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Calibra 
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 Topic: Broken Language 2010Posted: 13 February 2010 at 3:49pm |
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Following on from my old Broken Language piece. Didn't wanna over do it though... The masterbater, tax evader Wack rap procrastonator The watching porn, late night ejaculator Animator, steal the office laminator Apple hater, Mac invader Smashin' Chain collaborator Peepin' Tom salivator I'm in danger wrestlin' an alligator New Era's violent member Silence ender, child vendor The mic pretender... The bleeping while ya rhymin' censor The space and time inventor Mind extender, line condensor Name used in vain, Jesus Christ repenter Written 187, repeated crime offender The Al Pacino fighter, emo smiter The cliche "De Niro in Casino" rhymer Ego sniper, Joe Budden killin' Premo Cypher "I can record my favourite shows" advert Tevo hyper Till smashin' robber, someone being killed tragic stopper On the fence Reasonable Doubt and Illmatic copper The still static shocker, pill addict popper The "Never should've redone an ill classic" dropper! |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 13 February 2010 at 3:51pm |
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dope
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 I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Cuba
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Posted: 13 February 2010 at 4:05pm |
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"I can record my favourite shows" advert Tevo hyper LMAO!! Not sure about the masturbation material, but everything else was hot
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Calibra
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Posted: 13 February 2010 at 4:09pm |
Lol thought you'd have got by now that it's meant to be a little weird haha
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Posted: 13 February 2010 at 6:31pm |
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Again, brilliant... some bits more than others, but generally outstanding... Apple hater Mac invader, De Niro in Casino, and a perfect closer... magnificent
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Calibra
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Posted: 13 February 2010 at 7:01pm |
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Thanks a lot O!
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Posted: 13 February 2010 at 8:08pm |
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nice drop cal...shit was on point
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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 12:53am |
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Twas ok
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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 10:05am |
well i be damned, positive feed from you??? oh shit, maybe god really did split the red sea for moses Cal, when the type that would hate on a baby taking its first steps like "so what , i walk everyday' calls your shit magnificent u know u dropped heat the piece had mad quotables, even the chain line, lol  |
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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 3:29pm |
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hot throughout
not sure about that late night thing hah.. finisher was dope.! |
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golden#.
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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 7:09pm |
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Chain, just get off his dick already. There's no need for that shit here. You might think O's an asshole but people like you just make it worse, getting him started with no provocation.
Cal, this was the shit.
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Insert something rappy here
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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 7:54pm |
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calm down, i was giving him props
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Posted: 17 February 2010 at 7:18pm |
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Dope the whole way through... The closer was the icing on the cake.
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Posted: 18 February 2010 at 12:23am |
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Till smashin' robber, someone being killed tragic stopper
On the fence Reasonable Doubt and Illmatic copper
The still static shocker, pill addict popper
The "Never should've redone an ill classic" dropper!
Hahaa, that shit was pretty ill man. I was pretty much laughing the whole time through this verse. Good job!
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The original comeback kid
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Posted: 18 February 2010 at 12:38am |
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The start of the piece left me thinkin' WTF..
Then it went all dope on me afterwards
Consistent piece, very sick Calizzle..
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