Open Mic: - (Don't) Wanna Battle -

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Yo...
Some folks don't like me...
cause I tell it like it is...
They say I'm an asshole...
They say I'm unruly
Just recognize what it is..
The truth..
Sincerely..
from yours truly...
ha-ha-ha-ha-ha!!!
Pysche.

You already know...

suck my dick...
I'm a shark

-hook
You all came here to fight, right?
So What happened to Fight Night?
Made sure you got some feed, right?
But who came here just to be nice?
-repeat it.

Why you postin' opens steady hopin' for some feedback
Askin' for a toke but then don't wanna pass the weed back
SGC is bitin' lines and hopes that we don't see that
He's actin' real Conceited like a heathen on a B-track
Rusty at the game, get burnt tryin' to get ya heat back 
X-O Duzt's Ecstacy-  he pleads ta get his E back
Punches in his opens  thrown so you'll know that he's jacked -
So when I decide to hit the Trail, I'll make sure he won't be back
Perfect?-no...yo man you the worst of all
a vet here for years and now no verse at all?
Talked shit in your callout -now I burst your style 
Thought you'd be versatile and not just versed in smiles  
Leave me cursin' while thumbin' missing person files 
sayin' adios battle! after his first in a while
Site piled with the duckers, these motherfuckers are hype
Talkin' shit in their Opens -just not in a fight
-hook
You all came here to fight, right?
So What happened to Fight Night?
Made sure you got some feed, right?
But who came here just to be nice?
-repeat it.
An Icon don't wanna text ya when a records on the line
but when it's time for talking shit, he'll put together rhymes 
Who the fuck would duck their callout tucked with a feathered spine?
You won't ever see me do that shit, man I put together mines 
Say whatevers on my mind,  I'm  just keystylin' it-
While you dip for 3 weeks compilin' lists
It takes you awhile to spit, You a pile-a-shit,
Wait a second..you hear that?...yea- a silent bitch   
Eyes spark with a violent twitch-then I'm smilin' kid
I surround you with flow, you know what an island is?
Just kidding man, I really ain't into that violence shit
but stealing rhymin' spits? so that's what freestylin' is?
Man, you wild as shit! I'll tell  Lloyd Banks you're back!
Cause I know ya climbed high to the ranks you're at 
Just hope that nobody shanks your back for your white gangster act.
You been bad...
so the truth spanks your ass
-hook
You all came here to fight, right?
So What happened to Fight Night?
Made sure you got some feed, right?
But who came here just to be nice?
-repeat it.

Go shawty 
It's your birthday 
We gon' party like it's yo birthday 
We gon' sip Bacardi like it's your birthday 
....ugh!!!
Shout-out time!
Yea, that was tight, right, SGC?
When I'm freestylin'...
that shit just comes naturally 
kna' what I'm sayin? 
That's how we do.
Goons wif shottys!
Reppin', dude!

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J504 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote J504 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: - (Don't) Wanna Battle - Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:02am
	http://www.shadowville.com/125/genres/rnb-beats/thug-romance Yo... Some folks don't like me... cause I tell it like it is... They say I'm an asshole... They say I'm unruly Just recognize what it is.. The truth.. Sincerely.. from yours truly... ha-ha-ha-ha-ha!!! Pysche. You already know... suck my dick... I'm a shark -hook You all came here to fight, right? So What happened to Fight Night? Made sure you got some feed, right? But who came here just to be nice? -repeat it. Why you postin' opens steady hopin' for some feedback Askin' for a toke but then don't wanna pass the weed back SGC is bitin' lines and hopes that we don't see that He's actin' real Conceited like a heathen on a B-track Rusty at the game, get burnt tryin' to get ya heat back X-O Duzt's Ecstacy- he pleads ta get his E back Punches in his opens thrown so you'll know that he's jacked - So when I decide to hit the Trail, I'll make sure he won't be back Perfect?-no...yo man you the worst of all a vet here for years and now no verse at all? Talked shit in your callout -now I burst your style Thought you'd be versatile and not just versed in smiles Leave me cursin' while thumbin' missing person files sayin' adios battle! after his first in a while Site piled with the duckers, these motherfuckers are hype Talkin' shit in their Opens -just not in a fight -hook You all came here to fight, right? So What happened to Fight Night? Made sure you got some feed, right? But who came here just to be nice? -repeat it. An Icon don't wanna text ya when a records on the line but when it's time for talking shit, he'll put together rhymes Who the fuck would duck their callout tucked with a feathered spine? You won't ever see me do that shit, man I put together mines Say whatevers on my mind, I'm just keystylin' it- While you dip for 3 weeks compilin' lists It takes you awhile to spit, You a pile-a-shit, Wait a second..you hear that?...yea- a silent bitch Eyes spark with a violent twitch-then I'm smilin' kid I surround you with flow, you know what an island is? Just kidding man, I really ain't into that violence shit but stealing rhymin' spits? so that's what freestylin' is? Man, you wild as shit! I'll tell Lloyd Banks you're back! Cause I know ya climbed high to the ranks you're at Just hope that nobody shanks your back for your white gangster act. You been bad... so the truth spanks your ass -hook You all came here to fight, right? So What happened to Fight Night? Made sure you got some feed, right? But who came here just to be nice? -repeat it. Go shawty It's your birthday We gon' party like it's yo birthday We gon' sip Bacardi like it's your birthday ....ugh!!! Shout-out time! Yea, that was tight, right, SGC? When I'm freestylin'... that shit just comes naturally kna' what I'm sayin? That's how we do. Goons wif shottys! Reppin', dude!

CHAIN Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote CHAIN Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 10 April 2011 at 2:36pm
	Talked shit in your callout -now I burst your style Thought you'd be versatile and not just versed in smiles Leave me cursin' while thumbin' missing person files sayin' adios battle! after his first in a while gutter ...he deserved that
	+Sick-Witted+

BiggStankDogg Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran Joined: 22 May 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 1833 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #7 Stats: 35-8-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote BiggStankDogg Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 10 April 2011 at 3:01pm
	Versed. In. Smiles. adios battle Surround you with flow/island My God, dude. Good shit. Versatile/versed in smiles killed it.
	*Fear the Bow of the Silent Archer*

-Que- Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 22 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 2745 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-4-1 Form: WWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote -Que- Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 10 April 2011 at 5:30pm
	LOL!!! Shit was some clean hits.....I was crackin up thru the whole thing lol!!


Point Blank Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Point Blank Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 10 April 2011 at 9:33pm
	I liked this, I don't really enjoy hooks in verses like this especially when they are only Open Mics, but the content and digs themselves were real nice and this came out as a pretty good diss. Solid drop man keep it up

Lax Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 03 January 2011 Status: Offline Points: 181 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L	Post Options Post Reply Quote Lax Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 11 April 2011 at 3:15pm
	Whoa whoa whoa. This is uber dope. Lines are wow, flow on period, dope dope dope. One flaw is the hook :/ Edited by Lax - 11 April 2011 at 3:16pm

Manc Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Manc Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:16pm
	HAHAHA!! Oh shoot! Murdered well and truly. A comedic piece from the get. The bit CHAIN quoted was explosive, Perfectjoke got his throat slit