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"i guess you hear big words and assume disrespect"
 
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i'd like to hear it as an audio its got potential just that i may read it a different way to you say it so it'd be cool to hear what its meant to sound like nice vocab though!
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Originally posted by SageOne SageOne wrote:

"i guess you hear big words and assume disrespect"
 
lmfao
 
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Originally posted by G-Pfeif G-Pfeif wrote:

1.  this is a Spit for Rank section... I am a spit for rank judge... therefor, what i say goes...  if you want feed... drop this in the open mic section...  you dropped it here, so you get a rank we feel you deserve...

2.  stop thinkin that you are doin somethin so unique and different... YOURE WRITING FREE VERSE WITH A FEW INTERNAL RHYMES!!!  that shit aint hard to do cousin...  what IS hard to do is using multi's and end-rhyme, WHILE using internal rhyme, enjambment, etc. to make your verse even more complex with flow and shit (those are literary terms, so if you dont understand.. educate urself).

so lose the ego... and take some advice from people who know what the fuck they are talkin about...

funny thing is.. i just told you what your style is... and you didnt understand it.. i guess you hear big words and assume disrespect... sorry
 
Lol Tisk
 
a) what IS hard to do is using multi's and end-rhyme, WHILE using internal rhyme, enjambment, etc. to make your verse even more complex with flow and shit
 
Its hard for you to do. You've only seen 2 of my topical drops and these are old pieces.
 
its nice to see you get all worked up over the internet. very funny. I knew wuh my styles was before you ever said anything about it homie.  Who the fuck you think u are?. Lol Shits funny. Post some of your shit. And please. I hope its not going to be disappointing.
 
I can give a shit what judge you are. seriously. I dont rap for a liveing. I play football. So all this site battling shit?. is just for fun. So i really can careless about all this shit. I just drop. And say wuh i feel. And when i see people getting heated. I Laugh.
 
Like Now. Buh Bye now.
 
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I read your stuff. And if you posted it on a different site. i doubt it would make pro. Your 21 im 15. And You think you know more?. or wuh?. Wuh do u think?. My sturcture is fucke dup on my pc. Buh on this school pc. My shit is just fine. So idk see why ou buggin?. lol Buh i really dont care.

You got anything else to say?. Please say it. or dont. Buh if you dont. Make it something that want make me laugh. Please dont. Becaus eif you do. Im not going to respone. Clap
 
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Dude, whats your problem?

This is spit for rank. You drop a verse and we critique it so that you know what to look for. I dont see why your getting heated over critique. And dont say that GP is the one talkin shit, cuz all i see are your replys. Jus be cool and drop something more recent next month. Nuff said.
 
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lmao @ ''i don't rap for a living ... i play football.''     

dude ur 15... u dont do shit 'for a living'   lol

and neither do i...i play college football and am educated... so take some advice from someone who knows what the fuck he is talkin about ... and lose the ego
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