Battles under Review: xXTormentXx V.s MurdaPack

4-5 bars....

This bitch killing me? I highly don�t  tink so this �kid-a-liar�

He breathing air not for long like car wheel punctured he need to re-tyre ( retire )

Take chunks & Pick at the left over from your  heart-dermal//

Lift ya neck up in the air and like a vampire tair apart-your-Adam-apple//

This bitch thinks he corsin torment cause he rolling with asylum

Faced shocked like a shag doll , leavin clips on ya mind and similar movie to his wisdom

You Ent heavy bruv you claming you done after eatin a few weak lyrics

your punches are weightless like a cue jumper to a anorexic clinic

I spawn punches & smack with fists, leave you unprotected like my dick to ya Vagina

I be warn-ing & still he lets me land hits , you carnt break the barricade but you tryin�ta

My post has gone all gay...But he bit the line i quoted from here

http://www.homegrowninc.net/forum/showthread.php?t=4083

Punchlines

Punchlines are probably the most important thing in a battle, the majority of punchlines involve some sort of wordplay. Think of a concept to start with.

eg

Concept = Weightless Emcee

ya not heavy bruv thats why you cant get next to these lyrics
emcee's are weightless like a cue jumper in the anerexia clinic <<< that being the puchline

A cue jumper would be wait less because they wouldnt have waited because they jumped the cue and they would be weightless because they were anarexic hence them being in an anorexia clinic.

What a dumbass, you dont bite from a tutorial...we all know kay still reads them to elevate his punchline game...j/k

damn, u got good eyes, I cant tell the difference between that and the rest of the verse...is pretty dumb to bite a tut punch, for 1, everyone reads them...2, there usually just forceds to show a relation instead of well thought out

lmfao@ this......i knew this kid was trouble....glad i didn't waste a verse smh......

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