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Sinbolik 
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 Topic: Werrd vs SinPosted: 09 February 2006 at 9:50am |
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5-6 barz |
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Sinbolik
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Posted: 09 February 2006 at 10:08am |
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Key�d I "FRACTURE MICS DAILY BRO"... Werrd ain't going ta be "RAPPIN TIGHT AFTER THIS YO |
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Werrd
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Posted: 09 February 2006 at 7:39pm |
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Personal Attack...
I notice my chance to advance so I take my stance, got you trippin' in a trance now you trippin on your pants, not even noticin' i'm focusin', Mystical like hocus pocus when i'm roast-in them, but most of them will notice how much of a bitch-you were,, cross me and you'll end up like your fuckin' signature, she's a bitch-for-sure and knows nothing about wins, ya name's sinbolik, then I'm commitin seven sins, I needed to teach you that I can beat you, seat you and eat you, you're weak too, that means that I'm comin' at your "E.L.I.T.E"Crew Not enough bars....one more line should do it, "So ill you'll drop dead" fucked with the wrong hip-hop head and got-fed. |
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Sinbolik
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Posted: 10 February 2006 at 12:35pm |
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hey uppin for votes
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Posted: 13 February 2006 at 7:06am |
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common guys, uppin' for votes here! its been up for days! I know its a lame battle and its short as fuck, but atleast post an opinion so they can close it! |
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Posted: 13 February 2006 at 7:45am |
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***I Know this is a crew vote, so throw it if you like, but no one else is voting. take it or leave it.*** Meh... Sin ... ive seen those punches literally a million times before. there VERY played. its a very forced 'Gold Mic' rap style. flow was cool, didnt like the colours not really needed. not a single personal for him, not even a nameplay, a site mention, anything like that. although you say its keyed, it seems pre written. Werrd ... apart from the flow, there wasnt a purposful punch in this whole piece. seven sins thing was irellevant, nice few personals, but they never really connected cos' the setups were poor. first two bars were utter bullshit, and really lowered the standard of the verse. ummm ... im gonna give this to SIN ... but only because she had punches, if werrd had just upped his punche/vocab and delivery, he woulda took this. Sin GMV *** Werrd, im STILL waitin' for you to drop in our battle.*** |
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 I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Sinbolik
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Posted: 14 February 2006 at 1:14pm |
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1-0 uppin for votes
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Posted: 14 February 2006 at 6:26pm |
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Sin, i know it looks preety and
all but ya shits real hard to read in all them colors lol. ya had an ok
verse but like nep said your punches are more played than frank lampard
is at chelsea (only uk people will understand), ya bars are farrr too
long and i lost flow with the verse so many times.
Werrd, after seeing sins verse you really could of won this but you came with nothing strong atall the only good thing about the verse was the flow and structure, there were so many irrelavant lines throughout the verse and i dint see one hard punch. Vote - sin gets my vote, as he just had the best out of two bad verses |
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Posted: 14 February 2006 at 10:17pm |
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woot, comin' for a K O hahaha
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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 11:35am |
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lol u jokester....im gonna get a phat knock-out to the colour co-ordinated sinner hahahahahahahahahahaha skeet skeet skeet all over your colourful chin hahahaha
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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 12:27pm |
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Vote - Sin...used her style to greater effect, problem with sayin to her "you have no personals" is that there are no personals to use against this guy!! I thought she did a decent job, decent multis and simple disses but she did diss on him...and basically was just sayin "ur a noob, i can win with this coz of my structure", which is basically the story of the battle...sin cud do with developin some other elements like similes and metaphors but to be fair to her I did tell her to try to diss people in other ways, and this is certainly another way to do it, didnt work that effectively but it was enough to take this battle...and thats all you can do in the end...werrd showed potential, quite liked his approach to the rhyme and the sin line was clever tho it didnt come off very well, just needs to elevate a little bit more and if he looks around the site and heeds advice then he should get much better, nothin much else to say about that, just experience really
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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 12:40pm |
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3 - 0 ko closed sin wins |
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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 12:44pm |
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I know I've seen those lines somewhere. The first two really sound familiar! Damn Sin...Are You A... ?Biter?
(Innocent Till Proven Guilty) |
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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 12:50pm |
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kinda why i didnt close this ... because i was looking for them too ... but i cant find anything
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 1:09pm |
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i also recognise them, i think i made that clear in my vote, but i ALSO can find them, also doesnt seem like sins style, way above her level, and looks like they came from GM.
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 1:11pm |
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Nice, if my wack verse pulls through im gonna laugh...and then have to open another battle with this biter
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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 1:18pm |
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doubtful she'll be gone
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