Open Mic: "A home for this Garbage Pail Kid" |
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Exoduzt 
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 Topic: "A home for this Garbage Pail Kid"Posted: 11 April 2013 at 8:11pm |
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Fuck who's eva booin' me and thinks my lunacy has faded... You puny fleas are hated...I only rape white women now, in communities that's gated... The duzt has settled L.I's a full house you can read it & weep...I hope it's seepin' in deep... I'm throwin cards like Gambit no more preachin bout keepin the peace... I'm a creep in the streets reakin of trees makin all you bitches weak in tha knees... Who's speakin to me? Every time I spit I start tweekin' for free!... It's not hard to follow that I'm now apart of the darkest demons... and only time I hang my buds out to dry is during harvest season... not an insult cuz we still psycho's we're 2 sharks to weakling's... but I'm L.I now my heart has deepened...and turned into this hardened creature... That spits shards thru speakers and it's not hard to reach ya with my marksman features... Fuck pussies who think they spit flames, carpet breathers... I didn't mean to start this either I sharpen cleavers but my darts are meaner... The carcus eater. I could eat Nas alive and start fartin' ether!... Fuck wit L.I? I guess you haven't seen how my goons eat?... shit good luck against us space warrior moon priests!... So if you in the room leave. Cus we droppin acid and havin a shroom feast... Dooms day has arrived I'm ready like Rambo... stealthy with cammo and defanitly steady wit ammo!... I'm on your screen for good and there ain't no changing the channel... on point like arrows I'm mike myers mixed with kruger... holdin more weight than yokozuna and lex luger!... I'm duke nuke em with fangs ready to chew thru em holdin 2 bazookas!... but I'm still your average Joe puffin pcp through new hooka's!... Edited by Exoduzt - 11 April 2013 at 9:05pm |
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J504
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 8:27pm |
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Haha! This was just straight insanity. First off, love the layout of the bars and how you worked that. It was getting repetitious with all the people doing segmented short bars so I'm glad you came fresh. Second that moon priests line made me literally laugh out loud. You know we always on the same page with the references, loved the hanging buds out to dry play and Yoko and Lex old school WWF!
Last but not least, welcome home. The Garbage Pail kid belongs in a crew with Oscar The Grouch (Kay) lol Proud to have you on tho, real talk. |
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 8:45pm |
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You came out straight viscous with this one kiser! You ain't nothin to fuck with and that's the truth. Course I'm feeling the hang my buds out to dry bar, every line was just pin point through the entire thing.
'but I'm still your average Joe puffin pcp through new hooka's!...' Yess aha and the mans still trippin' with rhythm. Congrats on LI I'm proud of you dude. |
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:12pm |
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This was fire throughout Exo...
Fuck pussies who think they spit flames, carpet breathers... Absolutely died at that line... flow was on point and the jokes in this were funny all the same Keep up! Keep Dropping!
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Exoduzt
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:49pm |
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Thanks fella's appreciate all the feed...it's an honor to be a part of L.I
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:53pm |
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This whole piece was solid as fuck man, you're just playing with them on this.
Some obscure references and mad multi's, you know that's my shit! The duzt has settled L.I's a full house you can read it & weep...I hope it's seepin' in deep... I'm throwin cards like Gambit no more preachin bout keepin the peace. ^That was vicious man. Welcome to LI, you belong here dude.
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 10:00pm |
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That buds out to dry shitt was super clever man
Are you with LI now? Cool................Welcome It's not hard to follow that I'm now apart of the darkest demons... and only time I hang my buds out to dry is during harvest season... |
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Jams
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 10:01pm |
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#beastmode .... this was different than any piece i've seen here due to the drug reference and real street feel to it.... didnt have as much of that internet rapper feel, open mic's gettin loaded with nice drops right now
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 10:26pm |
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Fuck yes Exo, this was crazy, Jams and J5 are right this was fucking raw it had a real feel to it, not like the typical way an OM would be written nowadays on here. It was crazy throughout with some great lines, most of what I wanted to say has already been said, I cant say much but know that this was absolute insanity, you belong with that group of beasts in LI, you lot are killing it on the OMs today daaamn
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Exoduzt
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 11:32pm |
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good looks fellas im loving the feed on this
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 11:44pm |
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good rhyme scheme, vicious in parts
some punches and wordplay too, read well |
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Exoduzt
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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 2:56pm |
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Thanks for the feed on this fella's...L.I!!!!!
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BIG GAME
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 12:15pm |
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Are you serious with this LI shit?
Just last week you and Smooth were starting your own crew and now you are LI? What about your boy Smooth? Cats just crack me up on here. You looking really stupid hollering that LI shit so soon! anyways The stretched bar are way unprofessional looking. There was some good flow here and some nice references but ehhh I just can't look past the LI thing. SMH |
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Exoduzt
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:13pm |
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before you open your mouth about shit you dont know about why dont you go ask smooth what happened...you might find what he says quite interesting...
what you exhausted everyone with long paragraph shit talking and I'm the only one left? haha... get a life loser...I'm not feeding to your ego...so just stay outta my threads with your multiple personalities and all your internet gangsta shit...your a faggot and you suck at life.... stay outta my shit and I'll stay outta yours...cus I dont play these little dickless games you do starting shit with everyone to get my rocks off... and that album cover? seriously kiddo....eat a sandwich and lift some weights...you puny computer tough guy lol |
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:36pm |
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Haha first off, Acid your pic and sig are so colorful lol I'm diggin it!
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:49pm |
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Second..
This is terrible feed, actually it's borderline trolling. Now, If you truly want to get to the root of the whole crew thing then I'll get personal.. you gave us a bad rep from day 1. Even associating with you as a possible future member rubbed our crew feel the wrong way when you were exposed. I'll also take my credit mind you, my past came back to haunt me and added to the corruption. But let it be known that exo and I are cool, he's my boy on here and he knows that. We will be collabing like always (stay up). We decided to drop the whole crew idea because ultimately everything was just too much for us to handle. Also Ex deserves to be in LI and the homie SHOULD be proud, it's not a secret that them and HG make up the pinnacle of most of the talented writers on here. Stop looking like a hater, man.. it's not flattering. |
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Exoduzt
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:57pm |
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Classy way to put that smooth...big ups to you my dude...
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Exoduzt
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:33pm |
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BG YOUR looking real stupid for this..
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BIG GAME
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 8:56pm |
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no not really,
and I aint going to start a big issue about this because that wasn't my intentions. But you still looking awful silly hollering this LI shit so soon. @Smooth, don't you dare claim I tarnished y'als rep. I would have been the greatest addition to y'alls whack ass crew. @Ex if I suck so bad why did you message me to ask me if I would be in your crew in the first place? People usually begging to get in a crew here, you took it upon yourself as crew leader to ask me ... I must not for real suck huh? I know what your problem was with your crew, you lightly let Smooth off for the dirt that came back on him from the past. The dirt that the AOB boys made us aware of. Ask me that's weak personally, because Smooths spose to be your hommie, he was down with you from rip. But you just throw him to the damn side cos you too worried about your punk ass reputation. SMH |
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Exoduzt
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 9:00pm |
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nanna nanna boo boo stick ya head in doo doo...
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