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    Posted: 22 April 2013 at 1:34am


uhh 
i dont like you. and i dont think i ever will
see im steel willed, still high, like i steal pills, 
chemically ill, say im inbalanced- coz im outta wack
ice cold - hot headed.. mate i tout the facts
ya flows shit, are you flushing? someone spark a match..
kids a seven/seven bomber, the way you ruin tracks
your a let down to me n ya 'girl tho. its depressin 
tried to come hard.. an you barely managed 30 seconds.. 
ya weak. an embarresment. its pathetic
if that sounds 'more you'... THEN I BET YOU REGRET IT
im blessed wit execution, born to pen n flow 
yeah im cookin but kid.. i serve revenge cold
ban me? nah im too dope n youv been served
i ain hating. but im the kinda guy who burns herbs
i reserve my right to opinion. i dont like you, i never will
jus another wactive peep... punches like feather quills
are you the first rapper from the ghettos of chesterfield?
i tried to bite my tounge, did my best to chill
but my flows gushin.. you broke the dam wit ya little suttin
why you frontin. when you sound like you drive buses
im a live fucker, fuck let that fuckin shit slide?
nahhh.... ironic though coz it does seem that these kids ride

two hundred plus views? 

at least fifty was me needing a laugh...









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haha, good diss man... this was actually good cos the flow was sick!
 
kiki, you betta hit him back lol LOL
 
keep it up lol
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ta mate
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First off- Not any hard hitters (I hope you were just warming up), but a decent flow as iziah said, i'm not the kind of guy to come in to any diss (however random) and say 'ay yo, this was complete garbage' if it's not. 

But can I ask- 

1) Where's your audio? Just wondering. Cos i'm a guy that's very skilled with the text, and a very raw beginner at audio, I haven't even really got a mic.. Yet you come in here, not mentioning my text, but dissing my audio.. With a text Open. 

2) Why 'can't you stand me', when we've never even really interacted and you've never been man enough to put forward any distaste before? 

3) Who the fuck are you? Like, that's not as disrespectful as it sounds. I have no idea who you are.. I remember your name from a couple of threads, but like I said, we've never spoke, you've not really done much for the site, and I can only remember you from arguing with Cee earlier.. That's right, someone you ACTUALLY argued with, and you haven't mentioned him lol 

I'll come back at this. But I can't lie, this confused me man. I hope you haven't just heard my audio's, gone 'ah, this guy must be wack, I can win some friends if i diss him', without checking what I do to people on text. Cos that'd be a bit silly. 

Nice drop though man. It's all love innit.
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tbh you just pissed me off a little when you you said ban the cunt coz i argued with big game. and yes i have dropped audio, and will be dropping more. though more than a little slept on, and more than anything i was bored. and im a bit of a cunt.
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http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/hope_topic24609.html

my audio. on the same set up as you btw
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I meant as far as a diss. Like cos you were getting at my audio style/result, I would've expected you to have taken the piss in the same form. But it's whatever. It's nice to have someone go at me occasionally, keeps me interested. 

Listened to your link. Interesting. You have good presence on the mic, and the beat/chorus was dope to me, but the lyrics were way more simple than your text stuff, and like others said, it was a bit 'emo' for my liking, like, i'd have to be in a certain mood. But yeah, that's my feed on it anyway seeing as though you pointed me in the direction. 

Keep up.
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Good little starter diss, no knockout hits but it had some swagger to it. Your flow was bang on, I liked the overall feel of the diss. But prepare for war, Keeks can drop bombs in his text shit
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