya 'HEAD-QUICK' Let the 'LED-SPLIT' Ya Brain 'STEM-BITCH'//
'TEST-THIS' Forget The Genie's But I'll easily Grant game a 'DEATH-WISH'//
i got this IMPOSTOR giving up rap,grabing guitars and 'singin like wyclef'(LOL)//
hiding behind more wack disguises than chevy chase in the 'series of fletch'//
im murderin game with punches more brutal than bruce lee displayed in the legendary 'game of death'//
got u speaking very nervous and raspy like 'ur mocking meth'(lol)//
quiet is kept when i swing more bats at his head than baseballs 'new-york-mets'(whoa.....Game over!)

 

uppin for the obvious......1


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 March 2005 at 11:14am
Game Over? I thought it was just beginning, and dont over look the multies people




Wise-guy�you�ll DIE. Why? It�s �cus you came wit� THAT VERSE
All your drops are pieces of shit.. bitch L.A. aint pampers (ok)//
This man getting a burstin�, shows his aggression wit cursing

On my list the 1st thing:
1.     Make sure you murk him//

Next is a little quick, so we�ll be taking up speed�
Game will be taking no heed as I will be

2.     Making him bleed//

This is a bum trap, spittin my shit on you like gum wraps
After I

3.     Put you in the pound

You can play wit' my mums cat//

Bum�raps an art, so you should be the 1st to pull
Talkin �clip this, I�ll shoot you��..so wheres the fuckin personals//
We aint equals, so like a Game you getting played son
Now they'll call me "Freddy" the way I�m fatally gettin these hits on Jason (ya!)//*

*Theres a movie called Freddy vs. Jason


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 March 2005 at 9:20pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 March 2005 at 6:31am
Originally posted by Game Game wrote:



*Theres a movie called Freddy vs. Jason



kinda superfulious (i dont give a shit if its spelt wrong)

Flow~ both i guess
Multis~ warr
Originality~ no decision
Punches~ warr
enjoyment~ hmm

warr~ the lines in this piece could either be too short or too long so there was that           part that dragged down ur overall perfomance eg t
          u wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch,
          Ya lack-the-wits//
         
the multis were there but some just seemed a grap at something more than           an actual attempt

Game~ Personally didnt like the way u structured the verse seemed more like a                 list than a battle. The punches I found to be a bit to conventional/played or             what ever you wish to call it. Again the lengths of lines could alter a bit eg.
            1.     Make sure you murk him//  and
            Now they'll call me "Freddy" the way I�m fatally gettin these hits on Jason

so after that i award my vote to warr
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 March 2005 at 12:13pm
1-0.....uppin 4 votes

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 March 2005 at 9:29am
107 VIEWS AND 1VOTE?SMH

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 April 2005 at 11:44pm
THIS IS OUTRAGEOUS.........CAN SUM 1 VOTE

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 April 2005 at 3:09pm

ima go warr on dis one cus his was overall better
multis-warr
punchlines-warr
flow-tie
overall-warr

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 April 2005 at 10:47am

yo game i read yer shit like i dunno, alil while ago maybe N you were droppin bomb; what happened??

Flow ~ Warr

Multies ~ tie .. i'll give that a tie

Personals ~ N/A

Punches ~ Warr

 

if yah want a mo' explain'd vote hollah at me!!

 

Itz Simple....I'm Better Then You!!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 April 2005 at 7:56pm

well thas 3-0=ko

 

 

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 April 2005 at 7:57pm
Pleae could you vote on the k-face vs Flash battle please
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 April 2005 at 3:09pm
scotty can u fix my record dawg.......win by ko......thx

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 April 2005 at 7:03pm
Unforgiven, i thot it was enough to take him though. lol...just a battle anyway...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 April 2005 at 10:57am
lol......dont underestimate me son.......my rep is thorough byond this site

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 April 2005 at 11:05am

as a biter...

Originally posted by Warr Warr wrote:

u wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch,
Ya lack-the-wits//
my voice SPITZ BULLETS like I'm clappin-clips//

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=144404

 

I'll find more... or maybe you'll claim that's one of your aliases too?

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 April 2005 at 11:08am

wait, why is it that when ppl bite shit, it's always found in 3 different places?

4 lines in this:
http://www.rapverse.com/pages/113409/flash.html

Ya heard Orion, niggas act like they the only ones with search engines

 

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 April 2005 at 11:09am
ACTUALLY IT IS.......SMH

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