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    Posted: 20 January 2012 at 3:24pm
Is anybody willing to help me a lil on wordplay? I've got my flow down but I could definitely use more complexity. I've only incorporated similes in my recent drops ( I get the idea with metaphor to but, eh, never got around to it ). I know if I get this shit down Imma shoen' tho. I read the tut's but It's still a lil vague, but I learn quick if I practice it.
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In wait for the More expierienced member's offers to help, I could possibly
lend whut I've gotten learned thus far. But, also...

I just got done reading though a Orion-Vs-Senor Perfecto battle, which
was for unlimited lines, and went for more than one round.
There's some really excellent examples of wordplay in that battle.
And alot of them, too... formulated in various ways- so, it's easy
to get a good idea forming, in the process of viewing that battle over.
Some of the plays there are pretty complex, and good examples.

I hope that helps some, and yeah... hit me up at your own discretion.

Cheers.
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Damn, that O and Perfecto match was a fucking classic, Good point, Mad.
 
holy shit @ O's line : I'll never pay for any of this like I'm shoppin' wit Spics

Also, peep any of CHAIN's drops. He's gotta be the best with the wordplay and multis working together and he can do that shit for a whole page. 2smooth is another dude who's good with it, he doesn't post that much anymore, but you can hit them archives up.

 
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Metaphor > Wordplay...in the long term at least
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but its always good to have both
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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thanks for this, I found some good practice exercises so i'm good now
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