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I-kontinue
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Topic: Yamanray Vs. I-kontinuePosted: 03 September 2006 at 9:05am |
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Default Rules... 16 lines, I spit 1st, unless you decide to do otherwise... Check
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Yamanray
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Joined: 18 July 2006 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 108 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-5-0 Form: LWLWLW |
Posted: 03 September 2006 at 11:02am |
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aiight drop whenever
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Yamanray
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Posted: 06 September 2006 at 10:42pm |
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U gon drop soon???
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I-kontinue
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The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 06 September 2006 at 10:46pm |
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Ehh, yeah.. I'll write somethin' now...
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I-kontinue
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The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 07 September 2006 at 12:06am |
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Check It...
...The way I block his threats is a sin I'm like a farmer: Choppin' Yam, and end up gettin' the win* Ain't sweattin' ya, KID. How tha fuck ya claim you a man? I bet you'll never spit and see men 'less you play witchya hands Erasin' ya plans; Don't smoke, but blazin' a fag You'll never see a Play, Boy like you evaded the Mag (magazine) Ya name ripped in half... Done a simple key and I've beaten him... Damn, ya style is JUST like the game... played for the "Easy Win" (haa) I've teased the kid wit' hits, and I've ended his hope You're a man? You stay bitchin'. Know what his gender is, nope? (has his gender private) Ya writtens is played, so ya shit won't hit in this fade I ain�t even have to �check in�, �cus this whippin� is PAID� I�ll kill him wit� plays; but I have a question, please� How's ya last name means �vine�, but you got no seeds?** I drop more keys, and isn't it ironic you�d say?� How it�s the SAME week, but now The Vet is killin� The Ray?*** (haaa) * "bread winner" = the person that brings home the most money to his/her family ** Name: Raymon Parras. Parras means "vine" in Spanish... grapes have seeds *** (If you don't get this, then die... really...) Steve Erwin, a famous vet, if not the most famous, got killed by a sting ray this week |
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dalinquent
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Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL |
Posted: 07 September 2006 at 12:16am |
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nice drop...uppin fa ray so i can be the first voter...yay!
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Yamanray
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Joined: 18 July 2006 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 108 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-5-0 Form: LWLWLW |
Posted: 07 September 2006 at 12:42am |
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Aiight my turn i'mma stay true to kid, watch what i do to kid/
I-Kontinue step up, i'll leave em wit a new fade like ludacris/ U right, i don't see playboys i get da real shit, dont stop like taxi cabs/ While u beatin ya meat to scotty naked, i'm gettin pussy like maxi pads/ Yo i think u da frail type, yo i think you a male dike/ I bet all the moderators get together and let I-Kon get it up da tailpipe/ U say game over? I know u shiverin, shocked now but it's gon get colder/ Pushin da rover, bitch i'm the one that let Lil Flip know, Game ain't over/ I'm sendin hits and u duckin quickly, u gotta be crazy for fuckin wit me/ Couldn't be sick wit HIV, why try me, when u know i'm givin u a 'L' like a D.M.V/ He says "nah you ain't seein' me" believe me i'm seein' u, keep wishin/ U couldn't see me, wit a scope, glasses, contact lenses and 20 20 vision/ I'm on a higher level than you, and it ain't no way u gettin past me/ Dumbass i bet it was your fault that the site wasn't workin last week/ Ya'll cats know i'll empty the ten clip on i-kon and end the friendship/ Ur verse was splendid, like ya avatar says "game over, I-Kontinue is ended/ His avatar says "game over" and lil flip made a song called "game over" 'L' stands for license and also loss so u should get the dmv part Lyrical assault was down like 2 days last week |
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dalinquent
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Posted: 07 September 2006 at 1:21am |
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Check It...
^^^game this isn't like you. this opener was horrible, lmao...
...The way I block his threats is a sin I'm like a farmer: Choppin' Yam, and end up gettin' the win* >nice opener...second line was kinda a stretch...based on what the reader wanna go with but since you a vet ill give it to you...lol
Ain't sweattin' ya, KID. How tha fuck ya claim you a man? I bet you'll never spit and see men 'less you play witchya hands >first lines a filler...second line was decent...wordplay was cool...
Erasin' ya plans; Don't smoke, but blazin' a fag You'll never see a Play, Boy like you evaded the Mag (magazine) >like this bar...playboy shit was decent
Ya name ripped in half... Done a simple key and I've beaten him... Damn, ya style is JUST like the game... played for the "Easy Win" (haa) >was really feeling this
I've teased the kid wit' hits, and I've ended his hope You're a man? You stay bitchin'. Know what his gender is, nope? (has his gender private) >not such a strong bar but it was decent
Ya writtens is played, so ya shit won't hit in this fade I ain�t even have to �check in�, �cus this whippin� is PAID� >i was feeling it
I�ll kill him wit� plays; but I have a question, please� How's ya last name means �vine�, but you got no seeds?** >wasn't feeling this one...i gave you "botd" the first time so i cant let this one go...
I drop more keys, and isn't it ironic you�d say?� How it�s the SAME week, but now The Vet is killin� The Ray?*** (haaa) >nice finisher Aiight my turn i'mma stay true to kid, watch what i do to kid/
I-Kontinue step up, i'll leave em wit a new fade like ludacris/ >nice try but the wording was off...since im feeling generous you can have it...nice bar U right, i don't see playboys i get da real shit, dont stop like taxi cabs/
While u beatin ya meat to scotty naked, i'm gettin pussy like maxi pads/ >nice concept...you need to work on wording your punches better...i had the same problem...seek help...
Yo i think u da frail type, yo i think you a male dike/ I bet all the moderators get together and let I-Kon get it up da tailpipe/ >sounds familar...I'm not gonna say you bite this bar but it sound like serious jones from fight klub...dont feel likelooking it up so fuck it...bar was spectacular, wording was off...
U say game over? I know u shiverin, shocked now but it's gon get colder/ Pushin da rover, bitch i'm the one that let Lil Flip know, Game ain't over/ >imo...you just diss yaself...saying game over would have been a nice punch
I'm sendin hits and u duckin quickly, u gotta be crazy for fuckin wit me/ Couldn't be sick wit HIV, why try me, when u know i'm givin u a 'L' like a D.M.V/ >man...that second line could have a killer, work on wording
He says "nah you ain't seein' me" believe me i'm seein' u, keep wishin/ U couldn't see me, wit a scope, glasses, contact lenses and 20 20 vision/ >now your at the point in which your trying to much
I'm on a higher level than you, and it ain't no way u gettin past me/ Dumbass i bet it was your fault that the site wasn't workin last week/ >this line made me laugh when i first read it...props...
Ya'll cats know i'll empty the ten clip on i-kon and end the friendship/ Ur verse was splendid, like ya avatar says "game over, I-Kontinue is ended/ >okay closer...nothing spectacular...
I think game came with the better verse. his punches were nice and hitting...Yamanray, you getting better i think...you are like me when i came here long...you got potential and you think alot...originality is there...but putting thoughts to words is a problem...i learned from trail and error but you can always ask for help...even me. Back to the vote...game wins because his verse was more consistent and coherrent...
Game gets my vote
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Yamanray
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Posted: 07 September 2006 at 1:37am |
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thanx dalinq, and thanx 4 the advise.
still uppin |
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2smooth
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Posted: 07 September 2006 at 1:06pm |
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serious jones vs. murda mook, i believe it was... and YES, it was bitten... peep it for yaselves, idk what y'all gon' do about it... I ain't even read the rest of ray's shit after that... write ya own shit you wack bitch... on another note, nice drop shav...
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dalinquent
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Posted: 07 September 2006 at 3:09pm |
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naw...i think it was serious jone vs cardi...cause he slayed cardi ass...sorry
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dalinquent
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Posted: 07 September 2006 at 3:12pm |
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for spamming i mean^^^^last time, i promise
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I-kontinue
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Posted: 08 September 2006 at 12:13am |
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Damn, I woulda neva guess that... So I guess he added those 3 personals to cover it up? Ya'll hit this thread up with the proof if ya'll find it...
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dalinquent
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Posted: 08 September 2006 at 12:30am |
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you might as well not worry about it...you'll never find fight klub lyrics on the net since they sell the DVD. they wont allow it cause the DVD wouldn't sell then...Might as well act like it didn't happen...and i dont think he bit the entire verse...just that line...the verse wasn't good enough to be bitten...lol...but yea...i dont think proof will be avalable
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Yamanray
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Posted: 08 September 2006 at 2:40am |
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I'll admit it guyz i bit the first line, Serious Jones says "i think he da frail type, i think he a male dike." I-Kon if u want u can take end it, take da win, whatever u wanna do i probably deserve it.
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dalinquent
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Posted: 08 September 2006 at 10:46am |
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honesty is the best policy
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I-kontinue
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Posted: 08 September 2006 at 4:52pm |
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I don't know...I'll leave this up to Scotty or hanGin. Youre definitely getting ban points for it though, but i don't know how many... Prolly the battle could go on, with that line being deleted by a mod/admin, and you receive ya ban points. I dont know. I can't trust any more of ya shit now though when I read it in the fields... Ima alwyas be suspicious, and I'd find it hard to vote for you in the future... Once a biter, always a biter.. what a mistake...
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Yamanray
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Posted: 08 September 2006 at 6:39pm |
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well just delete me from lyrical assault, really thats what i want u 2 do.
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dalinquent
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Posted: 08 September 2006 at 8:44pm |
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okay now your starting to sound like a bitch...it was okay earlier admitting your mistake but do you think there stupid...so you can just change ya name and create a new account...just shut up and let scotty do his job...
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Yamanray
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Posted: 08 September 2006 at 9:56pm |
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I SAID DELETE MY FUCKIN NAME BECUZ THIS ISN'T THE ONLY RAP SIT IN THE WORLD DUMBASS, SO CAN U GUYZ JUST DO IT PLEAZ.
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