Open Mic: {WD#1} Asain Persuasian

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ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I got da chedda with gorgonzola, ill chop ya bruh 
n feed ya tuh sarcohpagas, im a monsta bruh 
you just a rickshaw broke, get rode on by a rhinoceros
you a hoe bitch, ill smack ya up n leave ya Vociferous
youre more absorbant than a refinery of phospherus
keep crying G, ill make sure ya bitch get boned quick
use a dictophone to record as she pisses n moans dizz
Aeromancy i warn, your bitch getting a' golden shower
i devour dat flower n leave er' pussy scolded n sour
After we scour, we gonna get ludic n play as i puncuate
Kerflooey that taint and send her off to you for valentines day


Edited by daydizzle89 - 12 February 2016 at 3:23pm

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daydizzle89 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote daydizzle89 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: {WD#1} Asain Persuasian Posted: 12 February 2016 at 3:15pm
	ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I got da chedda with gorgonzola, ill chop ya bruh n feed ya tuh sarcohpagas, im a monsta bruh you just a rickshaw broke, get rode on by a rhinoceros you a hoe bitch, ill smack ya up n leave ya Vociferous youre more absorbant than a refinery of phospherus keep crying G, ill make sure ya bitch get boned quick use a dictophone to record as she pisses n moans dizz Aeromancy i warn, your bitch getting a' golden shower i devour dat flower n leave er' pussy scolded n sour After we scour, we gonna get ludic n play as i puncuate Kerflooey that taint and send her off to you for valentines day Edited by daydizzle89 - 12 February 2016 at 3:23pm

Neek Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3866 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Neek Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 12 February 2016 at 4:40pm
	this shit was hilarious as fuck. very well played. only usage I was meh on was your rickshaw play, but overal I felt this was a nice cohesive unit. the ending had perfect timing. well done broham!!
	#Bananas

Venomonology Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 23 October 2012 Status: Offline Points: 674 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-2-0 Form: WWLWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Venomonology Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 12 February 2016 at 4:51pm
	this made me laugh out loud a few times man, very humourous approach that worked quite well. I liked the aeromancy / golden shower play, that was pretty slick. only thing that seemed off to me was it seemed like there was a line missing, or maybe one too many in the rhinoceros / vociferous / phosphorous part that threw me off the flow a bit, but it picked up again after that. nice one.