Open Mic: Why you mention me?

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   Why you mention me?
Stalin a problem known for endin things
Why you mention me?
in your mouth til shots are done, your bodys numb, im in dentistry
So why you mention me?
Attempts were weak, your pedigree dont wanna be in the pit, we're clenchin teeth
So why did you mention me?
If you a rival, its suicidal, God, give him an extension please

Ill X you, regain my balance to fuck a slip up
I respect Dayz more than you.. and i seen enough of sick fucks
I gave you props on your latest drop, whats happened now?
Its an icec road thatll leave you crashing down
Im twice as cold, do like your told, consider backing out
You couldnt hold court or swing for a win playin the masters though
Labeled a legend, vet status, i wear it proud
You been a hater, dont need a ventilator to air this clown
You dissed ill whod be lyrically merkin you
You aint got the physical fortitude, but you dissin a vet who was literally endorsing you
You won 14, you lost 33. You excel at getting tossed a defeat
But you startin with me, might as well be barkin at Neek!
Don't know why you decided to disrespect me youngn
Ive acheived more, than you could plead for, theres no respect in frontin
You probably a shame now, you gotta be placed down
Look in the mirror, you a crooked dispair, i aint even let the fangs out
Go after someone that your skills favor so you have a win you will savior
Not a legend or veteran that have you fallin back like a Bills player

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Stalin Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2599 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Stalin Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Why you mention me? Posted: 10 January 2023 at 2:42am
	Why you mention me? Stalin a problem known for endin things Why you mention me? in your mouth til shots are done, your bodys numb, im in dentistry So why you mention me? Attempts were weak, your pedigree dont wanna be in the pit, we're clenchin teeth So why did you mention me? If you a rival, its suicidal, God, give him an extension please Ill X you, regain my balance to fuck a slip up I respect Dayz more than you.. and i seen enough of sick fucks I gave you props on your latest drop, whats happened now? Its an icec road thatll leave you crashing down Im twice as cold, do like your told, consider backing out You couldnt hold court or swing for a win playin the masters though Labeled a legend, vet status, i wear it proud You been a hater, dont need a ventilator to air this clown You dissed ill whod be lyrically merkin you You aint got the physical fortitude, but you dissin a vet who was literally endorsing you You won 14, you lost 33. You excel at getting tossed a defeat But you startin with me, might as well be barkin at Neek! Don't know why you decided to disrespect me youngn Ive acheived more, than you could plead for, theres no respect in frontin You probably a shame now, you gotta be placed down Look in the mirror, you a crooked dispair, i aint even let the fangs out Go after someone that your skills favor so you have a win you will savior Not a legend or veteran that have you fallin back like a Bills player
	+Sick-Witted+

Slip Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 04 June 2013 Location: St Johns. N.L. Status: Offline Points: 1612 Crew: Alter Egos Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 14-33-0 Form: LLLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Slip Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 10 January 2023 at 3:36am
	I see how your so proud this of place, your biggest accomplishment Wearing it on your chest like a badge got your wife left in astonishment a legend in her eyes since you picked her off the street Stalin loves saving life’s homeless bitches gotta eat A nice fixer upper, putting lipstick on a pig This dipshit thinks his lyrics really made a dig You didn’t even scratch the surface I mentioned you for a reason But this worthless trash you coming back with stop me from believin That Stalin the type of lyricist that could write something actually worth reading I poked the bear but he’s dead and gone a clone of his former self a joke compared to his younger years I can tell by his mental health The way he struggles to string his words together with a rhythm The way it stings to know I’m right so much clever when I’m spittin The way I bring the facts to light and keep on givin generous Emcee these punches on a mission Fucking open hand slap this bitch into submission Have’ em tappin on the mat in the fetal position So keep them fangs tucked before I snap em and crack em And make you prove them dentistry skills while you re attach’em Edited by Slip - 10 January 2023 at 4:07am
	See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people

JBrenn Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3778 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote JBrenn Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 10 January 2023 at 8:16pm
	If the whole opener is a set up to what i think.... Dope lines... concepts are original and you added nice personals.... overall decent drop Stalin...


Slip Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 04 June 2013 Location: St Johns. N.L. Status: Offline Points: 1612 Crew: Alter Egos Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 14-33-0 Form: LLLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Slip Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 13 January 2023 at 4:52am
	Well Stalin I think your a little rusty I expected more of an impact and more creative words you used the word you or your almost 30 times in this verse maybe try to switch it up with some more descriptive word choice
	See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people